Month: May 2019

Writing Prompt: Resistance

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Special Rule: Let’s go for something foreboding.

It is done.
Your friends are dead. Your body is broken.
Those who remain turn in terror as reality is discovered.
It was always fated so.
There was never a chance. Yet you struggled. You resisted.
Why?
Failure was inevitable. My will, indomitable. Yet you stayed.
Was death your wish?

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Skirmish (Cormac): Relief

Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.

“We need to go!” Cormac took his wife’s hand and began pulling her away as his instinct for survival screamed in his head.

Resisting his tug, the dwarven woman turned her head back toward the approaching footsteps that were growing louder with each passing moment. “We need to find Ori!” She managed to rip her hand out of Cormac’s grasp and took off running toward the danger, calling out for her son.

Grabbing his bald head in frustration, Cormac sprinted after his family praying to Bothain that they would find Ori in time. With powerful strides driven by desperation, he caught up to his wife and frantically scanned the area. Every time his wife shouted for the boy, he winced in fear. There was no hiding now. Their only hope of escape was finding their son as soon as possible.

The oncoming footsteps changed from their feeble attempts at stealth to pounding stomps.

“ORI!” Cormac yelled as loud as he could, knowing discretion was no longer necessary. Both of the boy’s parents were spinning to look in every direction, their eyes crazed with the fear of what was coming.

“There he is, Cormac!”

The dwarf turned to his wife and traced her gaze to the southwest where Ori was descending a tall tree. With a profound sense of relief, Cormac let out a whimper at the sight of his son. Until the dark silhouette of a dozen charging orcs appeared behind him.

Weekly Progress Update

I didn’t do what I thought I was going to do regarding Book Three. But, I’ve made the decision to start from scratch after reviewing some of what I had already written. As already discovered, it was ‘fine’. But I’m looking for a bit better than fine.

I suspect that it may take me some time to get around to re-starting Book Three. It’s been bugging me that I haven’t made any progress, but I think I need to accept that I need to take my time with this one. Overall, my biggest fear is obviously stopping entirely. But I don’t think that’ll happen. I’m too far in and love writing. I’m just going to start on Book Three in a bit of time. It may be weeks, it may be months.

I don’t want to put it on hold, but I think I’m just sort of distracted with Madness and other non-writing things and it’s breaking my concentration. There’s about a month left for beta readers to give me their feedback on Madness – I know most haven’t made it too far yet, which is alright.

One step at a time. 🙂

Writing Prompt: Equality

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Special Rule: Not really a special rule, per se. This week is about using a hot topic in today’s world.

“Zaladim told you to leave Riveton, Gertrude,” the large, rugged thug whispered maliciously as he eyed the woman’s cart of wares.

Every instinct in Gerty screamed for her to run. But she had worked too hard to get here. Her brow furrowed in anger. “No man will drive me out.”

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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Breathe

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“Whoa, son. I’ve got ye,” Theiran said as he caught Bitrayuul. It was obvious from the half-orc’s wobbled movements and the slow trail of blood that he had been severely wounded. The dwarf slid his arm around Bitrayuul’s waist to steady him as they continued to make their way through the winding tunnels toward Tarabar.

With each painful step, the half-orc grew more and more weary, floating in and out of consciousness. The multiple wounds he had suffered refused to clot, leaving him with little time.

“Hold on. Ye just keep holdin’ on, lad. We’re almost there.”

After a long while of slow progress, Theiran could hear trolls ahead. “Oh, Bothain ye be crude!” He looked around for somewhere to hide Bitrayuul. Nothing, just bare stone in a tight tunnel. Resuming his progress, the councilman decided the half-orc would be safer with him. Holding Bitrayuul in one arm and his hammer in the other, Theiran prayed that only one troll lay in their path and not a dozen.

Cautiously, the pair stepped closer to the noise. The senator tightened his grip on his weapon and reconsidered his decision to keep his nearly unconscious companion with him. “Bah, we made it this far!”

Theiran turned the last corner ready to face whatever awaited him. His expression turned to confusion, then suppressed laughter as he witnessed the source of the sounds. A handful of trolls were trapped in agony beneath collapsed stones, unable to die. “Son, is this yer doin’?” he turned to Bitrayuul, only to see the half-orc was completely unconscious—or dead. The dwarf gave him a shake, but no response came. Then another. “Bothain’s beard . . . Wake up, lad!”

No response came.

Disregarding his own safety, Theiran tenderly laid Bitrayuul down on the cold stone. He looked at the wounds on his savior’s shoulder and forearm. Luckily, the gash on the half-orc’s forearm had finally started to staunch the flow, but the same could not be said for the grievous wound near his neck.

“Bothain, help him!” the dwarf prayed. Never did he ever expect to beg his god to save the life of one with orcish blood. But Theiran knew that Bitrayuul had gotten the wounds in his rescue. A rescue for a dwarf.

Theiran let out a string of curses as he inspected the half-orc’s shoulder more closely. It was already starting to fester and the senator held no supplies that could offer aid. He put his hands on Bitrayuul, uncertain of how to proceed.

Do I just drag ye home? Keep ye still and try to find some way to cauterize the wound? Bothain, HELP ME!

The dwarf was starting to grow frantic. He had seen dozens die before. Friends, allies, enemies. Some in his grasp, some from afar. But this one tugged at his heartstrings relentlessly. The calm and collected senator found himself nearly in tears as he pounded his fists on Bitrayuul’s torso.

“Breathe, ye damned fool!”

Weekly Progress Update

Yay, got some writing in this weekend. It wasn’t any new progress on Book Three, but I’ve caught up on my Skirmishes – and even got next Tuesday’s done in advance. I hate falling behind.

I’m hoping to go to the library today or something to get my outline organized. For some reason, I can’t bring myself to do it in the morning, and during the day is too noisy with a toddler running around. It’s just a weird quirk. I write in the mornings, but I have to organize during the day – I can’t switch them. Oh well, find what works and stick with it, I suppose.

Outlining for Book Three aside, this week is my Author Event at my local library. I still need to make a brief PowerPoint for that today as well, but it shouldn’t take long. It’s not really about me and my books, specifically, more to talk to patrons about writing in general.

That’s all for this week!

Writing Prompt: Contrarian

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Special Rule: This one is much longer. Sorry for not keeping it under 50 words, just couldn’t stop.

“Please, my dear. I need a place to stay.”

The innkeeper eyed him with suspicion. Even the beggar’s low hood could do nothing to hide the angled jawline. She hadn’t seen an elf in years and could not deny her curiosity was piqued. He seemed ragged and in need, to say the least. “Fine,” the woman conceded, “one night.”

“Oh, thank you, thank you!” The elf stepped through the door on light feet to show his gratitude. His smile was as infectious as his face beautiful. As he threw his arms around the innkeeper, she couldn’t help but blush from the embrace.

With his arms around her, the woman felt glad that she did not turn the elf away. Long had it been since another had held her so, she realized. No romantics were necessary, just the warmth of another pressed against oneself. She felt herself melt as he continued to whisper his gratitude in her ear, soft with earnest.

She looked up at him, those gorgeous eyes gazing back. Only the once tender expression had turned to the sinister grin of wickedness. Pure thrill evident by the creases of the elf’s eyes as his true intentions became apparent. It was not until he had witnessed her face shift from comfort to fear that he finally pressed his blade into her spine.

The pain was so overwhelming and fierce that she could not even scream. The woman could only stand helplessly in his murderous grasp, paralyzed. Yet her eyes remained unaffected. She watched as the elf relished in her anguish. His huddled and seemingly decrepit form stretched upward in ecstasy.

“Thank you,” Chakal whispered in the same gracious voice he had emulated previously to earn her trust. He wiped the tears from her eyes with a long finger and shivered with excitement as his victim seemed to grow even more terrified at his bare contact. Nothing pleased the assassin more. He removed his dagger from her back and let her limp form crash to the floor. Smiling at her once more, Chakal wiped the blood from his blade on her cheek. “Thank you,” he repeated before leaving the inn.

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Writing Prompt: Forest

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Special Rule: This week, I had a strong urge to write about Chakal. I’ll be doing two posts, but neither will be limited to 50-words. Sometimes you just have to write until it’s done.

“Chakal is . . .,” Elethain began, struggling to form words he deemed adequate. He sighed. “Everyone has a scale. Some sort of voice within. Not him. There is only black. We elves believe our souls to be eternal. Some believe we become trees when we die. There is little I fear in life, but I fear Chakal’s tree, should it ever come.”

Bitrayuul scoffed. “You fear a tree?”

The necromancer did not appreciate the amusement. “Yes, half-breed. I fear that even just one poisoned, blackened tree can mute the beauty of a forest.”

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Skirmish (Cormac): Stroll

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“Don’t ye go too far now, Ori!”

“Bah, let the lad have fun. It’s been a decade since he’s stretched his legs outside.” The dwarf slid his hand into his companion’s as they padded easily through the woods. He took in a deep breath, feeling the cool, open air in his lungs.

Catching a glimpse of her husband’s eyes closed in bliss, the dwarf woman smiled. “It’s good to see ye outside the wall. I don’t know why ye stay, Cormac. No one’s come knockin’ save a few human merchants in the last few hundred years.”

Cormac smirked weakly. In truth, the loyal defender agreed with her, but such was his duty. He slowed his march and looked at her before breaking into a thin smile. The dwarf had always wondered why she had chosen him above all others. There were plenty of other suitors for her to choose from—many with more lucrative paths than that of a gatekeeper in the Shield—especially one as beautiful as she. Yet, she had chosen him.

Letting out a heavy sigh, Cormac ran a hand through her thick, auburn hair. “We’ve had this conversation before, love.” Her eyes closed as she felt the warmth of his hand against her cheek.  “It be my duty. Whether anything has happened from outside the gate or not, someone has to keep watch. There be whispers that I may be in line for Captain, someday. Then I’d be doin’ much more than just starin’ at this pretty forest from afar.”

Kissing his hand, the dwarf woman simply smiled in silence. There was more she wished to say—as always—but knew it was a battle to never be won. She turned away and started walking again.

Cormac felt his stomach tighten with her lack of words. He knew his choices were not favored by his wife, a fact that pained him greatly. But what choice did he have? He was nearly four centuries old already. Over two-hundred years had been spent atop the wall, putting in his time. Now, with opportunity to climb the ranks at his feet, how could he consider walking away? For what purpose? To become a craftsmen? A merchant? No, Cormac knew he was suited for little else than the dutiful watcher—as did she.

“Where is Ori?” the woman asked, breaking her husband’s concentration. The look of concern on her face proved she had been scanning the woods for many moments with no sign of their son.

Looking in each direction, Cormac saw nothing. “Bah, he’s probably just waitin’ behind a tree to spook us. Ye know how the lad is, he loves his antics.” He put a comforting hand on his companion’s shoulder and smiled with reassurance.

His wife was less convinced, though she tried to force herself to relax. “Yer probably right.” Her expression turned into a genuine smile as she recalled her son’s past attempts of humor. “He does love his pranks, sure as stones.”

Together they walked, hand in hand, listening to the crunch of the fallen leaves beneath their boots. It wasn’t until they had taken near a dozen steps before Cormac stopped in his tracks.

“What is it, love?” Her concerned gaze followed his eyes to the ground in confusion. After a few moments in silence she finally realized why he had stopped.

The sound of leaves crunching from multiple footfalls could be heard.

Weekly Progress Update:

Not much to report this week. I decided to take a break during the transition between Madness and Book Three – hence no Skirmish or Writing Prompt this week.

For Madness, I had pretty much already planned out the storyline the day I started writing Honor a long, long time ago. So, other than the fine details, I already knew the A -> B, as I call it.

I’ve got the primary outline for Book Three completed, but as I was writing it, it didn’t feel quite right. I mentioned that last week and that I wanted to take some more time to go through and organize the details of the outline just to fine tune it. That didn’t happen, unfortunately.

I really need to get back on track. There’s no real reason why but I still get stressed if I miss my scheduled content or don’t put out an adequate amount of progress towards the next book. I have to remind myself that it’s only 1-2 weeks and in the long term it really doesn’t matter. I just don’t want to rush it, is all. I’m still going to write and still want to, I just need to take a quick breather in between this time. Otherwise I’ll just force progress for the sake of it and it’ll just feel like a chore.

Thanks for being patient. I’ve got some exciting new characters planned for Book Three, sorry I can’t give out any details (to avoid spoilers from Madness).

A few copies of Madness are out to some readers and they’re chugging away on feedback. I’m eager to see what people think but am forcing myself not to slam them with a hundred questions on what their thoughts are. They’ve got about 6 more weeks to edit before I need their feedback in order to try to publish around September.

Also, my first ever Author event is only 10 days away at my local library. I still need to prepare a presentation, but I’m excited for that.

See you next week, hopefully I’ll have some actual progress to report.

Writing Prompt: Harlequin

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The king stared at the groveling peasant with unwavering disapproval. As the royal executioner padded closer, whetstone gliding across his blade, the whimpering peon’s pleas only grew louder. When the blade came crashing down, silence came with it. Even the king’s gathered nobles were stunned.

And yet the harlequin danced.

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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Relentless

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The doubts he had felt before we gone, replaced by the intense lust for bloodshed. Fangdarr’s roaring swipes carried out over his victim’s terrified screams and blinded him to their pain. There was only the kill. The thrill of the hunt.

Fury and rage drove his axe faster and faster as he chased down the townspeople. He paid no attention to their feeble attempts at defense—or even the lack thereof by the women and children. There was no time for thoughts, no morality. Only the insatiable need for more. More. It didn’t matter how deep his axe cleaved or how much of his vitality it had restored, Fangdarr always felt an unquenchable thirst.

From the other end of the village, Raz’ja too relished in his sport. Though he maintained the clarity to keep an eye on his feral companion and watched with glee. The troll smiled wide in self-appreciation. He knew his wisdom in aligning himself with Fangdarr would pay off, but witnessing the orc in his element put to shame even his high expectations.

Fangdarr charged onward. The trail of bodies left in his wake formed a bloody path from the town’s entrance through to the center. It did not take long for even the guards to abandon their courage and take flight with the citizens. Yet the orc followed.

A man donned in his proud guard’s uniform tripped in front of the rampaging orc and screamed in fear. He quickly returned to his feet and frantically sprinted away toward a nearby building, the invader close behind. Opening the door, the guard rushed inside to seek a hiding place in his desperation. His eyes grew wide as he saw a frightened woman or child behind every corner. The shocked expression on his face was no match for their own, however, as he ran up to the nearest child hiding behind a piece of furniture and pushed her out of the way to take her place.

Fangdarr entered the room just as the man had shoved the young girl into the open. A thousand warnings raised in his mind to stop. His conscious begged him in his mother’s voice. This is wrong, Fangdarr. Stop. Do not hurt them.

But he couldn’t listen. There was only the hunt. Without hesitation, the orc swung his axe through the child that stared up at him in fear and confusion. Her face never changed even as his weapon cleaved it in half.

Fangdarr bent down to tear the ears off the girl’s severed halves and tucked them into his nearly bursting pouch.

Not a single moment of hesitation was given by the orc before he turned his axe toward the man whimpering behind the piece of furniture. Whether he cried out of fear for himself or in remorse for the fate he had imposed on the child, it mattered naught. He pressed his face against the wooden floor and knew his life was forfeit. He could run no longer. He waited for what seemed an eternity for the blinding light of death to take him with the orc’s axe.

Just as the orc was about to paint the floor with the guard’s blood, a woman charged out from her hiding place. Fangdarr turned his attention toward her, thinking to intercept her lunging attack. But it was not he the woman was after. He halted his swing mid-air to see the woman, tears streaming down her face, wielding a small pronged utensil. She dove toward the man on the ground and began stabbing into his skull relentlessly, crying out in rage and pain. After the cowardly man beneath her was gurgling his own lifeblood, she rose to her feet and charged Fangdarr.

Weekly Progress Update:

Alright, on to Book Three!

So, I didn’t get much writing done this weekend. I’m part-way through Chapter 3. However, while I’ve laid out the general plot outline for how I’d like the story to go, I keep feeling like something is off – and I don’t like it. Every paragraph I start is just feeling sort of bland. Overall, I’m probably overthinking it and it is most likely fine. But I’m not looking for fine.

So, I halted my progress this morning and decided to go through my outline in much more detail than I normally would. This time, I’m going to do a bit of a roadmap of every scene just to get a more in-depth feel for every step of the book. That’s not my normal process, but this time my standard isn’t working. No big deal, it just means I need to take it slower. I don’t want to rush into the next book and truck through mediocre progress for the sake of it. Quality needs to stay in mind.

That’s about it for this weekend. I fleshed out the names of the key character I’ll be introducing in the book (this halted my progress on Saturday, which was annoying). This week, I’ll start to look at my outline in detail and analyze it. My hope is I can find the reason why it seems off and bland – then correct it. The content I’ve written so far (excluding the Prologue, which I thoroughly enjoyed) in the first few chapters just has not been interesting. And if it’s not interesting to me, it won’t be interesting to you. So, before I make any more progress, I’m going back to the drawing board and starting over with only about two days of effort lost. I’ll let you know next weekend how things are going.

On the note of Madness, Beta Readers have their copies (or will receive them in the mail today) to get started on feedback. They’ll have as much as they can get to back to me by the end of June. From there, I’ll probably need about two months to go through everything and get ready for publishing. So, we’re looking at September for now.

Writing Prompt: Art

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Chakal stepped back to inspect his work, a wide grin spread across his cheeks. “Ah,” he began, filled with satisfaction as he ran his finger down the eviscerated torso of his victim before flicking the blood into the pool beneath his feet. “Now that is art!”

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