Month: November 2018

Writing Prompt: Ethereal

Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!

Special RulesFor this week’s Prompt, you must write about the Topic without using the actual word. Give the impression of ‘Ethereal’ by using synonyms and exposition to paint the picture of something ethereal.

Prompt: Ethereal

The eilfeyn eyed him carefully. Its antlered head raised high with regal splendor, pride emanating from the beast. Its white skin shined vibrantly in the darkness of the wood, appearing heavenly amidst the shadows. Fangdarr waited as the marvelously refined creature stepped toward him, undaunted, its luminous form glowing bright.

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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Defiance

Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.

The large half-orc towered above the dwarves that had collected to witness the unusual guest. Stares of fear and distrust could be seen on every face, giving evidence to the dwarven stubbornness and fear of the unknown. Bitrayuul did not miss their gazes, but paid them no mind—too enthralled by the dazzling city before him.

As they continued their walk forward—with more than a few curious dwarves trailing—an old dwarf approached. His beard nearly withered all to gray, yet his head still held life, sprouting brown in contrast as it braided into the dullness of his beard.

“Commander Tormag, ye return!” the elderly dwarf spoke in harsh voice, proving his age. Despite the youth gone from his body, the dwarf carried himself with the composure of a seasoned veteran filled to the brim with experience that commanded respect.

“Senator Theiran, a welcome sight! Glad t’ see yer stones yet t’ break,” Tormag replied with a genuine smile. The pair clasped arms in greeting and butt their heads together in respect, drawing a confused look from Bitrayuul. The half-orc could only assume such was customary, though this was the first encounter he had seen of his mentor and another dwarf of standing.

Theiran returned the commander’s smile in kind, truly relieved to see his old friend well. Once his eyes had shifted to the half-orc, the senator raised an eyebrow. “Friend o’ yers?”

“Aye, he’s mine. Taken as me own, sure as stones. I be seekin’ the council’s blessin’ in keepin’ ‘im by me side.”

Bitrayuul watched intently for a sign of disapproval on Theiran’s face. He knew his presence in the city, amongst the many dwarves who were not fond of sharing their culture, would not be a welcome one. Yet, no evidence against Tormag’s request came. Instead, the senator simply stared in silence for many moments at his old friend—gauging his own curiosities. “Ye certain?” Theiran asked.

Tormag did not hesitate in his reply, nodding with confirmation. “By Bothain’s Hammer.”

“I shall speak t’ the council of such request, else ye be met with quick rejection, don’t ye doubt.” With that, Theiran bowed low and clasped his friend’s arm once more before turning to take his leave. After taking a few steps, the old councilman turned his head back to the pair. “What’s the lad’s name, eh?”

Bitrayuul cut off his adoptive father’s words before they could form, replacing them with his own. “Bitrayuul. I am Bitrayuul.”

Theiran nodded, hiding any thought of discontent at the orcish name that certainly would stir distaste within the Council. As he faded from view, Tormag broke the tension rising in the air. “C’mon, Bit, let’s get somethin’ t’ eat. Me belly be screamin’.”


The dwarf behind the counter—and the other dozen patrons within—all rose as Bitrayuul followed behind Tormag into The Emberforge. Their eyes drilled deep into the half-orc, hands clutching the mining picks and hammers at their belts. This was the first time many a dwarf had seen a half-orc at all, and the first one had ever graced their homeland lacking shackles and wounds.

“Hal thild vant gar’thurim,” Tormag stated to the beady-eyed onlookers. Slowly, the furrowed brows of the dwarven patrons began to wane before each turned back to their mugs. Satisfied, Tormag approached the bar, though the innkeeper still employed his scowl as the half-orc struggled to wedge his large frame between the table and stool beneath.

“What be yer drink,” the disgruntled owner stated more than asked, never removing eyes from the young orc-blooded specimen. His gaze never faltered, even as Tormag offered his request for drink. With a grumble, the barkeep grunted and turned toward the store room to retrieve the commander’s brew.

Bitrayuul watched the dwarf stomp away, his stubby legs thundering against the stone floor with heavy boots. Facing his mentor, he whispered, “Will it always be like this? And what did you say to get the others to back down? Why did it not have the same effect on our host?”

Tormag waved the notions away, in no mood to answer such questions in the midst of those who would catch wind of unfavorable answers. Bitrayuul held back his disappointed frown as the innkeeper reappeared, a single mug in hand.

The mug was slid down the slick bar toward Tormag, stopping perfectly in front of the commander. Tormag peered down at the tankard, then back to the owner. With a smile on his face, he slid the brew slowly in front of Bitrayuul, never breaking eye contact with their host.

The dwarf behind the counter—and a few patrons who were paying attention—quickly turned to anger at the commander’s heinous act. Before they could act, Tormag waved his hand in the air nonchalantly and said, “Eh, ‘scuse me, barkeep? Seems I’ve misplaced mine, could ye fetch another? Many thanks, friend.”

Even as he finished the words, Bitrayuul nearly coughed from gasping so harshly. He could see the owner of the inn go red with anger, nearly fuming from his ears. Despite the fire burning in his stomach, the dwarf kicked open the store room door and stormed in before returning with a half-full small iron cup of water. Nearly all of the contents were ejected from the container as it slid viciously down the bar into Tormag’s waiting hand.

The innkeeper held a wide smirk on his face, proud of his petty act of defiance against the dwarf who had disrespected him. Though, the expression washed away as Tormag lifted the cup to his mouth and drank it all in a single, exaggerated gulp before slamming it to the counter in a flourish.

“Ahh, now that’s good! Barkeep, another!”

Weekly Progress Update

Back on track! This weekend’s progress was back to normal, completing a chapter in Book Two each day, for a total of 7,500 words. I’m at the estimated half-way point of the word count I’m expecting for the completion of the story, so we’re trucking along smoothly.

With this week being Thanksgiving, I was worried I would not be able to manage to get my normal output back on track (after the previous two weekends suffering about 50%). However, I was able to buckle down each morning and knock out the chapters.

I was surprised to learn that a few of my extended family members had picked up the book last week. It has some pretty explicit and mature content that they had not reached within the story yet, so we’ll see what their opinion is like once they hit that mark (and the end)!

Also, I’ve got some plans to work on some neat little bookmarks to put around town at local libraries and bookstores as a means of gathering interest. The weekend’s plans have gotten them a bit delayed, but hopefully I’ll have something to show in the next week or two.

That’s all for this week’s update, it’s been a long weekend full of family socialization and early morning intense writing sessions to get back on track. See you next week!

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Writing Prompt: Greed

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Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, you must write about the Topic without using the actual word, or any synonym of ‘Greed’. 

Prompt: Greed

Raz’ja cut the ear from the last dwarf he had slain, breathing heavily with exhaustion, before adding it to the rest in the overfilled sack. As the weary troll was about to take leave with his prize, another three dwarves stepped into view, weapons ready. Raz’ja grinned, turning toward them.


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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Tarabar

Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.

Bitrayuul’s mouth was agape as the marvelous gates came into view, so vast they could be seen even while still at the edge of the Lithe. His march slowed, taking in the grand spectacle, as Tormag continued without notice.

The doors stood the height of twenty dwarves, lined with sharpened spikes and intricate carvings alike. Tormag had often spoken of the artisanal craftsmanship of his kind, though the gates of Tarabar gave evidence to such claims. The enormous steel barrier protruded only just from the base of the mountain, with much more hidden from view.

Tormag finally caught on to his halted son. The dwarf couldn’t help but smile as he recognized the wondrous stare painted on the half-orc’s face as he admired the beauty of ancient dwarven ancestor’s efforts. The dwarf beckoned Bitrayuul forth, breaking the half-orc’s trance. In short time, they stood outside the gate.

“What be yer purp—” the guard started from his station along the top of the structure, a bucket of oil and torch at the ready. “Bothain’s beard . . . Commander Tormag?” he asked incredulously after recognizing the emblems on Tormag’s worn armor.

“Aye, lad. It’s been a bit, don’t ye doubt,” the absent commander replied. “I’ve been busy these past six years, bahaha!”

More dwarves poked their heads over the short wall lining the path atop the gate and shared their comrade’s excitement at the return of their commander. That is, until they noticed the half-orc adjacent their long-lost ally that had somehow escaped their view.

“Have ye been captured?” the first guard asked hesitantly while staring at Bitrayuul. Each of the guards held their vats of pitch more closely.

Tormag looked around curiously, as if some sort of orc or troll army lay in wait along the forest to prompt such a question. Finally, the dwarf caught on to their meaning and he let out a boisterous laugh. “Bahaha! No, lads. He’s with me.” His hand fell to Bitrayuul’s bicep in reassurance—both for the half-orc and the suspicious guards.

The dwarves manning the enormous gate spoke amongst themselves for a moment before two pairs each retreated within the small holes in the mountain on each side to operate the hidden mechanisms and open the large steel doors. Tormag and Bitrayuul both breathed a sigh of relief as the barrier was pulled apart, allowing them entry.

Bitrayuul was met with nervous stares and thick-fingered hands resting upon weapon hilts as he followed his mentor into the city. The spectacle caught him by surprise, for once the light piercing the opening at their backs closed behind them, the city returned to blackness, save for the lining of hundreds of illuminating torches and lanterns. Grateful for the orcish blood running through his veins, Bitrayuul’s eyes shifted, allowing his view to see much better in the dark. What he had assumed was a city in the abyss, lit by only the sparkle of a few embers lining its streets, had turned to a community of grand proportions.

Now that his eyes could better view the city ahead, the half-orc could only look on in wonder. What vastness hid beneath the strength of the mountain stone! The city stretched as far as his eyes could see—and beyond. Each building was carved from the stone, as if they had been built into the mountain all along, waiting for a sculptor to bring them to life. Small abodes, large edifices, and even great structures sporting crafted statues of dwarves of the past could be seen, only adding to Bitrayuul’s awe.

Tormag clasped a hand against his son’s arm once more. “Welcome to me home, Bit,” he said with a smile as wide as ever.

Weekly Progress Update

Grr, another slow week. I’ve been busy with the launch of Orcblood Legacy: Honor and have not put out my usual progress of three chapters per week. However, I was able to accomplish a lot and hope to be back on track at my usual output next week.

This week started the introduction of the new Skirmishes, which I’m really excited for. These are Blog posts that I plan to release weekly and follow the events of a few of the main characters in the Orcblood Legacy series. The events are going to be short-stories that would have been added to the book, and are the real events taking place within the timeline, save for not wanting the book to be 700 pages. 

Their purpose is meant to provide detailed experiences and encounters of events that took place during time skips that were not relevant to the story, but still provide a much deeper level of detail into the characters and the events that led them to where they are now.

Long term, I am considering releasing a collection of these Skirmishes as an additional item, most likely in eBook. Otherwise, I may consider releasing an Extended Version with them all worked in to the story. But first, let’s see how they fare and how many I produce to feel satisfied.

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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Trolls

Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.

Fangdarr rolled to his side, unable to get comfortable at his makeshift encampment. Sleep had not come easy since his departure from the only kin he had a few nights prior. The young orc had nearly returned to their home countless times, save for his stubborn pride rooting him in place. Instead, Fangdarr swallowed his tormenting emotions, tossing restlessly each night under the thick canopy of Lithe Forest.

A heavy sigh escaped him, staring at the small specs of whiteness poking through the screen of darkened leaves above. Fangdarr closed his eyes, denying the night their golden glow. As he rest, only the sound of breaths with the rise and fall of his chest and the slow sway of a breeze to be heard, the orc replayed the haunting visions of his mother’s headless corpse falling to the ground at the hand of her human tormentors. Even alone in the wood, the proud young warrior refused to express his true feelings.

His memories were interrupted at the sound of rustling bushes nearby. Fangdarr lifted his head curiously. Most likely an animal, he thought. Soon, the steady sounds of footsteps could be heard, though they were light against the soft ground. Were it not for the occasional twig and crunch of leaves, the orc would never have noticed. Fangdarr was already to his feet, Driktarr in hand and eyes scanning the darkness.

Breaking through the dense foliage came a pair of figures Fangdarr did not recognize. Their smiles widened beneath the long tusks protruding from their upper jaw, spread in wicked eagerness. Despite their sinister expressions, their body language showed no threat. Still, Fangdarr remained on the defensive.

“Eh, look what we got here, Gam’ja. It but a wee orc,” spoke the first in an unusual tone. Fangdarr had heard tell of their kind from Tormag, though had never experienced them himself. Now, he was finally able to confirm his adoptive father’s mimicked accent when speaking of them. Trolls.

“Haha, so it is, Bon’zo. He look a bit lost, ya tink?”

Fangdarr tightened his grip. Their vocal flair seemed contradictory to their intent. It was hard for the orc to understand due to the thickness of the troll’s accents. Nevertheless, he asked, “What you want?”

The intruders looked to one another, then laughed in a shrieking cackle that pierced through the quiet forest. Once their humor had ended, Fangdarr could see the pair of crude, sharpened-stone knives in each of their three-fingered hands. Their expressions only looked more severe as the encampment’s small fire cast flickering shadows over the contours of their stretched skin.

Fangdarr did not wait for his assailants to strike first. He raised his axe and howled with vigorous ferocity, charging for the pair. Gam’ja and Bon’zo returned his roar in kind and took to defensive stances. The orc closed the distance quickly, his powerful legs carrying him with long strides. As he approached, the trolls realized his abnormally large stature but gave no pause. They remained fixed on their opponent, daggers held in reverse grips in wait for their prey.

Just as he had done against the men that had slain his poor mother, Fangdarr planted his foot in the last moment and spun his greataxe in a wide horizontal sweep. Bon’zo managed to put up a dagger to block, but the weight of the orc’s weapon was too great when paired with Fangdarr’s impressive strength. Bon’zo’s eyes went wide in immense pain as Driktarr passed through his ineffective parry and continued to cut a deep gash into his dark-skinned torso. Blue blood sprayed from the wound, painting specks against the orc’s own blackened skin, before the troll fell to the ground.

With the momentum of his strike drained, Fangdarr could not hope to cleave through Gam’ja as well. Instead, the troll’s raised weapons intersected the axe as the creature’s head rushed forward quickly behind. Fangdarr stood a head taller, keeping his neck out of range, but Gam’ja’s tusks rent against the orc’s exposed arm and ripped through his skin. The orc growled at the pain, bearing his fangs. With the daggers still entrapping Driktarr, the troll continued to thrash his head, scraping and tearing more flesh on Fangdarr’s arm.

Fangdarr steeled his resolve and kicked Gam’ja’s knee, dropping him and his blades low. With his weapon free, the orc slammed it down on the troll’s skull just as Gam’ja’s wicked expression had looked up to him. Driktarr embedded straight into the forehead of its victim and deep into the troll’s brain. Fangdarr pushed the axe—and the corpse attached to it—to the ground. He planted a foot against the troll’s shoulder as he ripped his entrapped weapon free, spraying blood and flinging brain matter and bone fragments onto the grass below.

Before the orc could even breathe a sigh of relief, he felt a sharp pain in the side of his thigh. Upon looking down to inspect the source, he witnessed Bon’zo’s wide grin paired with another dagger whistling through the air toward his ribcage. Caught by surprise, Fangdarr couldn’t hope to parry the blow. Instead, he twisted his waist as quick as possible in an attempt to prevent the dagger from hitting its mark. The orc’s brow furrowed in pain as he was only partially successful, feeling the sharpened edge of Bon’zo’s dagger slicing across his skin.

Fangdarr threw a desperate but heavy punch into the troll’s face as he leapt back. Bon’zo stood a short distance away, one dagger still in hand. Fangdarr looked at his thigh and pulled the knife free before tossing it behind him. Now, he stood breathing heavily and bleeding from multiple wounds. His black blood glistened in the light of the fire as it slid down his muscled body. The orc looked to Bon’zo and his eyes grew large in shock.

He had not noticed it before, but the wound that he had landed on Bon’zo’s chest had completely healed. Are their weapons like mine? He could not know for sure. In any manner, his own wounds were starting to take their toll. As Fangdarr was about to charge forward in rage once more, he watched in horror as Gam’ja too started to rise. The creature’s shattered skull began mending itself of its own accord, answering the orc’s previous question. It seemed they needed no weapons to heal them, rather they regenerate on their own—even mortal wounds.

How am I to defeat such opponents? Fangdarr did not have time to ponder as Gam’ja instantly dashed forward—even before his wound had fully mended—followed closely by Bon’zo. The orc waited for his attackers this time, remembering the tactics his dwarven mentor had taught him. His rage was insanely difficult to suppress, but Fangdarr trusted in Tormag’s instruction. Driktarr cocked back behind his shoulder, lying in wait.

Gam’ja closed first, both daggers leading the way in hopes to impale his large adversary. Fangdarr held his stance, his plan in mind. The troll exclaimed in victory as he felt both daggers pierce through the orc’s abdomen all the way to the hilt. But such was Fangdarr’s intention. The orc had chosen to disregard the short-sighted leading troll, expecting the all-or-nothing blow. Fangdarr’s target was not Gam’ja, however, but the trailing Bon’zo.

Bon’zo couldn’t hide his own glee upon seeing his ally’s weapons sink into the orc’s body. In his distraction, the troll failed to notice Driktarr sailing downward into his shoulder, cleaving him deeply and launching him back. The troll’s body fell into the small fire of Fangdarr’s camp and instantly immolated in a raging inferno. Bon’zo’s screams of agony pierced the forest as he rolled on the ground in an attempt to extinguish himself. But it was no use. Within a few short moments, the troll’s corpse halted its thrashing yet continued to burn.

Fangdarr was caught by surprise at seeing the troll conflagrate so intensely. As his wound’s began to heal from Driktarr’s enchantment, the orc realized his opponent’s weakness. Gam’ja’s attention had turned to his friend upon hearing the shrieks of pain. As his gaze returned to Fangdarr, whose wounds were now stitching themselves closed—even pushing the stone daggers out from the orc’s abdomen from the magical restoration—Gam’ja went wide-eyed in terror. This time, it was Fangdarr whose face was etched with the sinister grin.

“Aw no, mon. Please, we was just playin’,” Gam’ja begged, dropping his weapons. As the troll backpedaled away from Fangdarr, he tripped over the burning corpse of his friend. Luckily, the flammable oil that had seeped from Gam’ja’s wounds was only on his head, else he would have suffered the same fate of Bon’zo. He continued his begging and pleading as he crawled away backwards.

Fangdarr stomped forward, a ceaseless harbinger of death in pursuit of its final victim. His wounds were now freshly healed, leaving white scars to contrast brightly against his blackened skin. As he approached the helpless troll, Fangdarr realized just how formidable he was, especially at such a young age. He reached the troll, who had backed into the base of a tree and was now whimpering.

Staring at the pitiful creature in disgust, the orc’s hand clasped tightly around the troll’s throat, stifling Gam’ja’s whines as his airway was pressed shut. Fangdarr carried the troll back toward the fire with ease, despite his captive’s desperate wriggling. Holding the troll in front of his face, Fangdarr whispered to Gam’ja, barely audible over the roaring flames that still licked away at Bon’zo’s charred carcass. “Play time.”

Gam’ja’s eyes went impossibly wide in terror and the bulging pressure building in his skull as Fangdarr slammed his face into the fire pit. The orc held the troll down in the insatiable blaze that had come to life, though eased his grip in order to hear the agonizing screams as Gam’ja was forced to endure his flesh searing from bone.

Orcblood Legacy: Honor has officially LAUNCHED!

Thank you for all of the support and interest, it has been a fun (and brutal, to be honest) ride to reaching the end of Book One in the series.

For any interested, there is currently an Imgur Giveaway right now for a Free Hardcover copy. 

If you happen to pick up a copy of the book, please leave an Amazon or Goodreads review – they help tremendously!

See you all on the battlefield!

Writing Prompt: Blood

Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses! 

Prompt: Blood

Fangdarr shook away the fog shrouding his mind, finally regaining his senses. He looked to his hands, Driktarr tightly gripped—a familiar stench in the air. His vision shifted to what lay below, his elven friend gasping for breath, choking on the thick, purple liquid pouring into his lungs.


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Weekly Progress Update

Whew, this weekend’s progress was slow. I got about half my normal output out due to being sick for most of the weekend, though still made sure to write each day at my normal times.

Despite the slow progress, the content I got done (about 1.5 chapters) was enjoyable. There was a small side plot that was mainly used to solidify a certain aspect of the story (vague, I know) and a fair amount of relationship building between two characters.

Anytime I write about two specific characters and their relationship, my wife goes crazy, begging to see what’s going on. It makes it all a bit more amusing, as it helps when writing the scene(s), knowing she’s going to ‘squeeee’ over the actions that are taking place (vague, I KNOW). In any case, it was a good chance to add more meat to an already budding companionship, as well as add a good amount of background to a character that previously had little. 

As I was writing today, I was partway through a chapter and a very important scene that I’ve been looking forward to. My daughter woke up a bit early today, so I had to consider cutting my writing time short. That brings me to a new point that I know a lot of writers aren’t fond of.

When to STOP writing for the day/session?

This is a tough one. I say that because I tend to be at an equal standpoint on two sides, recognizing the benefits of each. 

First, in my opinion, it is best to stop writing at a part you’re interested in! You read that correctly. Right when it’s getting good, and you’re itching to add that next paragraph that will make the scene really come together – STOP!

‘Bernard, why in Bothain’s forge fires would I want to do that?’

Because, it will drastically increase your interest on your next writing session, trust me. Many people, myself included, tend to stop at a threshold such as a chapter, a change of setting, or the ending of a scene. I understand that completely, and my organizational compulsions often force me to do just that. However, sometimes, when you end your writing session on a clean stopping point, it can be insanely difficult to motivate yourself to start the next scene.

The last session had a sense of finality to it and now you’re stuck feeling like you’re starting from scratch. What’s the law? Objects in motion tend to stay in motion. Don’t stop the train at the station, stop it at the top of the hill, so the only way to go is forward. Ride that slope all the way down and you’ll find you’re at the station without ever having to start the engines. (Crappy metaphor, we can’t all be writers)

Anyway, I will be the first to tell you that my compulsiveness often gets the best of me and I write until the threshold. Frankly, my standard goal is to write one chapter each day (Friday through Sunday). I’ve started trying to disregard that clean cut and pull myself away at the height of the scene sometimes, as it’ll help me the next day. But, there’s a risk.

Normally, I stop at the end of the chapter. With me trying not to do so, it actually cuts my progress shorter, where I might end it a few paragraphs prior to the end of the chapter, costing me precious progress. Of course, it certainly helps me get started the next day, but then I cut my progress again to do the same. Overall, I lose about 25% progress, or less, for the week. It’s not too bad. Really, this is more for those who are having trouble staying motivated.

Right now, I’m pretty set in my ritual and don’t have motivation issues anymore, so it isn’t too often I do this. But it can make all the difference if you find that you sit down to write and you just can’t get going. Once you get your ritual (that thing I keep bringing up that will help you succeed), you can end your progress wherever you like.

Overall, there are many different ways to get you going and make sure you work at the time you’ve allotted to yourself. There’s nothing more demoralizing than sitting down, knowing you WANT to work and not finding the words. 

I’ll bring up a few more tips on staying motivated and making sure when you sit down to work, you actually work, so keep an eye out for future blogs (you can subscribe on the sidebar if you want to be e-mailed any time new content is published).

Writing Prompt: Song

Each week, there is a 50-word Writing Prompt for a Fantasy concept on a forum that is based on a single provided word. I try to do them within the world of Orcblood Legacy, so that I can explore different ways to consider parts of the series.

Prompt: Song

The sepulchral tone emanated deep within his mind, echoing in tantalizing embrace. Fangdarr drifted closer and closer toward the gaping maw, unable to resist its call.

As its prey approached, the phantasmal fiend sank sharpened ivory into the orc’s flesh, feasting with ravenous vigor. And still the sweet sound played.

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Writing Prompt: Dwarven

Each week, there is a 50-word Writing Prompt for a Fantasy concept on a forum that is based on a single provided word. I try to do them within the world of Orcblood Legacy, so that I can explore different ways to consider parts of the series.

I’ve decided to post these in a Blog, and enable Comments, in case anyone else wishes to partake. This was last week’s, so I’ll post this week’s directly after as well.

Prompt: Dwarven

With a hiss of oil as he quenched the blade that had been pounded a thousand times over, Bothain inspected the bright, blue runes that shined from below the blackened surface.

He extracted the masterful creation and leveled it before his eyes—before sliding it beneath the coals once more.

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Weekly Progress Update

Currently, I am already deep into Book Two of the Orcblood Legacy series (Title pending) – probably around 40%. I started the moment I completed Honor in order to maintain momentum and not disrupt my writing schedule. So far, this has worked very well, as I’m making good progress on the second title before the first is even available.

That’s just the starting point. I plan to hold myself accountable with a Weekly Progress Update, as well as give some tips, details, or any challenges I encountered each week. This is the first!

As mentioned in a previous Blog about staying motivated, I only write on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday mornings between 4:00 a.m. and 6:00 a.m. And that’s it. I have time to write more, but I write for a specific slot of time on specific days in order to keep a ritual. Once I start disturbing my ritual, my writing will suffer.

This week, I added another two Chapters to Book Two that have been really interesting. I won’t spoil any details, but there is one key thing I want to bring up regarding writing that I encountered in this week’s progress.

Introducing New Characters: 
Many writers plan on introducing new characters – ALL of them – ahead of time. This is a good thing. It truly is. However, it can also be limiting. I plan events loosely in the beginning, but let the story go where it needs to as I write. Other than a loose outline, it’s all written on the spot. This is especially true for certain characters getting added.

In this week’s writing, I actually introduced two characters that were never planned. There was no thought that went into them ahead of time and the original storyline had no intention of them, or their events, being implemented at all. This is a risk.

Needless to say, there is a reason why writers flesh out characters prior to adding them to a story. I do the same, sometimes. However, despite the risk, I truly enjoy the implementation of characters that were not planned. I’ll explain why.

One of the things I have noticed, is that some writers will flesh out their characters first, then build the events around the characters. This can work, but it feels clunky to me. The world was not created with humans being the reason it is shaped in its way, rather the opposite. Humans evolved due to the way the world works. Writing should be the same. 

When you design a character prior to implementation, you inevitably will force that character to be introduced – often in a setting that either may not make sense or in a way that did not fit into the original plan of the story. For example, let’s say your novel is about delivering a magic ring to a volcano (I think this may have been done before . . . but bear with me!). You’ve got the idea in mind for a character that you designed weeks ago sitting on the sidelines screaming, “Put me in, Coach!” 

Now, this character may be the coolest, most lethal assassin that can shapeshift into a wolf on a whim and wields a whip with a pistol attached. You’ve taken this character into your Dungeons & Dragons campaign and had a blast. He NEEDS to make a debut in your story, because you are so attached to that character. But how? Well, don’t worry! Despite the fact your party is already at the edge of the volcano, about to complete their quest, we have found a way! 

Your characters were at the final threshold, just about to complete their quest with everything going smoothly. But, we NEED to implement Wolf-Whip-Pistol-Man, so instead, the party stops because the slightly pudgy one needs to snack on some bread. This gives the enemy time catch up and attack. But wait! We are saved, because one of the enemies happens to be a secret Wolf-Whip-Pistol-Man in disguise, who traveled far and wide just to aid in our quest! We are saved! 

Now, obviously the above is such an outrageous implementation, correct? I agree, 100%. The problem? I actually see writers do this! This is the byproduct of developing a character prior to the world (annnnnnnd a bit of the writer not understanding that you can’t just throw in what you think is cool without careful planning in advance). Instead, if your world is built, the decision to add a character in that exact same outlandish scenario above actually can occur. However, instead of your pre-made character, it can be an orc, or a goblin, or whatever your enemy is. Now, it seems more likely. Give him a backstory and a reason for his treason and you’ve got an interesting character.

This all goes to say that the above is obviously quite an extreme situation, but tries to show the importance of understanding the limitations of building a character beforehand and feeling like you must implement them, even at the detriment of the story. 

So, that was quite a long way to say that implementing a character on the spot can have its own advantages, while fleshing out your entire cast before their time can actually damage your story. It’s important to make sure the flow is not disrupted and that everything makes sense. Your characters, their implementation, and the setting in which they are introduced. 

Keep an eye out for next week’s Weekly Progress Update!

Writing Tips: Consistency

One of the most challenging – yet most fun – factors of writing Fantasy is Worldbuilding and Character building. Both of these require you to create entirely new, fictional entities from scratch. While this can be both challenging and fun, it comes with its own risks.

First, it’s important to take notes. Always, always, always. When I was writing Orcblood Legacy: Honor, I lost my notes along the way as I kept putting the book aside over the years. When I came back to it, I would try to recall what I wrote, or skim through the reading to get the necessary details. I’ll explain how well that worked below:

Crepusculus’ Lair Placement:

2012 (Start of Book): Eastern corner of the map
2013 (After dropping the book for a year): Western corner of the map
2014: Eastern corner of the map
2015: Eastern corner of the map (yay! still in the same spot)
2016: Center of map (What? Why?)
2017: Eastern corner of the map (This is getting a little old)
2018: Western corner of the map

After doing the diligent review, I realized that the Lair needed to be in the Western corner of the map. I had no idea how I managed to get it in the Center, let alone constantly returning it to the East (it made no logical sense to be East). 

This is where consistency comes into play. If I had not went through my review and followed the logic of where the Lair should be, it would have completely destroyed the whole story. I won’t go into details, but perhaps if you read the book you’ll understand what I mean. But, trust me, this book would have failed entirely if I had left the Lair in the East. You know how people constantly bring up plot holes on even famous works, such as Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter? Where they’ll let the extent of the internet and all its inhabitants know that the single fact they mentioned uproots the entire story? Yeah, this would have been that.

Needless to say, sticking to your facts and keeping them straight are important. This goes past Worldbuilding and is really prominent in characters as well. Often a character that has a certain trait or appearance will change in your mind, or as you write them. I’ll give a few examples of things I struggled with throughout writing the story:

Inconsistencies of Characters: 
1. Cormac originally had hair, but a clean-shaven face. Now, he’s bald with a beard (which I prefer). Additionally, his eye-patch had shifted eyes a few times (maybe that eye was just a little tired and wanted some shut-eye, pun intended).
2. Elethain had black hair, but it was changed to be a golden white. 
3. Blood Color. This was a big one. I actually had to make a list (after completing the book and while writing a portion of Book Two, then going back and making sure Orcblood Legacy: Honor was consistent – it was not) of all the different blood colors of the races and creatures in Orcblood Legacy. Black, blue, purple, red, blackened-red, etc. Sometimes I would wound an enemy that had black blood and say the crimson painted the grass – which would not be true.

Consistency is key. Obviously, that’s the point of this post. However, my goal is to show just how easy it is to overlook some of the minor details. I certainly made many mistakes that were found later (which is why it is important to review your work). One thing to keep in mind, is that while they are easy to miss while you’re writing, your readers will not. You are writing over a long period of time, mostly. It is a long road to complete a book – one that will be done piece by piece. Details will be forgotten as you wait until your next writing time, or even six months later when your character(s) finally encounter the same minute detail, such as the color of an ogre’s blood. However, your readers are going through the book much more quickly, so the details are fresh in their mind. 

All in all, as a writer, you WILL make mistakes. You will. And that is okay. It’s better to catch them before print, of course, and that’s where review comes into play. But any details you can keep consistent as your writing just decreases the risk of letting out that one minor detail that can send your book from a fantastic story to a logically-flawed catastrophe. 

Get yourself a notebook, a whiteboard, or even open up Notepad on your computer and start documenting (I do all of the above and still will miss minor details if I’m not paying attention or reviewing my notes constantly). Don’t let your months (or years) of effort bringing your vision to life be cast aside by a single line of text that readers will use to haunt you forever. 

Writing Tips: Staying Motivated

Any aspiring author knows there are times where continuing with your story gets difficult. You make excuses. You lose interest. These are facts of the trade (and really any hobby/interest) that threaten accomplishing your goal. 

I will be the first to admit that Orcblood Legacy: Honor did not come without its struggles. I started writing it in the summer of 2012. The first 30,000 words were written in two weeks. My interest was insanely high, and there was no stopping me. Or so I thought.

After that intense, highly productive introductory period, everything died off from there. I made excuses. I lost interest. Though, I always hated not being able to push through. Always. 

Each subsequent year, I would randomly get the interest renewed to wish to finish the story. It was a lifelong dream to write a novel, and Fangdarr’s story was the one I knew I wanted to tell. Each year, when I picked up the abandoned husk that I had left, I reviewed all the previous work to get reacquainted. Unfortunately, by that point, I had managed to lose interest by the time I read through and lightly edited my progress–typically only adding another few pages once I had caught up.

Finally, in December of 2017, it was enough. You reach a point that you realize your mistakes and you buckle down. This time, I picked up the story again and told myself to continue. 

This time, I did. I pushed through. So, what changed? To be honest, nothing. And everything. I started the exact same way as I did before–reading through all of my previous work. This time, rather than a light edit, I went deep. Every line went through intense scrutiny that was not done in the previous six ‘edits’ that were performed over the years my story lay dormant. It was dreadful and tedious, I can’t lie. There’s a reason (many, rather) that I am an author and not an editor. Nevertheless, I found a vast amount of errors from picking apart my writing at a nearly molecular level.

Inconsistencies, plot holes, everything. Littered everywhere. I fixed dozens and dozens of issues and re-wrote any plot holes I found. If you are stuck on your In Progress novel and are having trouble staying motivated – start here. Go through the grueling task of rigorous self-editing. It sucks. It really, really does. But if you can trudge through the muck, I promise you’ll be better for it. Both your story and yourself.

So, where is my Writing Tip, Bernard? I know, I know, get to the point! All of this background is important to show that I know first-hand that motivation is a killer of novels. It doesn’t matter how beautiful your story may be if it never makes it onto the page. Ideas are endless, execution is where you make your name. 

In addition to doing a self-edit that made me realize my story wasn’t the shining pinnacle of beauty that I thought, I set myself on the path of success. Here’s the tip, the key to success. Habits. 

Writing is no different than practicing an instrument, working out, or even learning to draw. It takes practice. Ritualized, chore-like practice. Practice needs to be habitual. Build the habit and stick to it. Set a time that you can write, undisturbed, and stick to it. I write between 4:00 a.m. – 6:00 a.m. three days a week, and that’s it. This is the only time I get while the family is still asleep. My shining window of opportunity. 

Let me tell you, the decision to get out of bed at 4:00 a.m. on my only days off of my day job can be difficult. Even this morning that I’m writing this post, my daughter woke my wife and I up twice with blood-curdling screams. Last night was just miserable. Yet, I woke up at 3:45 (15 minutes before my 4:00 a.m. alarm) and rolled out of bed. I started the coffee, gave the cats their weekly treats, checked my e-mails, then got to writing. I will do the same tomorrow on Saturday. I will do the same the next day. And then I will do it all over again starting the following Friday. Because this is my ritual. The habit I’ve formed that allows me to progress through the Orcblood Legacy series. I make good, steady progress every week that I look forward to throughout the week (even though I know it means waking up in the cold mornings and sitting alone in my kitchen to write). 

So, there it is. Build your habit and stick to it. Like anything else, you will see results as long as you continue. Set your schedule and designate a slot of time that suits you (I only slot six hours per week, where I actually end up writing about four). Stay on that schedule. It doesn’t matter when it is, as long as you can continue on the same time every day you schedule to write and you can do so without distractions.

Paperback Proof Copies!

Today is the day!

My Paperback proof copies just arrived and they’re awesome. I’m really impressed with the Print-on-Demand service. The cover has a leather-like feel that adds a lot of stability and grip that I love. The bindings turned out okay, with only a little bit of variance in the print cuts.

Orcblood Legacy Paperback Proof

It’s pretty awesome to feel the book in your hand for the first time (even if it’s stamped with an annoying ‘NOT FOR RESALE’ across the cover). All the effort put into the novel is finally tangible in my hand and there’s nothing but pride and eagerness.