Month: December 2018
Weekly Progress Update
Happy New Year!
I don’t have much to report this week. I made some progress on Book Two and got my date’s confirmed for an event at my local library in Spring. I hope everyone had a good holiday!
Book Two is currently at 85,000 words with probably at least 10 chapters remaining. We’re getting closer to the final act/events, so it’s getting pretty intense and thrilling.
Sorry for such a short update, see you next week!
Writing Prompt: Nihilistic
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, your response must give evidence toward a nihilistic personality or perspective without using the actual word or any variant.
Lucien leaned back against the slime-covered stone and sighed. “There is no hope here. We are all just waiting for our enemy to crash down upon us like a raging tempest against the cliffs. No matter how resolute the stone, it eventually falls—piece by piece. It always falls.”
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Alarm
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
The innkeeper stared at Tormag with eyes wide in rage. Throwing his soiled rag to the floor, the barkeep stomped over to the unwelcome patrons in a huff, ready to eject them from his establishment. Tormag remained unmoving, even as the angered dwarf grabbed hold of his armor. Bitrayuul just watched in bewilderment at his mentor’s nonchalance for the unfortunate result of his humor.
As soon as the innkeeper had made contact, however, a deep, rumbling horn could be heard reverberating through the great stone city. Immediately, every dwarf—including Tormag and the disgruntled owner—was up on their feet. Each scrambled together their belongings and funneled out of the building. Bitrayuul was pulled by his adoptive father’s strong hand through the doorway, confusion and concern thick in his mind.
Out in the darkened street, dwarves were pouring from every building and alleyway, donning their armor and weapons before rushing off to the southern part of the city. Bitrayuul had never seen anything like it before. It was as if they were all a part of an enormous machine, each quickly falling in line to perform their role—whatever that was, he could not be sure. It seemed obvious there was some sort of threat, judging by the city-wide alarm and the hundreds of dwarves preparing for a battle.
Bitrayuul turned to Tormag, who had not yet joined his fellow dwarves in their task. “Tormag, what’s going on?” he asked, not hiding the concern in his voice.
The old dwarf just stared dead ahead, watching the flowing army of dwarves rush forward in a stream of steel. “Eh, we picked a bad day to return home, lad, don’t ye doubt.”
The foreboding nature of his tone put a chill in the half-orc’s spine and tugged at his stomach. What sort of threat could make even Tormag waver? Could it be the dragons the dwarf had told him of, or a giant? Fear and trepidation made Bitrayuul’s heart pound in his chest. This was not similar to his simple life in the cave within the forest by any means. Waves of regret at wishing to see the world and its splendors began seeping through him, poisoning his eagerness to explore. Is this the real world? he thought, Constant threat of death and the never-ending fear that each day may be your last? The life of simplicity he had lived started to seem much more favorable . . .
Finally, the rampaging torrent of dwarves had come to an end and Tormag took a few steps out into the street, watching them as they went. He breathed in a deep sigh, then started walking toward the dwarven army that had just left, his boots dragging against the stone with dread.
Even more confused, Bitrayuul jogged a few paces to catch up to his mentor, wondering why he had not simply joined his kin before. “Tormag, what’s going on?” he repeated, growing more and more worried with each step.
Far behind the quick pace of those rushing ahead, yet eyes never leaving them, the dwarf kept trudging forward. “We picked a bad day, son,” he started, interrupted by the booming sound of the city’s horn calling out in alarm once more. “It’s Bothain’s Day,” Tormag finished with a sigh as an enormous, intricate hammer could be seen being lifted into the air, far in the distance.
Bitrayuul stared at the interesting object curiously, hardly able to make out the silhouette in the darkness at such a distance. However, a single flaming arrow soared through the air, a beacon among the lightless cavern, before connecting against the shrine and igniting it. The great, flaming hammer high in the air illuminated most of the city in its flickering light, bringing the roaring cheer of thousands of dwarves.
As Bitrayuul and Tormag got closer, they could see each and every dwarf in a chaotic fist-fight around the shrine. The smell of ale was so strong it stung Bitrayuul’s nostrils even from their distance, still half a league away. Armor and fists clashed against one another, mixed with the cheers and shouts of the festive dwarves taking part in their most favored holiday—the anniversary of their deity’s death.
Tormag stopped in his tracks, still a ways off from the crowd, taking in the spectacle ahead. A tear fell down his cheek as he realized he had missed the last few years while remaining with the orcs in their cave. With an inhale that could rival a dragon before spewing fire, the commander yelled at the top of his lungs and sprinted forward to join his comrades.
Weekly Progress Update
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! (Soon)
This weekend has been busy! There were some long chapters during writing sessions – starting off the weekend with my normal writing time disrupted and postponed (successfully, for once) until the afternoon – and a Christmas get-together with the family. My brother got me a nice little showcase for my book and some prop stands for Book Signing events (image below).
It’s hard to tell how long Book Two will be. So far, I’m up to +75,000 words and still have much to add. Though, 50,000 words is still a lot of time left, so it’s hard to judge. It’s exciting to be so far in, but also a bit worrisome to have so much left to do at this point. I can’t squeeze it all in to keep it under an arbitrary word count – but neither can I make the book 500 pages.
Overall, a productive weekend – with more to come. Thanks to the holidays, I’m off from my day job on Monday and Tuesday the next two weeks. I plan on picking up a writing session on each day, which should add another four chapters, hopefully!
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Writing Prompt: Fail
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Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, your response must be an Action scene of some sort (quick pace, high tension, etc.).
Block, duck, parry, dodge. Cormac couldn’t keep up, Chakal’s blades were too fast. His skill too great. The dwarf was losing ground, his shields moving desperately to bat away the elf’s wicked weapons at the last possible moment. As the blade sank into his heart he knew he had failed.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Trinkets
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Its breathing disrupted with the sound of loose stone cracking beneath Fangdarr’s feet. He cursed his carelessness and held impossibly still, waiting for the beast to stir. The orc’s heart pounded within his chest. Every instinct begged him to flee. To run away and find a new dwelling. But Fangdarr did not. He could not. Too stubborn was his pride. Too great his need to prove himself, though no spectators were present to witness. This was his challenge. The true test of strength that he must undergo to know he is fit for this world. At least, that’s what Fangdarr tried to convince himself.
With bravery—or blind arrogance—the orc stepped closer, raising Driktarr high in the air. He disregarded the sounds beneath his feet, thinking only to cull his opponent with surprise his advantage. The stone shards crunched loudly beneath his weight, breaking the enchantment of slumber on the enormous being. As Fangdarr’s axe came down, the monster began to uncurl its limbs.
He did not know what had possessed him in that moment, but his weapon halted a moment before crashing through his victim’s thick skull. The creature looked up at him, concern and surprise in its eyes, wondering at the random appearance of the ferocious orc that sought to bring its end. Fangdarr, despite his self-imagined test for glory and validation, could not bring himself to squelch the life from those dark, gray eyes. For though they belonged to a monstrous creature, he did not feel malice nor hatred toward it, only pity.
Fangdarr lowered Driktarr’s blade to the ground and stared at the creature, as it stared at him. The terrified expression on its face slowly dwindled, replaced by rage. It rose to its full height within the tight confines of the cave, its head nearly scraping the stone above, and eyed the intruder with a harsh scowl. Even at Fangdarr’s impressive size, especially having only seen sixteen winters, the creature dwarfed him. It stood twice his height, with arms as thick as his muscled torso, and a gut doubling his girth. By now, Fangdarr had concluded that an ogre stood before him, as its heavy foot stomped forward, pressing its rage into the rocky floor beneath to show its discontent.
Uncertainty and regret swirled Fangdarr’s mind. Should he have slain the beast as it slept, or face it head on now? The ogre continued to stare at him, as if questioning his presence, though made no move to attack. Fangdarr pondered every action he could take. It seemed unlikely he could best the creature now that it was awake—not within the cave, at the least. He made eye contact with the gray eyes of the ogre. The same eyes that had previously halted his culling strike due to the raw fear that had been present within. Those orbs bore into him with all the demand they could muster.
Fangdarr could not decide the best course of action and time was fleeting with the ogre’s patience. Finally, before his mind could finish the thought, the orc’s mouth blurted, “Hello,” awkwardly. Fangdarr nearly covered his mouth in shock as the words passed his lips. It was too late. In the face of the giant, foul-smelling beast, the only action the orc had taken—after contemplating taking its life—was to greet it.
He watched as the ogre’s eyes continued to see red for many moments. Then, they slowly turned soft and a smile spread beneath, revealing a handful of missing teeth. “Hello!” came the ecstatic reply, much to Fangdarr’s surprise. He had never heard an ogre speak before, but the word came out slowly and somewhat odd, as if the creature’s mind needed time to rummage through its memories on how to speak. The orc wondered if all ogres spoke in such a manner, or if this one was perhaps feeble-minded.
The ogre extended a large hand forward, catching Fangdarr by surprise and forcing him into a defensive position. Its hand remained extended, though its face contorted with confusion, not understanding the seemingly random movement of its guest. “I’m Gub,” it spoke, still smiling, “what’s your name?”
Fangdarr was baffled. Did the creature not realize he had nearly claimed its life? After closer inspection, he believed the answer was obvious. Taking a step forward, he slid Driktarr back into its resting place on his back. His black-skinned hand disappeared beneath the ogre’s as it wrapped entirely around his hand and forearm and shook it roughly. “Fangdarr,” he replied.
Gub clapped his meaty hands together happily and bounced up and down, hitting his head against the low ceiling. After the third impact, the ogre finally looked up, wondering what had fallen on its head and rubbing his skull tenderly. As the ludicrous beast’s gaze fell on Fangdarr once more, it seemed to have forgotten he had ever existed. Its gray eyes lit up with pure joy at the sight of a visitor. Quickly, Gub turned around and started scraping through the small pile of junk it had collected.
“Here go!” Gub exclaimed with excitement, turning back to Fangdarr with what remained of a deer’s skull, though most of the bone had been broken or fragmented.
The orc looked at the ‘trinket’ curiously, then back to Gub’s waiting face, full of childish eagerness. Slowly, he extended his hand and grabbed the mutilated skull and smiled awkwardly to the ogre. He grunted in thanks, as he could not form the words, too lost in confusion at this entire endeavor. Never did he expect to find himself in the company of an ogre—on friendly terms—trading . . . trinkets.
Gub sat and watched Fangdarr hold his new gift with delight etched into every part of his face. Now, he waited patiently, a look of expectation replacing the happiness. Fangdarr caught on eventually—though it took a few moments to discern the odd beast’s desires—and rummaged through the small pouch at his waist. From within, the orc produced a dense, round rock that he had picked up the previous day to throw at birds and knock them from branches. Fangdarr showed the ‘trinket’ to Gub and held it out for the ogre, who’s eyes had once more lit up like the happiest being in Crein.
Fangdarr watched as Gub hugged the small stone tightly against his body, cherishing it as much as a loved one, and gently tucked it beneath the fold of its stomach for safekeeping. With a yelp of surprise, Fangdarr was lifted into the air and pressed against Gub’s chest, who wished to show his newfound friend the extent of his delight. The orc struggled to breath beneath the too-tight squeeze of his ally and gasped for air after being dropped to the ground carelessly.
Breathing heavily, Fangdarr rose to his feet and stared at Gub. “Friend,” he said calmly. One final check to be sure his safety was secured.
Gub flashed his smile once more and breathed a sigh of happiness, blowing gruesome breath into Fangdarr’s face that forced a few blinks. “Friend.”
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Weekly Progress Update
Not much has happened this week outside of writing. I got some Christmas shopping done and had some doctor’s appointments, still waiting to hear back. My wife and I have already told each other what we’re getting for Christmas. I’ll be excited to post one up on here around next week’s update.
Onward to writing! I got a lot done this weekend. Three good chapters that were really exciting to write. I’ve probably mentioned this before, but having two separate storylines in two entirely different settings is really fun. Challenging, but fun. The drastic differences between the two environments can be hard to hop between mentally, but throwing on some appropriate ambiance music helps a lot.
I released the Prologue to Book Two this week as a teaser for what’s to come. It doesn’t go into detail on other events and no spoilers are given, as it actually takes place early in the past, before even Orcblood Legacy: Honor takes place. (Note: This shouldn’t be necessary to say, but it is mature content containing scenes of violence)
That’s about all for this week! I really need to start reading through Book Two’s current progress and make some edits and remind myself of some of the earlier events. This book will probably be undergoing some heavy edits, as I plan to take more time to go through it prior to publishing.
See you next Sunday!
Madness: Prologue
“Elethain, why are we hunting a dragon, exactly?” the elf asked while brushing branches aside, clearly agitated.
“Because, Rotheilan, I am going to enslave it. Our people would benefit greatly from such an asset.”
“As would you, no doubt.” Rotheilan cast a smug look to his older brother, who only smirked in reply.
Eithas, the more skeptical twin of Rotheilan, leaned closer to better hear the conversation. “How are you even going to enslave it?” He was convinced their task would fail yet refused to allow his three brothers to continue without him. Despite Eithas’ unshakable loyalty, he never failed to question their eldest sibling.
Elethain sighed as he halted his march through the thick brush. In his moment of silence, the necromancer stared out through the screen of purplish-blue leaves that restricted most of his view. He could still see the sparkling light reflecting from the surface of the water far below. Their climb up the Eye of Cerenos, the ancient tree near their homeland, Y’thirya, had been more treacherous than expected. Elethain looked to his brothers, each beginning to wither from exhaustion due to traversing the enormous magical growth. Even Idérys, their youngest kin, who was often so full of youthful energy at just a mere two-hundred years old, could be seen dripping with sweat. Elethain had requested they join him in his quest—for the future of their people, supposedly.
Elves had been living on Y’thirya for countless millennia, typically in harmony. However, the elders spoke of a foreboding future. Though they held no mystical knowledge, they believed a great war was fated in the years to come. The date and its cast were unknown, yet they were confident the act would occur. Elethain was not one to believe such prophecies but found advantage in their ramblings. He had heard a myriad of tales of a dragon who rested atop the Eye of Cerenos. As a necromancer, the elf possessed the capability to enslave beings within his domination, to be used as he commanded. In truth, a dragon could aid in their future endeavors. However, enslaving the beast was no simple task.
“Well, we have to kill it first. From there, I should possess the ability to trap it within the Undying Realm where it will answer my call,” Elethain finally responded.
“Should?!” Eithas blurted in surprise. “You mean you are not certain?!”
Elethain smiled. “Should. Once it is dead, I do not expect it to be a problem. However, I have never done so before, of course. The ritual itself is not so difficult, it seems. The struggle lies thereafter.”
“What do you mean?” Rotheilan asked as he casually cut one of the thousands of luscious apples dangling from branches twisted around them with one of his swords. His second sword chopped down another just above his twin’s head, plopping it on his noggin with a dull thud and bringing a smile to each of their faces.
“Once it is trapped within the Undying Realm, it is no longer dead. It would be reanimated and with a constant will of its own. I must maintain control by sheer domination of will. That is how the link is created, master to slave. It can take years—dozens, even hundreds—to ensure complete control. During that time, I cannot risk summoning it to the Living Realm, or it could break the link.”
Idérys pressed further in eagerness, possessing only a lust for excitement and adventure. “What happens if it breaks the link?”
Their youngest brother’s curiosity brought a smile to Elethain’s face. “If the link breaks I can either attempt to maintain a semblance of it in order to reel the slave back in under my control, or I can relinquish it, which would simply eliminate the reanimated corpse.”
Each of Elethain’s brothers had nothing left to say, being far out of the realm of their knowledge—or interest. Unlike their eldest kin, they were warriors of the blade. The twins each favored a pair of swords to strike at their foes, while Idérys preferred the shield and spear. The band rested easily against thick branches as they ate their apples, pondering their task ahead. Elethain had assured his family the task could be completed, though he remained secretly unconvinced. Very few dragons had ever been conquered in the past, let alone reanimated to be the slave of a necromancer. However, he could not deny himself the chance of such a claim. His pursuit of power pushed him to heights others, even those who greatly surpassed his thousand-years of age, dared not risk. The warlock bit into his apple, hoping he could achieve all he desired.
* * * * *
“Elethain!” Idérys called out, his eyes full of terror in the moment the golden dragon’s massive clawed talon swiped at him.
The necromancer watched in horror as his youngest brother was torn apart in a spray of purple blood by the razor-sharp claw. Elethain looked on, trembling in fear, as Idérys’ form spilled its entrails onto the floor made of purplish-blue leaves. His brother’s hollow eyes remained open but unseeing—a sight that would haunt Elethain for the rest of his long life.
Elethain broke from his distracted state as Rotheilan and Eithas bellowed in unison at the fate of their kin. They each stood atop the horns of the drake and pitifully swatted at its eyes with their negligible steel. The dragon roared in annoyance and shook its head violently, throwing them to the ground. Elethain could only watch as the godlike beast turned and retracted its tail, aiming to smash the twins against the ground of its home platform.
As the monstrous appendage came plummeting toward the pair, Elethain conjured a wall of black magic over top of his brothers. Rotheilan and Eithas stared blankly from their prone position as the massive, mace-like tail smashed into the barrier. They cheered to their eldest sibling for saving them. In their excitement, they failed to notice the giant golden tail whooshing through the air once more, slamming into the barrier above. This time they did not cheer, as large cracks appeared in the magical shield.
“Elethain!” Rotheilan called, looking toward his brother who was struggling with all his might to maintain the forcefield.
Beads of sweat poured down the necromancer’s face as he attempted to gather the strength to fortify the shield that prevented his brothers from certain death. “Get up, you fools!”
As if they had forgotten their position, the twins quickly attempted to rise. They managed to turn around and nearly escape before the beast’s tail came crashing down once more—through the barrier.
Elethain watched as the twins faded from view beneath the heavy limb. His gaze could not be averted as the appendage peeled away and revealed the crushed elven warriors cemented to the armored scales. Their once pale skin resembled a massive bruise with blood being pressed through each pore. The necromancer could see bones protruding from their bodies where they managed to pierce the skin. Elethain’s mouth wavered in a feeble attempt to form words.
While words were impossible, noise was not. The elf screamed as loud as he could, pressing all his emotion into a single outcry. Flashes of his brothers’ destroyed forms raced through his mind as he continued to scream. His eyes grew wide in his maniacal state of pain. Elethain reached out to each side with his hands and conjured a dozen large spear-like manifestations of black magic, all pointing to the monster that had eliminated his family.
With another cry of rage and sorrow, Elethain launched every magical spear toward his enemy. They crashed against the dragon’s scales, though could not pierce the hide. The monster started running toward Elethain, its mountainous form shaking the thick branches beneath its feet, determined to eliminate the last of its intruders. As it approached, the necromancer only grew more maniacal. This was it—his moment. Deep inside, he knew the fate of his kin was his own fault, though he refused to accept such knowledge. The demon charging toward him was the cause. There was no regard for Elethain demanding they wake the slumbering beast. To threaten it within its home when all it hoped for was peace and solitude. There was only the conviction that the dragon was the assassin to press the blade, not he.
Elethain roared in denial and forcefully extended his left hand high into the air. As he did so, an enormous magical hand appeared in front of the drake’s face. As the elf clasped his own hand shut, the magical formation followed suit, clamping tightly around the beast’s neck. The dragon roared in anger at being restricted. It thrashed wildly, snapping with its jaws and swinging its tail. It didn’t matter. Elethain kept his hand clenched tightly to keep his prey immobilized while the other shook harshly in the air. To the side of the monster’s exposed neck, a large spear began to form. The shape matched Idérys’ spear, driving Elethain’s pain more. But he needed it. His anguish turned to strength as he felt every emotion running deep through his veins. His body felt empty yet so full of life due to the sorrow. Such an odd feeling. As if one was a shell that contained too much, but nothing could be seen inside.
The necromancer struggled to maintain control of the dragon while also building up a tremendous amount of energy needed for his weapon. Just a bit more . . ..
Then, the dragon stopped thrashing. Elethain’s confusion nearly broke his concentration. The mythical beast stared directly into his frenzied eyes, seeing the pain behind them. The passion, the power, the lust. The golden drake simply maintained eye contact as the spear was launched toward its neck at blinding speed. It never blinked as it telepathically spoke to Elethain. I forgive you.
Elethain’s eyes widened in surprise and quickly turned to sadness as he watched the spear pierce through the dragon’s exposed neck, just behind the jaw and into the drake’s brain. Tears welled up in his eyes and he fell to his knees. The tormented elf cried out in pain as the dragon’s eyes slowly slid closed with a final low exhale. He sobbed uncontrollably as the shining, golden scales that encompassed its body turned to a dull gray, one by one. His painful throbs of woe only grew as he made eye contact with Idérys’ ripped corpse a short distance away. During his channeling, Elethain failed to notice that the dragon’s thrashing caused the twins to be thrown to the side in a shattered heap.
He continued to weep for what seemed an eternity. His brothers had fallen in his quest. His pursuit of power. For a purpose they cared naught. Their only concern had been for Elethain’s safety. His guilt was immense in that moment as the realization struck him hard. Never before had he felt such agonizing pain as his mind assaulted itself in guilt. After many grieving moments, the necromancer finally stood from his huddled-over position and walked over to the dragon.
In the presence of his target, all thoughts of his guilt faded immediately. Too drawn was he to the power at hand. His mind shut out considerations of consequence as he produced the transparent orb in his necklace. Eyes wide with lust, Elethain began channeling the magic needed to absorb the dragon’s faded corpse, trapping it in the Undying Realm and within his pendant. The ritual did not take long. The beast’s corpse turned to a trail of energy and soared toward the orb. Once gone from the Living Realm, the godlike drake could be seen peering around from inside the small globe, fully revived. The orb emitted a bright golden light that resembled its captive.
Elethain pulled the pendant to his face and stared at his slave with a grin. “Hello, Aurum.” The dragon gave no response other than a deep sigh of hopelessness. Not at its own fate, but its captor. The irritated necromancer tucked the necklace away and stared straight ahead to where its corpse had been. All that remained were the trample marks of its previous existence atop the Eye of Cerenos and the mutilated husks of his brothers. He walked to the center of the platform between each of his sibling’s corpses. With little effort, Elethain called upon each of them to heed his call.
The elven warriors began to rise.
Writing Prompt: Captive
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, you must write TWO entries (each 50-words), but using the Topic in two separate meanings/themes.
Entry A: Locked tightly within her lover’s embrace, Aesthéa could feel the continual depreciation of her heart’s barriers. She had never felt so exposed and vulnerable. So valued and cherished. Her unlikely companion had captivated her completely, despite the festering knowledge of her kind’s impending disapproval in the back of her mind.
Entry B: She was broken—mentally and physically. Alice could not remember how many moons had passed since she was taken. She only knew pain and the heart-stopping horror knowing there would be more to come. Her terrified gasp and subsequent whimpers only stretched Brutigarr’s smile wider as he entered the tent.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Intruder
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Poking his head over the last bit of rock in his ascent, Fangdarr peered into the darkened mouth of the cave. It appeared almost villainous. Teeth of stone had been carved over much of the entrance, though seemingly long ago by the wither of the cave’s face. He pulled himself up onto the shallow cliff and looked down to where he had started his climb. It was over twice his height to the hardened dirt. With luck, most trespassers should be repelled by the difficult climb alone—should they notice it at all. It was by sheer chance Fangdarr had glanced upwards, catching glimpse of the shadowed entrance beyond.
As he stood at the brink of darkness, his skin became tighter from the chillness that emanated from within. Fangdarr took a step forward, then another. With each pace the cool air only grew worse, safe from the annihilating warmth of the sun’s light. Not perfect, he thought to himself, but safe. As he took continued deeper into the abyss of the pitch black cave, his fingers sliding along the stone wall and ceiling to guide him, he cursed himself for making such a claim too soon.
Despite the icy cave’s unwelcoming embrace, the orc could hear the rhythmic breathing of a slumbering being further in. He could feel the air around him growing warmer in slight. It was impossible to see the form on the other side of the stone wall, though it had to be large by the amount of heat that could be felt flooding the area.
Fangdarr gripped his axe tightly before taking care to step lightly. Even his heavily calloused bare feet could feel the sting of cold weaken as they made contact with new ground. The orc cautiously peeked around the corner, careful not to scrape against the wall. He nearly gasped aloud in surprise when his eyes could finally pick out the creature ahead, sleeping peacefully.
Based on the form his eyes could see from the emanating heat, he could only assume the monstrosity was some sort of ogre or giant. Never had he encountered either, only the stories of his mentor could help put a name to the hulking mass a spear’s-length away. His mind raced over the few odd tales Tormag had shared. What was the difference between the two? Fangdarr questioned, racking his brain. Finally, he recalled a single discussion:
‘Lad, the thing ye need t’ know about ogres is they be dumber than a stack o’ gnomes. They may be big and can squeeze the life out o’ an orc or dwarf, don’t ye doubt, but they can be bested by playin’ smart. Now, giants, on the other hand, are the worse o’ the bunch from what I’m told. Never seen one meself. From what I hear, ye’ll know one when ye see it. And if ye see it. Run.’
Fangdarr eyed the cave’s large inhabitant with curiosity and concern. It had taken him another two days just to find this place—a delay he did not wish to repeat. His hands clutched the shaft of his marvelous weapon more tightly. He needed this cave.
Weekly Progress Update
Happy weekend! There is a lot to bring up for this week’s update.
Thursday, I met with my local library and discussed hosting a Writing Discussion, which will be taking place on Thursday, May 23rd, 2019. It is quite a ways away, but I’m looking forward to it. They also were gracious enough to accept four donated copies of Orcblood Legacy: Honor, which will be available for patrons to check out within their New Release and Local Author sections.
Later that same night, I went to my grandfather’s wake as he passed away earlier in the week. It was good to see some family that I hadn’t connected with in a while. Also, the word about my book had spread and – to my surprise – many were asking questions about it. A cousin of mine even mentioned his shared interest in writing, and he and I met today to discuss writing. I think it’s something he’ll come to enjoy, as I have.
We had some great discussions about writing and things to consider that don’t often stand out at first glance. Logic, reader perspective, and realism to name a few. Hopefully he doesn’t find it too overwhelming, as many do, and continues with his interest. If not, we’ve all been there, even myself.
Now, onward to Book Two. My health took a hit this weekend, but I managed to get a short chapter in on Friday, and a long one in today on Sunday. Saturday was a bit of a loss, unfortunately. A combination of a decline in my health and my daughter deciding to take her feral spirit to heart. Also, I shot myself in the foot a bit, and didn’t do some research in advance and made a last-minute change in an important part of a new race’s introduction on Saturday. That really hurt the word count, but now all of the details are fleshed out and I shouldn’t run into any more trouble with that particular issue.
As always, I won’t give away too much detail, but Fangdarr is feeling much more at home in the new area he just walked into. That is, until some harsh demands are made and his rage begins to build. Next week’s writing sessions will be pretty eventful and I’m looking forward to them. It’ll really be one character’s time to shine, to say the least. (Disclaimer: Actually, as I just finished writing that last sentence, I decided to make a change in the flow of the story. Woe to the whims of writing.)
Tune in next week!
Writing Prompt: Rot
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, you must write about the Topic using the actual word twice. You can alter the word as needed (such as ‘rotting’, ‘rotten’, ‘rotted’, etc.) but must incorporate it two times within the 50-word response.
Prompt: Rot
The stench was repugnant. Pus seeped steadily from the rotten and diseased flesh, bringing the taste of bile to their throats. The bunovir’s progenies feasted endlessly on what remained of their abandoned friend. Even now, the carnivorous harvesters carved their way through the decrepit heap, their stomachs bulging with rot.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Sleep
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
He was exhausted. It had been days since the night the trolls had attacked him in his camp. Sleep had not come easy since, with his sense always keen on edge, even while drifting to the brink of slumber. Fangdarr’s body was weary and slow. He walked through the forest, aimlessly, as if his feet were thick in muck. The orc had no direction in mind. No end mark of destination.
The lack of sleep weakened his resolve. It was becoming harder and harder to stifle his trapped emotions regarding Vrutnag’s passing. But still he forced them deeper, hidden beneath the growing frustration of his journey alone. He missed his brother and the old dwarf who had become his mentor. He missed the things he had taken for granted. Sleep. Shelter. Warmth. Yet, his stubborn pride demanded he press on and never look back.
Fangdarr walked through the Lithe in a daze as his body begged for sleep, but his mind spewed rejection at every turn. Finally, on the fifth day since the attack, the orc collapsed onto the rough ground.
Waking abruptly, he scanned his eyes groggily around his surroundings. Immediately he was in a defensive stance, expecting some enemy to be on his peripheral. But after many moments, none came. Fangdarr slowly began to collect his thoughts. Last he remembered, he was lumbering through the woods in the early afternoon, just after mid-day sun’s peak. Now, the sun had just started its ascent for the following day, peeking barely above what little of the horizon he could see through the lattice of trees. He cursed himself as he realized sleep had taken him nearly a full day. Never before had he slept so long.
With luck, he had not been harmed during his unconsciousness and Driktarr remained in place across his back. The orc held no faith in the gods but wondered if he had been watched over or simply spared misfortune by luck. In either case, Fangdarr breathed a sigh of total relief as his arms stretched high in the air, no longer encumbered by fatigue.
His renewed vigor had been more than one of body. Now, his mind was set to task. He would not be ambushed nor caught without shelter and sleep until the weight of exhaustion crushed him into the dirt again. Fangdarr needed to find a suitable home.
Traveling farther south toward the mountains, Fangdarr had settled on the decision to find a cave. If he could manage to find one well-hidden, or at least defensible enough to allow him to repel intruders, he would be safe enough. After all, the cave his family lived in for his entire life had never once been discovered. Though, perhaps being between the Zharnik clan and nearby human villages to the north had dissuaded any of either race from trespassing. Part of him urged to consider returning home where he knew it was safe, but he cast the thought aside. It was time for Fangdarr to forge his own path.
Weekly Progress Update
First, I’ll start by saying that Orcblood Legacy: Honor is officially in its first bookstore! I met with a local shop and they’ve agreed to put the book on their shelves, as well as do a book signing event in early 2019.
My next goal is to try to get onto the shelf of more stores, including the name-brand chains such as Barnes and Noble, Books-a-Million, etc. It’ll be a difficult process that may not prove successful, but I’ll try my best to get Fangdarr out into the world.
If you’d like assist, Orcblood Legacy: Honor is already available on their websites. The more orders they sell on their website, the less risk they consider the investment and the easier it will be for me to convince them that Fangdarr is a ma— err . . . an ORC of the public!
Barnes and Noble
Books-a-Million
As usual, I wrote some more on Book Two this weekend. I won’t give away spoilers, but it’s been a really fun set of scenes to write, with more planned. Let’s just say Fangdarr is far from his homeland and in a world vastly different than his own.
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