Month: July 2019
Skirmish (Cormac): Fall
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Cormac looked up at the blade descending toward his temple. He knew it was over. His mind seemed to pause while simultaneously playing through a thousand memories in an instant. Memories of his youth, his parents, his wife, and most prevalent—Ori.
What had started as pleasant recollections of his son’s smiles and joy were replaced by the haunting images of the boy being cut apart by the raiders Cormac stood against. I’m sorry, Ori. I got as many as I could . . ., he lamented. As if in response, the scenes in his mind faded to a black emptiness as quick as they had come.
As the orc’s sword plunged toward the dwarf’s skull, Cormac simply went limp. Whether on instinct or due to the profound loss of his family striking his will, he could not know. All he knew was that he was falling to the ground.
Despite his drop, the raider’s blade still sliced through skin, cutting through Cormac’s left eye. The pain shocked him back to his senses as his back hit the ground. For a moment, he had forgotten where he was—until he saw the four orcs standing around and above him. Each of his opponents had their weapons raised once more, ready to plunge them into the dwarf.
Cormac’s will snapped back. His perspective had changed; it was no longer acceptable to end merely a few of the orcs. They all needed to die, for Ori.
Tucking his feet and pulling in his head, the guard lay beneath both of his large shields, entirely covered by the thick steel as four blades crashed down. Cormac waited for the booming thud to ring four times in rapid succession, waiting for the right moment to retaliate. Once the fourth strike landed, he rolled left into one of his opponent’s shin’s.
The orc looked down at its victim in confusion as it rolled. Then, all it could remember was a blinding pain and see blood pouring from its groin. By the time it realized what had happened, the orc watched as Cormac rolled into the opposite direction toward another raider.
Within his shielded roll, Cormac would listen for the harsh inhale of the orc’s as they launched attacks. Each time, he would roll to his back so that his shields would intercept the blow, then continue his approach. It had to be the most odd tactic he had ever enacted, but he could not deny its efficacy. The orcs slashed as him with abandon—especially after watching him successfully dispatch of yet another of their dwindling group.
Down to two, Ori. Just two more.
Weekly Progress Update:
Woohoo! For the first time in two weeks, I finally sat down to work on my second round of edits on Madness. I only got about five pages edited – which, in itself, is pitiful. But it’s the first progress I’ve made at all recently, so it’s worth celebrating. I’ve been stuck in the mud without motivation and I was happy to finally get to it. I need to keep up the progress.
On to the Contest! A few more submissions have come in over the weekend. I’m glad people are enjoying writing their short stories and it’s exciting to read their work. There are only THREE days left! So, be sure to get your submission in if you haven’t yet.
As mentioned, the winners will be announced on August 15th on my blog (here), Facebook, and the /r/FantasyWriters subreddit.
For any writers who are interested, I’ve started a Discord server where you can discuss your own works with other writers, get feedback, and keep yourself motivated.
See you next week!
Writing Prompt: Fear & Faith
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: This week is a double-whammy. There are two concepts in the prompt and you must include both. To fit this in, we’re upping the word limit to 100!
Had his god abandoned him? Or was there ever a deity at all, he wondered? It seemed so trivial in that moment, for he was naught but a pebble in the eyes of the world.
If his omnipotent idol was real, did it even truly care for him? Or was he no more than a blade of grass in a sea of green? As Bitrayuul’s eyes closed, he expected to witness the vision of his god, guiding him to the Mines—where his father waited for him.
But there was only an unending void, and he faded alone.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Safe
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Bitrayuul’s eyes cracked open slowly. It felt as if he had been asleep for a full moon cycle—and the crust in his eyes did little to dispel the thought. His body felt stiff as he strained to pull himself up in the bed. As his weight shifted, an odd crumbling sound came from beneath him. Pulling back the thick cloth on which he sat, the half-orc was confounded upon seeing he had been sleeping on a sheet of gravel.
The half-orc peered around the room as he rubbed his eyes. Everything was made of stone. From the chair in the corner of the room to the table it was paired with, there was naught but carved rocks in sight. Bitrayuul lifted his hands toward his temples but stopped upon seeing bandages on his arm and shoulder.
Just as Bitrayuul struggled to remember the cause for his wounds that had healed, Tormag entered the room. “Oh! Yer awake!” The dwarf’s face lit up in an instant as he rushed over to his adoptive son and wrapped his thick arms around Bitrayuul.
“W-where—” the half-orc began, struggling to breath beneath Tormag’s strong embrace.
The commander noticed the effect his squeeze was having and relinquished his hold. “Sorry, son. I’m just so happy yer alive.”
Bitrayuul returned the smile but remained confused. “What happened? Where am I?”
“Hmm, seems ye don’t remember. The cleric was right.” Tormag strode to the other end of the room and struggled to lift the stone chair before carrying it back toward the half-orc’s bed and setting it down with a gasp of relief. “Ye remember anything at all? The trolls invading the mines, chasin’ after Theiran into the tunnels?”
Bitrayuul shook his head.
“Right . . . well, t’ keep it short, ye went and rescued the senator—after I telled ye not t’, mind ye!” Tormag raised a finger at his son and waggled it in disappointment. “But, ye went anyway. And ye saved him from sure death, don’t ye doubt. Though, ye got cut up a bit in the process.”
Looking down at his bandages again, Bitrayuul lifted the wrapping to see the edge of his new scar. When he looked back to Tormag, he could see the concerned look on the dwarf’s face. “You mentioned something about a ‘cleric’? What is a cleric?”
Tormag’s face lit up once more. “Ah, a cleric be a follower o’ Bothain—a healer. She be the one who saved ye. We were lucky that she did, else . . . ye would’ve been lost in those mines.” The dwarf seemed to be choking back tears. Clearing his throat to avoid the awkwardness, Tormag added, “So, she said ye needed t’ rest. Ye’ve been here fer about three days.”
Three days? Bitrayuul thought. At least it wasn’t a full moon cycle. “Can I see the cleric? I’d like to thank her.”
“Eh, we’ll see. Clerics are an odd bunch, sure as stones. Besides, the Council has demanded they see ye once ye wake. So have a wash,” Tormag’s hand waved to a large, hollowed stone full of water on the far side of the room. “When yer cleaned an’ dressed, I’ll be outside.”
Bitrayuul grew nervous at the thought of meeting the council. When he first came into Tarabar, many dwarves were not accepting of him, and Theiran had warned of the Council’s expected disapproval. But before he could raise his concerns, his father was already walking toward the door. Bitrayuul’s shoulders slumped with worry and he sighed.
The half-orc failed to notice Tormag had stopped at the door and turned back toward him. A genuine smile was plastered onto his face. “I’m glad yer safe, son.” With a nod, the commander stepped out, leaving Bitrayuul standing in the stone room alone to prepare.
Weekly Progress Update:
Hi, hi, hello!
There is 10 days left in the Contest and more submissions came in this week. Be sure to get your Short Stories written – details can be found here. It’s exciting to start reading through some of the works that have been submitted!
As for my own work, this week wasn’t too fruitful. My birthday was this week, as well as a trip to the hospital, so I wanted to just spend a lot of time with the family, so I fell behind on editing Madness. I’d like to hope I can make it up, but that’s a bit optimistic. I’ll just keep chuggin’ along. Worst case scenario, the publication gets delayed a bit. Normally I’m pretty strict on maintaining my timeline and schedules, but recently I’ve been coasting a bit more to spend some quality time with my wife and daughter. They give me the time I need for writing – at the sacrifice of time with them – and sometimes you need to flip the scales.
I’m starting to try to work through the decision on which novel I’ll be working on after Madness is published. It’s a tough one to make, as whichever I choose I’ll be working on for probably 6-12 months. I want to write all of them, and will, but need to start with the one I want to write most. Unfortunately, that is subject to change at any given moment based on current mood. So, it’s difficult to make a resolute decision and stick with it.
But, that’s a worry for about two months from now. 🙂 Until then, it’s back to the sludge of editing.
Best of luck!
Writing Prompt: Beast
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: This week, try to make it HORROR.
It’s coming . . . I can feel it.
The floorboards groaned beneath its heft, nearly masking the blood dripping from the beast’s maw. I could still hear my friend’s whimpers of agony as he was dragged along the floor like a wet cloth.
Oh, gods, no . . . It’s here!
I could only wait.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Hive
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Fangdarr followed Raz’ja back to the mountain pass, each carrying their bloodied sack of ears. The orc was met with a thousand gleaming eyes as he entered the narrow path. The trolls’ wicked grins nodded with approval from all around. They clung to the rocky walls, eagerly awaiting news from their chieftain.
Raz’ja walked through the jagged passage with supreme confidence. The orc watched as any troll who made eye contact with their leader shied away in fear. Fangdarr’s respect and admiration for the cunning troll rose with each step he took. At any time, Raz’ja could easily be overpowered by sheer number, yet none dared move against him. A commendable feat, to the orc.
As the pair entered a dark tunnel, their eyes shifted to see better. Fangdarr was forced to bend low within the tight corridor, but continued silently. He could feel the anxious presence of trolls close on his heels, too curious to hold back. The thought made his skin crawl, but he trusted Raz’ja. After all, why would the troll chieftain go through all the trouble for a sack of ears?
The passage seemed to go on forever—and got smaller the deeper they went. At first, Fangdarr had wondered why they would choose to dig into the mountain. But all became clear as soon as they had reached the end of the tunnel. Raz’ja waited for him at the opening with a wide smile on his face. The troll extended his arm in a wide sweeping motion. “Welcome, brutha, to my kingdom!”
Fangdarr’s jaw fell slack in awe. The cavern they had entered was so vast! It extended farther than his eyes could see and with trolls scurrying over nearly every surface. There were no buildings, nor even any plants. It all seemed so barren, yet immense. It was as if the sanctuary was some sort of enormous hive, crawling with the wretched creatures.
Taking joy in the orc’s wordlessness, Raz’ja stepped forward before stopping at a crudely carved stone slab. He pulled the sack from his belt and dropped it atop, drawing Fangdarr’s attention. Without prompt, the astonished orc, too, set his ears on the stone.
“Alright,” Raz’ja started as he dumped both bags of ears. His eyes lit up upon seeing the torn pieces of flesh in all different sizes—even childrens’. Cackling loudly, the troll turned to Fangdarr. “The agreement is met.”
“What this mean?” Fangdarr tilted his head curiously.
“Ears asked, ears received. The alliance is fulfilled. Now, we make you chieftain.”
Weekly Progress Update:
Hello everyone!
First up, the Short Story Contest. There has been a lot of interest – and even a few submissions already – which is great! It’s exciting to just be surrounded by other writers.
To note, there has been a few minor rule adjustments. a) The content must be original. I’ve removed the allowance for fan-fiction, as this is a paid contest and copyright infringement is something we, as other writers, should not be aiming to do. b) Only one submission is allowed per contestant.
There were a few who wanted to write multiple short stories, and I was glad they were so eager to write more. However, to keep it fair for everyone, only one can be submitted.
There are still 17 days left, so there is plenty of time for everyone to get there submissions in. Be sure to send them to bernard@bernardbertram.com by 11:59 p.m. EST (UTC-4) on July 31st.
In other news, I’ve begun on my third road of edits of Madness. I originally expected this to just be a quick, final pass to make sure I caught any sneaky typos or other grammatical errors. However, I’ve been picking up some issues with clarity and other minor touch-ups that I want to make sure get fixed before publishing. So, this has turned into a full-sweep editing run. For any who have edited before, you know just how grueling that is . . .
Well, not to worry. It’s all for the improvement of the end result. My goal is still to be completed around mid-September. Worst case, it pushes to October. I’ll keep everyone informed as we move along.
Happy writing and reading!
Fantasy Short Story Contest!
Greetings! I’ll be hosting a contest for Fantasy-themed Short Stories with PRIZES available to the 1st and 2nd place submissions. The details are below:
Submission Deadline: July 31st, 2019 (11:59 p.m. EST)
Winner Announcements: August 15th, 2019
1st Place will be awarded a $100 Amazon Gift Card!
2nd Place will be awarded a $25 Amazon Gift Card
Submissions will be able to follow any Fantasy sub-genre. There are no required plot points – the goal is to bring writers together, have fun, and win some prizes!
Content Guidelines:
– Must be Fantasy (any sub-genre is acceptable)
– Must be under 5,000 words
– It can be in any Fantasy world [Note: MUST be your own to avoid copyright infringement!]
– There is no Maturity restriction – anything goes!
– Only one submission per person
A contest will be held every 3 months, so if you did not win keep an eye out for the next contest!
Please send all submissions to bernard@bernardbertram.com. The submission must include one of the following:
– A .doc file attachment
– A .pdf file attachment
– A Google Docs link (be sure that View/Edit access is included)
The winners will be announced on August 15th via this Blog. Please be sure to use an e-mail address that you check, as Prizes will be delivered electronically.
And, most of all, GOOD LUCK AND HAVE FUN!
Disclosure Details:
All work that you submit is your own. It will not be copied, claimed, or distributed in any way except in the case of the 1st and 2nd place works. Both winners will have their submissions shared via this website, my Facebook, Goodreads (due to an automated RSS Blog feed from my website), and – dependent on permission – the /r/fantasywriters subreddit community. To restate, this sharing of work will only apply to the winners of the contest.
I reserve the right to review and rate all submitted works based on personal opinion. There are only two winners chosen out of all submissions. If your work did not result in the top two positions, do not take this to mean your piece was bad, just that I considered others better. You are always welcome to submit to future contests at any time for more chances to win prizes.
Prizes will be delivered electronically via e-mail.
Skirmish (Cormac): Raiders
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
The first orc closed in, eager for the kill. From behind, the rest of the raiders were close on its heels—all seeking the easy victim.
But Cormac, against his most base urges to lash out on instinct, waited with determination. He didn’t care if he killed them all before he fell, just a few. Each shield was held firmly in place in anticipation.
As the nearest orc’s iron blade came plummeting down, the creature’s face elated at the thought of cracking open the dwarf’s skull. Instead, the sword was met with the thick steel of Cormac’s shield. Before the bloodthirsty orc realized it’s attack had been halted, the dwarf stabbed deep into its thigh. With a yelp of surprise, the orc fell backward, frantically trying to staunch the black liquid that poured from its severed artery.
One down, Cormac thought.
There was no time for reflection, the next two orcs were upon him and the others were beginning to flank him. Taking the initiative before he was completely surrounded, the dwarven guard bravely charged toward the pair of beats in front of him. The orcs were taken aback by his sudden offensiveness and were caught off-guard. With a well-aimed strike to the heart, one of the raiders fell to its knees while Cormac’s other shield slammed into the other’s forearm, pressing the orc’s own blade into its neck. Gargling its own blood, that creature too fell to the ground and desperately attempted to stop its lifeblood from spilling onto the ground.
With three down, the odds were increasing. However, nine still remained and had now circled Cormac. The lust in their eyes lingered, but a spark of hesitation had crept into each raider. This time, five leapt in at once, seeking to overwhelm the stalwart guard.
Certainly outnumbered, Cormac would never be able to fight all at once. His only hope was to reduce the number of attackers in any way he could. Thinking quickly, rather than remaining in position, the dwarf rolled to the right desperately. With luck alone, only a single orc’s swing managed to clip him, glancing harmlessly off his shield as he tumbled.
Cormac was back on his feet in an instant—blades leading the way. He plunged both of his shield’s blades into the nearest orc and charged forward using the creature’s body as a shield to block it’s neighboring ally’s follow-up swing. The ferocity of the second orc’s cleave caused it to cut through Cormac’s meat-shield, forcing him to disengage before he was overrun once more.
Using the dead orc’s body to obscure the raider’s vision of him, the dwarf slid to his knees and plunged his weapons into the second orc’s feet. In a disadvantageous position, the three other orcs fell upon him without relent. Their insatiable bloodlust led the trio to attack him simultaneously instead of ensuring the kill by alternating their assault, allowing Cormac to lift a single shield above his head to deflect their approaching weapons. While protected, he took advantage of their carelessness and cut deep into each of their exposed thighs—always aiming for that same artery that he knew would incapacitate them.
Eight. More than half. Cormac still refused to believe in victory. All that mattered was exacting a toll.
As the three raiders around him fell to the ground clutching their wounds, the last four rushed in before he could stand. They seemed to have been watching from their ally’s mistakes, as they no longer attacked in unison. The first attack came from Cormac’s left—met with a raised shield. The next from his right—again met with a shield. But the third came from above, aiming for his skull, and he had nothing left to block with.
Weekly Progress Update:
Happy 4th of July!
This week had a lot of progress. I’ve finished going through Beta Reader’s feedback and making any necessary changes. The next step is to order a new set of Proofs and do a final pass for any additional edits, then it’s off to publishing.
In other news, I’ll be hosting a Fantasy Short Story Writing Contest sometime in the next week or so. This contest will be available to anyone and will have two prizes available – a $100 Amazon Gift Card for 1st place and a $25 Amazon Gift Card for 2nd place!
Here are the rules for submissions:
- Must be Fantasy-themed (any sub-genre is fair game)
- Must be under 5,000 words
- It can be in any world – either your own or an existing one
- There is no maturity restriction, anything goes!
Submissions will be under a deadline, to be determined – most likely 2-4 weeks. The winners will be announced 2-4 weeks after the submission deadline. I will have resolute dates at the time of the contest’s official announcement.
All submissions should be sent to bernard@bernardbertram.com to be considered for review.
Disclosure Details:
All work that you submit is your own. It will not be copied, claimed, or distributed in any way except in the case of the 1st and 2nd place works. Both winners will have their submissions shared via this website, my Facebook, Goodreads (due to an automated RSS Blog feed from my website), and – dependent on permission – the /r/fantasywriters subreddit community. To restate, this sharing of work will only apply to the winners of the contest.
I reserve the right to review and rate all submitted works based on personal opinion. There are only two winners chosen out of all submissions. If your work did not result in the top two positions, do not take this to mean your piece was bad, just that I considered others better. You are always welcome to submit to future contests at any time for more chances to win prizes.
Prizes will be delivered electronically via e-mail.
This contest is meant to bring Fantasy Writers together and have fun. Please enjoy yourself!
Writing Prompt: Contest
Follow along each week for a 50–100-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: Double the fun – 100 word limit!
Tormag slammed the iron mug onto the table next to eight similarly drained flagons. “Another!” he shouted, wiping the froth from his thick mustache as he eyed his opponent who seemed ready to topple over.
As his ninth order of mead slid into the commander’s hand, the dwarf across from him fell to the floor with a crash. Despite the boisterous cheers erupting in his favor, Tormag remained silent as he poured the contents of the mug down his throat, silencing the confused patrons.
Burping loudly, Tormag tossed the mug aside and slowly turned toward the barkeep. “Another.”
Want to take part? Leave a Comment with your own response to the Writing Prompt below! Remember: Keep it under 50 words!
Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Gratitude
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
“He’s awake!” Tormag chirped with excitement as he wrapped his arms around Bitrayuul. “Oh, me boy, I thought ye lost.”
Bitrayuul instinctively returned the hug, though he knew not why it was received. “W-what happened?” As he attempted to sit up, he clutched his shoulder in pain. It felt as if he had taken a hammer to his collarbone and blood had stained over half of his gear.
“Easy, lad. Easy.” Laying his son’s head gently against the stone, Tormag couldn’t contain his smile. “Ye took quite a beatin’, don’t ye doubt.”
The half-orc’s eyes widened. “Theiran! Is he safe?” He felt a hand press lightly on his chest to calm him and turned his head. In front of him sat a female dwarf, her face touched with tenderness as she smiled at him. Bitrayuul eyed her curiously. “Who are you?”
Offering a soft laugh, the cleric turned to Tormag. “Well, he’s alive. But he doesn’t seem to remember much.” Her voice was edged with the gruff dialect of dwarves but still managed to remain soft.
“Aye, he’ll be fine,” the commander responded. He placed his hand on her shoulder and his tears began anew. “I can’t thank ye enough, cleric. Me boy owes ye his life.”
Bitrayuul, finally catching on, groaned as he forced himself to sit up slowly. “W-what is your name?”
The cleric smiled at him once more as she slid a finger along her brow to tuck back her dulled hair. “Don’t fret, love. Ye’ll be just fine with time.” With that, she stood and turned to Theiran and the remaining company of dwarves. “Theiran, he should be carried home to rest. Can ye lads handle him?”
Still awestruck by what had happened—and knowing Bitrayuul deserved no less than their care—each dwarf nodded quickly before moving toward the prone half-orc. Theiran approached the cleric, his grateful expression speaking volumes.
Before words fell from his mouth, the cleric raised a hand to silence him. “No words are needed, Senator. Bothain chose to spare him. He has earned his right to live.” Her cheeks remained raised with a smile as she spoke, leaving Theiran with nothing left to say. Without another word, the cleric began walking back down the tunnel the way they had come.
As he watched her depart, the old senator could see tell she was weary. The length of her strides had shortened and each step seemed to take a minor toll. Yet still she stood strong, walking with pride. Theiran knew she had spoken the truth—that Bothain had indeed been the one to spare Bitrayuul. However, it was she who bore the sacrifice, it seemed. A cost she must have known would have been paid in return for the half-orc’s life. He turned to Bitrayuul as his companions lifted him onto their shoulders, then to Tormag whose tears of joy proved just how loved the orcish warrior was. Thank ye for savin’ him, Bothain. Ye know he earned it.
Bitrayuul watched Theiran as he joined the company and offered a pained smile. “Glad to see you are safe, Senator.”
“Aye, lad. Thanks to ye,” Theiran replied, taking the half-orc’s hand in his own. “Thanks to ye.”