Author: Bernard Bertram
Writing Prompt: Broken
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Special Rule: None this time!
Malice jumped with a start as Bitrayuul’s hand fell upon her shoulder. He backed away slowly, seeing her bloodshot eyes and the blades in her shaking hands.
“It’s alright,” he comforted with caution.
Upon closer inspection, Bitrayuul could see the stains upon her clothes—and the thousand cuts that made them.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Maul
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Thankfully, the vicious trolls had not noticed him yet. Bitrayuul slowly rose to his feet, careful not to make even the slightest noise. The beasts continued to cackle in delight as every time they slid their blade across Theiran’s skin a new line of blood followed.
The dwarf, no novice to pain, simply stared at them with a face hardened and grim. His captors must have grown tired of his insults, for the senator had been bound and gagged. Though a dozen new wounds could be seen, the worst was where his left ear had been ripped off before being pulled into the mines. Blood continued to slowly pour down his neck in a thick ooze.
To the left, Bitrayuul watched as a pair of the creatures carefully inspected the dwarf’s finally crafted maul. Even together they could hardly lift the dense hammer, but he could tell by the sinister look on their faces that they had considered using it for their own devious purposes.
Bitrayuul took a slow breath. His body ached from exhaustion and wounds alike. He had no weapons other than a single bone-spiked fist—a useless tool against such enemies. The half-orc pondered his next move. After such great efforts to reach the senator, he had finally reached him.
Now what? I can’t fight them all, not without fire.
Staring around the small opening, the half-orc prayed he would find a small torch. But it was useless. These creatures feared fire more than anything else, there was no chance they’d carry something with them that could provide it.
What’s the point? We’re going to die here anyway. I’m going to get what I came for.
As if nothing else mattered, Bitrayuul rushed forward as silently as possible to the pair holding the maul. Stabbing one troll through the neck with his remaining gauntlet, it’s attempted wail of pain was muffled by gargling blood in its throat. He paid it no mind, knowing it would soon heal and be back in the fray. The half-orc’s attention immediately turned to the next troll. Luckily, as the first he had struck grasped its neck in agony, the heavy maul dropped from its arms and crushed the foot of the remaining creature. This time, unfortunately, its howls of pain were not stifled and the rest of their group turned in curiosity.
Once their gazes met the intruder, they were up in a heartbeat with daggers in hand. Theiran managed to kick out at one as it passed, tripping it to the stone. Before it could react, the bound dwarf lifted his boot and brought his heel down hard onto the beast’s skull. A squelching noise came, paired with a groan of pain from the troll beneath. But the dwarf didn’t stop. His boot raised again and again, slamming into the troll’s skull repetitively until it shattered bone.
Bitrayuul took the maul from the temporarily incapacitated duo and lifted it in the air. He was amazed at just how heavy the weapon was as it threw him off balance. Luckily, his back foot slid outwards to catch him enough to divert the hammer forward—straight into the first approaching troll. It’s skull blew apart in an explosion of blood and bone shards as it fell beneath the thick steel.
Even with four of their adversaries currently disabled—yet mending quickly—the last two continued their charge toward the half-orc. Bitrayuul strained to pull the heavy maul back into the air in time, but he was too slow. His eyes clenched in pain as the stone blade in his opponent’s grip sliced through the side of his lifted shoulder, barely avoiding his neck. Luckily, as the other dagger came in, he managed to intercept it with his left-hand, blocking the sharp edge with the bones along his knuckles.
In the moment that the troll began reversing its momentum to swipe at Bitrayuul again, the young warrior had managed to bash outward with the hammer, driving the troll back into its ally. From behind the backpedalling beasts, Theiran leapt onto the back of the furthest creature. He had cut himself free with the dropped dagger from the troll he had disabled and cut the throat of the rear troll.
“Me hammer, lad!” the dwarf called out while tossing Bitrayuul the dagger.
On instinct alone the half-orc tossed the maul toward the senator, forgetting about the troll between them. As the weapon lobbed forward, the poor creature tried to catch it but the item proved too heavy. Beneath the hefty steel, the troll fell to the ground at Theiran’s feet. The dwarf didn’t miss a beat. He bent to grab the hammer from the troll and immediately pulled an odd stone from his belt and struck it against the head of his weapon as hard as he could.
Bitrayuul had to cover his eyes as the stone produced a hundred bright sparks in the cave, igniting the troll that the senator had cut. In a burst of fire, the troll wailed in agony and rolled on the ground in feeble attempt to extinguish itself. The half-orc still stood defensively with the dagger in hand, though the remaining five trolls all scrambled in fear as their wounds still began mending.
In the midst of the chaos, Theiran walked confidently over to Bitrayuul, completely disregarding the frantic trolls. As if on cue, the single flaming troll bumped into one of its allies in its desperation, igniting the next. Then the next. Within moments, five of the group were engulfed in flames and screeching in the cave. The last, unwounded, ran down the tunnel in the opposite direction in fear for its life.
Staring blankly at the dwarf, Bitrayuul could only blink at how quickly the scale had tipped in their favor. He opened his mouth multiple times to speak, but could not find the words.
Thankfully, Theiran held no such lack. “Time to go home, son.”
Weekly Progress Update:
Whew, lot’s of progress this weekend.
I’m at 95% with the first round of editing Madness. I have 11 pages left and 4 chapters, which I’ll probably finish next weekend. After that, it’s onward to formatting and getting the cover prepped to make an ARC.
With only the last 5% left, I definitely enjoy this story – even more than Honor by a large margin. It’s fun to see just how much I’ve learned since starting out, both in writing and editing.
For the rest of the week, I – once again – skipped my Skirmish and 50-word Fantasy Prompts due to distractions. I should be able to start them again this week without much issue, and I’m considering probably going back and doing the previous ones I skipped and back-dating them so they fall in line. So far I’ve only missed one Skirmish and two Prompts, so it would only be about an hour or two to catch up. We’ll see how the week goes.
Overall, while I’m about a month behind the original schedule, I think Madness is coming along really well. My plan is to get a few copies out to some people and try to get as much detailed feedback as possible within about two months. Then, I’ll go through it all again myself for a final check.
Based on that, I’d anticipate it being about four months just for those two steps alone, and would probably end up publishing around September, if I had to guess. My original intention was between June and September, so I’m going to be a bit on the late end, but I wanted to take as much time as I needed to be meticulous. All things considered, I definitely don’t regret that and think the story will be much better for it.
Once I’m finished with my own first round of editing, I’ll be jumping right back into Book Three – which I’m pretty stoked for. All three books are in pretty vastly different scenarios, which makes it really fun to transition from one into the other (all while keeping in line with the plot, of course).
I’ve had some thoughts on what to do for the fourth book. Possibly a side-story with a background of one of the other characters in the past, such as possibly Chakal or Cormac. They have really interesting backstories that I’d love to explore more and get onto paper. Technically, I could use Skirmishes for those things and eventually I’ll run out of content for Fangdarr and Bitrayuul’s Skirmishes, so I may just start there. We’ll see how it plays out!
See you all next week.
Writing Prompt: Detail
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Special Rule: Try to describe a foreign creature or object (without explicitly stating it) and see if someone else can determine what it is or looks like. Ask them to explain what they see and compare it to what you had in mind.
Eyes black as pitch to match its wispy form, the ethereal creature floated through the corridor. The guards sprinted away, though even the musk surrounding the intangible monster seemed murderous, dulling their minds like a toxic sludge. Leaving a trail of lifeless husks in its wake, it continued its hunt.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Jagged
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Left, right, three more lefts. Downhill, uphill.
Gods, these tunnels go on forever! Bitrayuul’s arms grew weary as he ascended the ancient iron ladder that the dwarves had placed many years ago. The winding mine twisted and turned in every direction and still the half-orc had not caught up to the senator. Worse, the drops of blood he hounded were growing more and more infrequent, leaving his path up to chance more often.
By then, Bitrayuul did not know for what reason he continued. Perhaps it was honor, or more so because there was no other choice. In truth, the young warrior was lost and had no hopes of finding his path—especially with the way he came sealed beneath the stone.
At the edge of his wits, when all hope seemed lost and no blood caught his sight for a hundred paces, a barely audible noise twitched his ear. What was that? Is that them? Halting his movements entirely, Bitrayuul turned his head to hear more clearly down the tunnel ahead.
Nothing.
He took a step toward the stone wall, placing his ear against it and hoping the sounds of footsteps would be amplified. For many moments, his face lay flat against the cold stone.
Nothing.
He let out a heavy sigh. Why did I do this? he asked himself with great regret, resting his head against the scarred wall. What could you have possibly hoped to achieve?
“Bug off, ye smelly rats!”
Bitrayuul was up in an instant as the sound lightly echoed to him. I knew I heard something! He turned his head again. I’m certain that was a dwarf. It has to be the Senator! Taking off in a dead sprint that denied the aching in his legs, the half-orc was certain he was close. He looked down at his shattered gauntlet in his right hand, then to the crusted wound on his left forearm. Still with no fire, he had no idea what service he may prove to be to the captured dwarf. But he needed to try.
“BAH, get yer damned toe-fingered hands off me!”
The sound is growing, I’m getting closer! Slipping on the stone beneath his feet, Bitrayuul scraped his knee and tore the skin. He growled in pain and frustration at his foolishness as a trickle of blood traveled down his shin. There was no time to pay attention. He could only keep moving.
It was not the angry insults of Theiran that the half-orc heard next, but screams of agony. Bitrayuul could only imagine what horrors the sinister cretins may be doing to the dwarf—and soon to him.
Bitrayuul’s eyes looked ahead and saw the mine shaft growing smaller and smaller, bringing him to a crouch. Then on his knees. Then to crawl along the floor as only a small opening could be seen. He did not think he would fit at first, but if the trolls could have dragged the fully-armored, thrashing dwarf through then he knew he could squeeze by.
As he pulled himself through the suffocatingly tight path, the young half-orc began to panic. He could feel the stones around his shoulders and legs with their jagged embrace. There was no way he could back out of the hole. He would either need to move forward or die there. His heart was pounding in fear. His chest huffed relentlessly, only adding to his terror as his lungs grasped desperately for air.
Tears streaked down Bitrayuul’s face. I may die here . . .. Wiggling frantically, the half-orc only made his situation worse. He held his mouth closed to silence himself; the worst he could do in that moment was summon the trolls. With his lips pursed taut, his air was consumed twice as fast.
Stop! Stop panicking! It was no use, he felt trapped. He tried to pull himself forward even a finger-length but stopped as he felt the sharp stone digging into his abdomen. Even worse was the path that still remained—covered in even more jagged edges. His eyes fell upon those stone thorns in the suffocating tunnel and witnessed the glaze of crimson they had been painted with recently. Dwarf blood!
The knowledge that Theiran had traversed this same path and come out alive served as little warmth to Bitrayuul. Though, it was enough to convince him to keep pulling. Gritting his teeth as the rock beneath his torso tore through his flesh, the half-orc steeled himself and slid onward.
Just keep pulling. Go. You can do this.
The pain was immense as he reached the final squeeze of the tunnel and its set of sharpened stone teeth. He could feel the warmth of his blood gliding across his skin as the rocks cut into him. His shoulders, his arms, his legs. Everywhere his flesh was ripped, leaving a smear of blood in his wake.
Finally, his hands reached the outside of the tunnel and felt it open up. Bitrayuul whimpered as he dragged his large body through the remainder of the hole before rolling out onto the stone in relief.
As he opened his lungs filled with air, the half-orc opened his eyes. He immediately gasped and placed a hand over his mouth. There they were, naught a dozen paces ahead. Six vile trolls were huddled around the dwarf, prodding him with their stone blades and laughing in glee at his torment.
Weekly Progress Update:
Sorry for missing the 50-word Fantasy Prompt this week, I’ve been distracted.
I didn’t make much progress this weekend, only about 1.5 chapters edited. I’ll need to try to make up for it next weekend if I can.
I’m eager to get done editing – well, the first round – and start writing Book Three again. I’m thoroughly enjoying reading through Madness and think it will be much more thrilling than Honor. Time will tell.
That’s all for this week!
Writing Prompt: Fear
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Special Rule: Write about one of your greatest fears and experiencing it.
Fangdarr writhed desperately against the immovable strands as the creature drew near. It’s eight glimmering eyes stared emptily above the anxiously chittering fangs. Fear stripped away rationality as he felt the beast’s blade-like teeth sink in, spreading their venom in burning agony. Muscles melted, bones disintegrated, yet his sight remained.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Chieftain
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
“What you want?” Fangdarr growled as he wraps his fingers around the shaft of his weapon.
The troll stepped toward him with confidence, smiling around its long tusks. Fangdarr took note of the collection of bones tied together and worn as loose armor. With each step the intruder took, they rattled together making the orc wonder how the troll had managed to sneak up on him without notice.
Though a pair of daggers stuck out from the creature’s belt, its arms hung limp with no sign of aggression. Fangdarr could tell by the sheer confidence that the troll needed no time to produce the blades at the first sign of trouble. His eyes stayed narrow as the unwarranted visitor closed the distance. Yet, the orc made no move to stop him.
Stopping an arm’s length from the orc, the creature cracked its mouth into a wide grin. “We have been watchin’ ya, orc.” It had been so long since Fangdarr last encountered trolls that he had forgotten their odd accent, causing his face to twist in confusion. The troll caught his expression. “Ahahah, don’ be shy, now. Whacha doin’ out here in ya lonesome? Why ya ain’t with ya other kind?”
Fangdarr gripped his axe more tightly. He was not fond of the pressing questions from one who had just entered his home.
Upon seeing the orc tense, the troll patted the air with a relaxed smile. “Alright, alright. No need for dat.” His eyes shined deviously. “Me name Raz’ja. I’m da chieftain of da trolls. All of dem. Who ya are?”
Refusing to release the tenseness in his shoulders, Fangdarr held his gaze. “Fangdarr.”
Raz’ja grinned at the lackluster response. “Are ya with da Zharnik clan?”
“No. Me father was chieftain, long ago.” The orc didn’t know why he added the detail about his father. Perhaps pride or foolishness. He cursed himself for revealing too much. But Fangdarr realized that if the troll chieftain had wished for his death, he would have simply flooded the cave with a horde of trolls. The orc’s body relaxed in slight.
“Ah, there ya be,” Raz’ja began, seeing Fangdarr unfurl his defensiveness. “And what about ya? Ya goin’ to be chieftain too?”
Fangdarr laughed aloud at the thought. “No, Fangdarr not going to be chieftain.”
“Why not? Ya are strong, intelligent. Ya father were chieftain before ya. What stoppin’ ya?”
Pursing his lips in irritation at the incessant questions of his path, Fangdarr quickly discovered he did not have an answer to the question. Why not? he asked himself. After pondering in silence, he met Raz’ja’s expectant and sinister gaze and shrugged. “Don’t know how to become chieftain.”
It was the troll’s turn to laugh. “Ah, don’t ya worry, orc. I can help ya with dat. What say we strike a bargain, ya?”
Fangdarr’s eyes narrowed dangerously once more. “What bargain?”
“Raz’ja help ya become chieftain of ya people, as ya father were. In return, ya form an alliance with da trolls. Together, I think we can do great things, ya.”
A moment of silence passed as the orc considered the agreement. He searched for any sort of downside yet came across none outright. If he was to truly become chieftain, wouldn’t an alliance with the neighboring trolls be much better than as enemies? With humans to the north and west, trolls to the south, and dwarves to the east, the orcs were surrounding on all sides. An alliance would only serve to aid them.
Fangdarr extended his hand, ready to seal the agreement. Rather than meeting the orc’s hand with his own three-fingered grip, Raz’ja let out a cackle of laughter. “No, orc. In my culture, agreements cost ears.” When Fangdarr raised his eyebrow, the troll laughed harder. “Ears. Humans, dwarves, or elves. Any of dem will do. An agreement typically cost one ear each. But dis be an alliance between chieftains. We must collect a hundred together—just by ourselves—to seal the alliance. So, will ya hunt with me?”
Retracting his hand, the orc eyed the chieftain in front of him. He could see the lust for the hunt on Raz’ja’s face, savoring the thrill to come. Fangdarr recalled the way his mother was hounded through the forest, hunted like a rabid animal, by humans. Slowly, his own smile started to show.
“I hunt with you.”
Weekly Progress Update:
82%.
SOON.
(Yes, I made a whole post for this. But look, it’s got some bold and shit.)
Writing Prompt: Extermination
This week is a bit different. You do not need to keep it under 50 words, this time. Just make it as short or as long as you want. Why? Check out the Special Rule!
Special Rule: Poem time! Make your response a Poem. It can be any number of words and does not need to follow any sort of structure, including rhyming. Just have fun!
Swift and true, so it sang,
Against his armor, with a bang.
The squish of flesh, now torn asunder,
A costly mistake, his faulty blunder.
Bursts of red, so deep in hue,
The deepest pain, he ever knew.
As he bled, he fell to the floor,
The last living man, felt no more.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Abode
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Fangdarr looked out from the mouth of his cave, enjoying the soft breeze as it rustled the trees. Months had passed since he had crawled back to the dwelling where he had Gub and nearly all memories had been driven far to the recesses of his mind.
Lifting the piece of boar leg to his mouth, the orc rose to his feet and turned deeper into the cave. He stood near the fire, warming his hands to ward off the chill. The turn of seasons was beginning and the breeze he so loved took on a stinging bite. Winter was coming soon, he knew. The first he would endure on his own. Fangdarr continued to warm his hands while scanning his abode. He had been preparing for the change of seasons since early in his arrival, gathering all the supplies he could.
A smile crept to Fangdarr’s face as he remembered his mother’s thoughtful and loving teachings and how they would spare him from a death of sheer cold. With the knowledge she had bestowed upon him, the orc had created a large fur blanket from the boars he had hunted. Its thick hide would serve him well, as would the stitched pillow quilted together with squirrel and rabbit furs. He had even stored a mass of bones and apples for the harshest of days where he could not leave the cave.
Everything seemed in place and Fangdarr was confident he would make it through the the winter. Though winter often lasted only a single moon cycle, the season was treacherous. Harsh, icy winds were the worst of it, despite the deep snow that often came. The trees within the Lithe diminished the elements greatly, but even with their protection the risk of being outside was too severe.
Fangdarr tore the last bit of meat from the haunch in his hand before tossing the bone into the pile nearby. Then, careful not to catch scorch his hands, the orc put another log into the fire to ensure it continued through the night.
As the orc walked over to his makeshift bed, he caught a glimpse of movement out of the corner of his eye near the cave’s mouth. Instinctively, he grabbed hold of Driktarr and waited defensively. Time passed on with only the wind and crackle of flames in his ears while he waited. Fangdarr was certain he saw something. It may have just been a bird flying by or perhaps a rodent, but the back of his neck tingled in suspicion.
“Who go there?” In truth, he didn’t expect a response, but felt compelled to ask in any case.
Silence.
Rationality tugged at Fangdarr. There was no one there. Why would they be? With the onset of winter coming it made no sense for anyone to be outside of their own dwelling. Unless . . . they sought his.
Fangdarr’s eyes narrowed dangerously as he repeated himself. “Who go there?!” He stomped his foot against the cold stone to express his irritation and attempt to dissuade any who may think to enter.
After many moments, the orc’s suspicions were confirmed as a single troll entered his cave.
Weekly Progress Update
Whew, it’s already Sunday. This weekend went way too fast.
Editing went well. I made good progress each morning during my normal writing times, but didn’t spend any additional time throughout each day. So, I was only able to get another 18 pages done, leaving my current progress at about 69%.
I do have some cool news, however. One of Orcblood Legacy‘s followers has just released one of his own novels, titled Tavern! I’m really excited for him and look forward to reading through it myself. (The image is a link to the book on Amazon)
Just wanted to give Mr. Munden as shoutout and a big congratulations. It’s a great feeling to have all your hard work become real.
Aside from that, not too much this week. I finally copied my magic system down onto a digital document just in case my whiteboard ever gets erased on accident. It’s a really minor thing, but I’ve been putting it off for over a month.
I still have other things I’ve put off, such as adding a new section to my website for Artwork of the Orcblood Legacy series. I had that on my To Do list for this weekend as well, but we know how that goes. Maybe I’ll get around to it later in the day.
Once I do that, I’m considering organizing my site a bit more. It’s usable as-is, but I think I might have an additional of Table of Contents for some of the recurring Blogs such as the Writing Prompts and Weekly Progress Updates. Another item on the To Do list!
That’s it for this week, orcs. I’m really eager to get started on Book Three but need to wait until I’m finished with the first round of editing on Madness first. Soooooooooooooooooooooooon.
Writing Prompt: Ichor
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Special Rule: Use spiders!
Fangdarr clutched his stomach. His veins turned to fire as the poison spread outward from the bite wound with unbelievable haste. Even his powerful muscles seized as the ichor debilitated him to the point of agony. There he remained, unable to move as the enormous spider spread its fangs again.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Life
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
I suppose this is it. There are too many.
Each of Bitrayuul’s foes rushed toward him with their mouths wide open. Their imposing, sharpened teeth minor in comparison to the pair of tusks extending a hand’s length past their faces, capable of tearing through flesh with ease. All twelve of the savage creatures tightly gripped the stone blades in their hands—not that it would matter.
The half-orc raised his arms defensively, though for what purpose he knew not. Against so many, the young warrior would serve as little more than a minor obstacle. No flame to aid him, his spiked gauntlets were as useful as wet cloths against the monstrous trolls and their magical healing. All Bitrayuul could do was wait for his time to die.
I’m sorry, Fangdarr. I should never have left.
In the final moments, staring down the oncoming assailants, Bitrayuul was filled with more self-doubt and guilt than ever before. Guilt for abandoning his brother, only to perish within a few days. He wondered if he had survived so far only due to Fangdarr’s protection of him. Bitrayuul had always thought he could hold his own, but there he stood, awaiting his own annihilation.
I’m sorry, Father. I should have stayed out of the tunnels as you cautioned.
The trolls were only a few paces away. All the memories of his childhood seemed to flood back in a single wave. The cherished kindness of his mother. The selfless tutelage of his mentor. And the unshakeable loyalty of his brother. In part, Bitrayuul reflected upon the scenes of his past and realized that perhaps his passing was not the worst. He had lived a good life full of love and compassion. Did he really need to continue? Wasn’t that short time of happiness enough?
No.
That was the thought that resonated within him with undeniable command.
NO.
It wasn’t enough. It would never be enough. There had to be more. Adventure. Love. Loss. Life.
There is more.
Planting his heel, Bitrayuul spun toward the wall and launched a balled fist as hard as he could into the stone. Beneath the force, his makeshift gauntlet of bone fragmented and fell from his hand. At first, the half-orc thought his desperate effort had failed. The stone wall stood resolute in its defiance. Then the cracks came. First a trickle of debris, then a fracture. Next came the fissure, rending apart the rocks as if they were naught but clay. Beneath its own weight, the stone began collapsing on itself and groaning in protest.
Realizing the severity of what he may have done, Bitrayuul turned away and sprinted in the opposite direction of the trolls. Their confusion had frozen them in place as they watched the fissure crease along the tunnel around them until finally the stones above could no longer handle the pressure. Following the trail of nearly dried blood droplets, Bitrayuul shivered at the sound of bones crunching and trolls screaming in agony. The pit of his stomach sank as he realized that the beasts would not die beneath those stones. Their bodies would heal and they would be forced to live in constant agony for many moons, begging for relief.
Bitrayuul disregarded the guilt-ridden thoughts and kept his head low, eyeing the trail of blood that was growing more fresh with each stride.
Weekly Progress Update
The week was a bit slow on progress. I only reached half my goal for editing, with only one chapter edited on Thursday morning and three more on Friday morning.
Saturday and Sunday were shot from my kid waking up at 4:00 a.m. right when I did. I really only work well in silence and having a toddler wide awake and playing a few feet away just instantly cuts out any chance of productivity. Normally I’d be a bit peeved, but her birthday was Saturday. So, I set my work aside to just try to spend some extra time with her.
The progress lost added a bit of stress, but she had a great weekend overall so it was worth it. I get really strict on my timelines and tend to internally freak out when I don’t meet the micro-milestones I set for myself.
In any case, I got a lot done on Friday so I didn’t fall too far behind. I’m currently sitting at 55% of the first round. I’m actually really excited and think Madness will stand a cut above Honor. Even I’m having a blast reading through it again. The high stakes and constant action really keep the story on its toes. We’ll see if readers feel the same.
Also, I’ve decided to postpone writing on Book Three until after the first round of edits is done for Madness. I’ll have a lot of time after the first round while I wait on feedback from a few others. I did recently get some great feedback on Honor from a reader, so that was nice as well. I try to continue to improve my writing skills as I progress through the series and avoid making the same mistakes.
I’m not sure when Madness will be out yet. I’ll be able to tell as we get closer. However, I think I’ll put it up for pre-order on Amazon once I have the Author Review Copies created (most likely by the end of April). I’m guessing sometime around July or August, to be honest. While I’m eager to get it out, I need to make sure I don’t rush.
See you next week!
Writing Tips: Amazon Advertisement
So, you’ve just published your first novel (or are about to) and are wondering how to get the word out. I’ve been there – and still am there, technically. Here’s a few things I’ve learned along the way.
First and foremost, most adequate forms of advertisement/marketing costs money! That’s right, folks. The age-old words of wisdom is true. You have to spend money to make money!
Advertising comes in many forms. Here’s a few:
1. Internet Advertisement
2. Promotional Products
3. Word of Mouth / Agreements
Let’s start with Internet Advertisement. For Self Publishers, this is really where your widest audience sits. There are a lot of options to choose from, ranging from Amazon and Facebook’s internal Advertising services to finding other third-party services. I can tell you, I’ve done all three of those (though admittedly limited with the other services). In this Writing Tips entry, I’ll be discussing specifically Amazon’s advertising services. Here’s what I’ve learned so far.
Amazon: Advertising through Amazon is done primarily through Keywords to assist with making sure your book is noticed instead of the hundreds of thousands of those you are competing against. Each Keyword has a specific cost. The more generic and popular the Keyword, the higher the cost. I’ve included an example below.
As you can see, the Suggested Bid is the average value. The next column is what you choose to set as your Maximum Bid for that Keyword (it is rare you actually end up paying that much). The higher your Bid, the more likely it is that your result will show up above others who are bidding on the same Keyword. After all, there’s only 1-2 Sponsored Products at the top of the search results and you want to be there – so do they. These Bids are what YOU pay. More on that below!
Without paid ads, if you search ‘Orc’ in Amazon’s books, you probably would not even find Orcblood Legacy: Honor among the first page. There are hundreds of other orc books out there (mostly erotic homosexual novels, oddly enough). However, now, searching “Orc” returns my novel as the first result.
Now, this is a GREAT way to improve your book’s visibility. So, what’s the catch? Well, there are two.
First, depending on your Keywords (you can choose up to 200, I believe), not everyone will find your book. For example, I did not choose ‘Armor’. As a result, if a prospective reader searches for that word, my novel will not show up as a Sponsored link. This is where you get to try to increase or decrease your reach based on the words you select. You’re paying per click, so you don’t want to include Keywords that aren’t related to your story. If I had chosen ‘Princess’ as a Keyword, how likely is it that someone searching for ‘Princess’ would pick up my novel? It depends on how good Fangdarr looks in a dress, I suppose – but not very.
This leads me to the next catch. The cost. Amazon advertising charges you per click. No matter how many people see your ad, you only get charged when people click on it. This is where you want to filter your audience, as mentioned. Otherwise you’ll end up with a lot of arbitrary clicks that don’t result in sales. Every Keyword’s cost per click is different, as shown in my first image. It may not seem like a lot at $0.31 per click, but if 100 people click your ad, that’s now $3.10 just for them to take a look at the book. Theoretically, depending on your royalties, you may only need to sell 1 book to cover that cost. 1 out of 100 seems like a good chance, right? It can be. But you need to remember that almost all readers are just peeking around. They read your synopsis, check your reviews, the price, and maybe even your bio. And then they leave. Poof.
Now, that’s not to say you won’t have success with it. Success can be measured in different ways. When you’re first starting out, don’t worry too much about income. That’s a quick way to get disappointed. I know I was. Writing a book is a difficult task. Once you’re done, you think you’ll put it up for sale and it’ll start trickling in some nice income. Unfortunately, this is often not the case. You need to build your brand. Write more books, maintain your blog and website, and generate reader interest. Your ad may cost you $200 and you may get $25 in sales from it. Financially, that’s pretty terrible. But, you may have gotten 300 new people to click your link in interest. So, what did you gain if not money?
Visibility, obviously. Many of the world’s most famous (and now wealthy) authors did not get rich off their first novel. Far from it. You NEED your work to be seen. It’s much better if its read and loved, of course, but infinitely more important that your book gets seen compared to not. As you write more books – and promote them – your name will slowly gain recognition. It might be after five books or maybe even thirty before you start to reach the levels of notoriety and income you’re looking for, but that’s the game. Writing for income is a vastly different experience – and subsequently requires different tactics – than writing for enjoyment. I try to reach a happy medium, personally.
All in all, Amazon’s advertisement service can be a great way to get your book noticed. The cost does creep up pretty quickly, so you’ll need to plan for that. It costs as much or as little as you’re willing to spend and you can end it at any time. Right now, I keep up an ad 100% of the time for a few Keywords and then I’ll launch a separate campaign whenever I need to drive as much traffic as possible, such as for a launch or a free eBook event.
To give you some numbers, I spent $300 on ads (between Amazon and Facebook) when I made Orcblood Legacy: Honor free in February. Obviously, I made none of that back since the book was free for that time. However, in those five days, there were 4x as many downloads than I had sold since the book’s launched, drastically increasing my reader count (and therefore my reach). A large portion of those people probably didn’t read the book, or didn’t even like it, but that’s not the point. The purpose was to increase the number of readers and it did just that.
Next time I’ll discuss Facebook’s advertising services and the differences it has compared to Amazon. Subscribe to the website if you haven’t yet to check out these Writing Tips! Also, if you have any questions in particular, feel free to contact me at any time and I’d be glad to discuss it. Until next time!
Writing Prompt: Foreign
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Special Rule: None
Fangdarr stared awkwardly at the miniscule creature atop the elf’s shoulder. Light pulsed around it as if it were a heart, beating in rhythm with his own. Though hardly visible, the winged oddity winked at him with two of its four eyes, reminding Fangdarr that he was far from home.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Tunnel
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
What am I doing?!
Bitrayuul charged onward as the snarling trolls at his rear grew closer. His stomach sank with regret as he realized the immense danger he had plunged himself into. Feet pounding as fast as they could, the half-orc traversed the pitch-black tunnel in search of senator Theiran.
This was the first time he had ever step foot in a mining tunnel before. Its vast network only became more evident as Bitrayuul approached an intersection. He stood in the center of the junction, heart racing as he pondered which direction to go. The trolls at his back were nearly upon him and every moment he delayed Theiran fell further from his grasp.
Perhaps I should turn and fight my pursuers here. Better than the tunnels.
How the half-orc longed for his father to come to his rescue in that moment. Stressed beyond belief, Bitrayuul realized he may actually fall in these mines. He looked to the conjoined tunnels one last time for any sign of where the councilman had been dragged. His eyes caught a glimpse of a few drops of blood down the path straight ahead just as his pursuers breached the intersection.
Bitrayuul turned to the vile creatures, making a mental note of the path he needed to take—if he survived. He stared down the dozen trolls with fear in his heart. With no fire in sight, there was no chance of success. He flexed his fingers in preparation and was reminded of the cut on his forearm as the blood stuck to his fingers. The group of trolls only increased their speed upon seeing the half-orc standing in wait for them. Salivating at the kill to come, their lusting eyes glowed in the dark tunnel, narrowed in wicked grins.
Weekly Progress Update
Man, editing is so draining. Props to the people that can do this for a living. I can only stand to sit for maybe an hour or two at the very most before I have to stop. Going through it with extreme scrutiny and reviewing every word – its placement, alternatives, grammar, flow, etc. – in every sentence sure makes your eyes go dull. It doesn’t take long before you end up re-reading the same sentence or paragraph 15 times over before finally getting to the next. Whew, lad.
In any case, I’m still a bit behind from where I wanted to be. I’m currently about 40% through the first round, though I had really hoped to be at 50% by the end of the weekend. But, I got distracted by some other stuff. Bad, Bernard, bad.
I did, also, not make the progress I wanted on Book Three. On Friday, I wrote the Prologue – which I think turned out well. I can’t show anyone for a while as it has some spoilers from Book Two, but I like it. I was planning on starting writing Book Three on my normal writing schedule, but I decided to postpone starting Book Three until I’m finished with the first round of editing on Madness. It’s just too much work all at once and I want to keep a good pace on getting Madness published. I’ll have plenty of time while I’m waiting for a few readers to give me feedback on Madness. So, in the meantime, I’ll probably just write a Chapter on each Friday until I’m finished (which should hopefully be only two weeks or so).
That’s about it for this week. Just chuggin’ along with a lot going on. I’m excited to get some Advanced Review Copies out to some friends for feedback. Unlike Honor, no one has been given any sort of spoilers on what occurs in Madness – not even my wife. I wanted all readers to go in completely blind to simulate new readers as much as possible. My wife and a few others had heard some important details within Honor prior to reading it, which had an effect on their impressions since they knew what was coming.
Back to editing I go!
Writing Prompt: Mining
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: Time for some humor!
Tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink.
“Whew . . .”
Tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink, tink.
“Oh . . . it’s just coal.”
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Leaf
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Fangdarr growled in agony as blinding pain shot through him. For a fraction of a moment, he felt the intense relief as all negative thoughts fled from his mind. But it was soon replaced by an intense sensation.
The orc had suffered wounds before. His flesh had been cut. It had been torn and burned. But nothing like this. As Driktarr entered his skin, the pain from the laceration was relived a hundred times over as the enchanted weapon absorbed his life force, only to revitalize him with the same energy. His wound tried to close around the axe as it filled him with life, only to be cut again and starting the cycle anew.
Blind pain raced through his chest before shooting through his whole body. The immediate transition between pain and relief continuously flipped back and forth as the cut was mended and torn open repetitively.
Finally, Fangdarr grit his teeth in pained fury and ripped his axe from his chest, ending the cycle. His lips quivered as the lasting agony finally subsided and the wound stitched itself closed for good. Tracing his fingers over the new scar, the orc struggled to regain his breath. He realized it had been the first time he had ever cut himself with his beloved weapon.
As the distraction of the unexpected outcome faded, he felt the profound sadness start to creep back in. Fangdarr groaned in frustration. Is there no respite?! He looked around from where he tripped and gasped aloud as his eyes fell upon a familiar sight in the distance: Gub’s cave.
With a huff of detestment, the orc tried to rise to his feet and turn away from the dwelling. His legs had other plans, however, and Fangdarr crashed to the ground. Lips curled in anger, he cursed his body’s weakness and began crawling in the opposite direction of the cave while muttering to himself.
After pulling himself a dozen paces, Fangdarr could feel his arms grow weary. The pain in his legs was nearly unbearable despite his crawl. His sprint went well beyond his body’s limitations, causing the muscles in his legs to tear and swell. With every motion a new wave of agony surged through him.
Exhaustion pulled him to the earth where he lay face-down and panting. The sorrow he had desperately tried to avoid came back with a vengeance, reminding Fangdarr of his loneliness. Lying face-down in the dirt by himself only added to his grief. I wonder if I will die here. Would it make any difference?
A sigh passed through his lips, blowing the hot air against the ground and feeling it reflect against his neck. All hope seemed lost. If he didn’t move, something would find him soon enough. Part of him wanted to tempt that fate, just to see another creature one last time before his demise. Fangdarr rolled painfully to his back and looked up at the screen of green above. The tinge of brown had started to wither the edge of the leaves as the seasons began to change.
As if on cue, a leaf that had more brown than green floated easily down to the orc. He watched it as it swayed each way with the gentle push of the air. But no matter which way the air tried to coerce the falling leaf, it always continued its descent. Fangdarr smiled at the irony that a single leaf could trudge through its path despite the influences against it. Be like leaf, he thought to himself.
The brown, crispened petal landed on the orc’s chest. For many moments, he just stared at it as if expecting something to happen. Once he realized what he was waiting for, Fangdarr burst into laughter. “It a leaf!” he said between his outbursts. With each heave of his chest came pain, but he didn’t care.
Fangdarr sighed through his smile, knowing his foolishness. “If leaf can do it, so can I.” Determined to not be weaker than the dead fall of the petal, the orc rotated his body in the dirt and began crawling toward the cave.
Writing Tips: Names
Hello everyone! It’s been a really long time since I’ve posted any Writing Tips. I apologize for that, it’s just been crazy with working on Madness. I’m already about to start work on Book Three but really want to get back into doing these as often as I can – so no time like the present.
Yesterday, I was speaking with a friend regarding Names. Character names, your book title, anything, really. There’s a few things we discussed that are actually things most writers struggle with, and for good reason.
So, let’s think about the question we want to ask. What can I do to make my Book stand out? At the end of the day, that’s what it comes down to. You need to make sure a prospective reader picks your book over another, and the names you choose can play a role.
When it comes to naming characters, there are actually quite a few obstacles people tend to overlook. Let’s take a look at some.
Theme: Generally, I try to keep a recurring theme within races. Here’s my personal preferences that I employ.
—– Orcs: Guttural and brutish, often have double-r ending
—– Dwarves: Strong names, typically two syllables
—– Elves: Feminine and elegant (even the males), most common letters being E, L, I, Th, and S
—– Trolls: Typically two syllables, always split by an apostrophe
—– Ogres: Typically one syllable, brutish
—– Humans: Basically old names but more fantastical (Jeff the Dragonslayer just doesn’t cut it for most)
—– Satyrs: All males end in Name’ul and females are Name’la
Uniqueness: Names are something that identify your book and its characters. As a result, you need to be sure that if a prospective reader searches for your Book Title or the Main Character they find your book within the top results.
When I first launched Orcblood Legacy: Honor, if you did a Google Search for either ‘Bernard Bertram’ or ‘Orcblood Legacy’, you wouldn’t find anything about my book until Page 4. Let’s be honest, no one looks past the first page of Google – and typically restricts that further to the first 3-5 results.
Now, if you search for either of those keywords, I pretty much flood the results. This is primarily due to three things. 1) Presence, 2) Uniqueness, and 3) Marketing. I’ll explain in more detail below.
Presence: For any who don’t know about Search Engine Optimization (SEO), presence is a huge driving factor in making sure you’re on the first page. You need to have constant influence on either your own website or your Social Media sites (or both) to essentially lay claim to that keyword over others. For example, there are obviously other people named ‘Bernard Bertram’ out there in the world. I had to fight for the right to be placed above them. It was a bloody battle, but we made it to the top thanks to putting out content on my website and Social Media every few days.
Uniqueness: This is majorly important, especially for your Book Title. Remember how I just said that you needed to fight for the top slot on search results? Well, imagine naming your book ‘Donald Trump’ right now. What chance do you think your book would have of being seen on the first results of Google right now? If you’re set on a broad term – like how I love making my Titles one word – consider alternatives that add uniqueness. For example, my Books are titled: Orcblood Legacy: Title, not just Title. I can definitely say that if my book was labeled Honor and not Orcblood Legacy: Honor, it certainly would have much less recognition.
The same goes for Character Names. Readers may come across your Main Character’s name – after all, they’re a large part of your brand – and search for them. I, personally, employ this practice myself. I don’t often look up ‘R. A. Salvatore’ when I’m looking for his books. I look up ‘Drizzt’, the dark elf character he is well known for. Fangdarr is now the proud champion of his arena and stands atop the pinnacle shouting his name.
Before I wrote Orcblood Legacy: Honor, if you searched for ‘Fangdarr’, the results you found were drastically different. We’ve now sealed a place in the Internet for our beloved, bloodthirsty orc.
Marketing: This one goes hand-in-hand with Presence as it has a direct relation. However, I leave them separate due to a key factor. Presence typically indicates the effort you put in to push out content in the name of your work. Websites, Social Media, Blogs, etc. All of that is your own efforts. Now, that isn’t to say that Marketing doesn’t take some work on your end as well. It’s a bit of a complex relationship. But, the biggest benefits you will receive from Marketing will come through 3rd Parties – and often not for free.
Amazon, Facebook, and even external sites that do reviews are all forms of Marketing, to name a few. Each of which typically have a much wider reach than you. But to piggyback off of their success often comes with a cost. In trade for payment, you can access their many customers to increase your presence drastically. More reach, more presence. It doesn’t matter if you make a new post every day if no one ever sees it. Sometimes you’ve got to spend money to make money, and these services can be huge to spread the word of your work.
I’ll go over more about the differences between Amazon and Facebook’s advertisement capabilities in the future! Be sure to subscribe to the site for updates on Writing Tips and other content. If you have any questions you’d like me to discuss in particular, feel free to contact me and I’d be happy to go over my personal opinions.
Weekly Progress Update
Mmk, getting back into the swing of things now after taking a vacation. A disruption in my ritual is always risky. I like to keep things consistent and not threaten breaking the habits I’ve formed. Luckily, I was able to get back into my routine without too much issue – though some obstacles here are there.
This week was spent trying to work on editing of Madness, primarily. I didn’t get through the level out output I was planning on, which is a bummer. I was hoping to be at Page 100 of 224 in my first draft’s document by the end of the weekend (starting at 32). So far I’m up to Page 57, so pretty far behind. It isn’t too big of a deal overall. I bit off a bit more than I could chew with the goal of 68 pages over the weekend, but it pushed me to at least make the current progress, at least.
My goal is to be finished with the first round of edits by the end of the month. I think if I buckle down and edit on weekdays more often – even just 3-5 pages per day – I can make that goal without much issue. From there, it’s onward to some Beta Readers for feedback.
Also, I’m starting to look into some Fantasy Blog/Review sites. There are a handful out there. The main issue is that these sites are obviously going to be receiving content non-stop. It can take months or even years for them to get around to your book, if at all. There are some that allow you to pay to sort of short-list your book, but it can be quite expensive. We’ll see what I find. I didn’t do any sort of advance reading to known blogs or reviewers for Honor, so it’s something I’m considering this time around.
Onward to future work! I drew out a loose outline for Book Three this weekend and will be ready to start writing next week. It’ll be difficult to juggle writing Book Three and editing Madness, but I need to maintain momemtum. I’m really excited to get started on Book Three and think a certain audience will definitely enjoy the story I have planned. One can hope.
That’s all for this week, see you on next Sunday!
Writing Prompt: Cleric
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Special Rule: None. Just explore your creativity!
With the final words of her prayer, the dwarf’s divine magic healed the grievous wound in her friend’s side. His eyes re-opened and saw her hair wither and shrivel as it turned a shade lighter. His concerned look was returned with her relieved sigh. The cost she paid seemed trivial.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Desperate
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Exhaustion dropped Fangdarr to his knees in the middle of the wood. He had no idea where he was anymore. All he had cared about was running from the snickering ogre that had stripped him of his only companion. The orc scoffed to himself as he realized the falseness of that thought. My ‘friend’. Panting to recover from his sprint, Fangdarr fell to the ground and onto his back. Now that he was alone, he couldn’t stop the flow of tears any longer.
Grating negativity chipped away at him. I’ll be alone forever, he thought. Fangdarr shut his eyes tightly in sorrow in a feeble attempt to shut out reality. It was no use. As he opened them once more, all had remained the same. The woods seemed to voice comfort, showing that no matter his troubles, all would remain the same. The birds would sing, the leaves would rustle, and the trees would continue in their path upward. But, in that moment, the metaphoric lesson was lost on the distraught orc. For he only wished to let the pain linger.
I wish Bitrayuul were here.
Memories of his childhood next to his half-blooded kin crept in. At first, they were pleasant remembrances of his youth. How they played together, hunted together. They were inseparable. Then even those fond recollections turned sour as the reality set in. That’s all they were. Memories. Flickering illusions of a time long since passed. Even Bitrayuul had gone from him, leaving him to solitude.
Am I so terrible?
Fangdarr wept beneath the shade of the trees. His thoughts turned from negative to dangerous as he pondered the validity of his existence. What is the point? Everyone has left. Mother, Bitrayuul, Tormag, Gub. This is my life now, to be turned away and left behind by all I meet. What purpose do I serve? He stared up at the canopies and the light that pierced through between the overlapping branches. As the orc sniffled, he could hear only the sound of his own display of emotions through the wood. Growling in anger at that echo of vulnerability, Fangdarr pulled himself up to his rear and forced away his tears. It did not drive away his anguish, but it masked his sorrow beneath a false visage of stern determination.
Agh! Why are you so weak?! he cursed himself as his teeth grit together. Get up, you fool!
Rising to his feet, Fangdarr turned to look in each direction to get his bearings. He forgot how exhausted he was, though, and nearly toppled over as soon as he was up. His outward snarl defiantly disputed his lack of energy and forced himself to remain upright. The mask that he had donned to hide his vulnerability had to work on even himself, he knew. Fangdarr pushed away the depressing thoughts that sought to cripple him. He needed to run. From those feelings and thoughts, as well as those who abandoned him.
As his powerful legs trampled through the wood, the orc allowed the pain in his calves to blind him to the clawed grip of sorrow. All he could feel was that stinging sensation in his legs as they carried him swiftly forward. For as long as he ran, he would not feel the agonizing plague that he knew waited for him.
Onward he sprinted. It seemed as if half the day was spent pushing himself past his limit. Fangdarr knew if he stopped he would collapse as his legs screamed in searing pain. Still, he pounded forward. He had no destination in mind, only forward. He growled aloud, scaring the nearby forest critters back into their holes. The outbursts drove away all living creatures, bringing a dreadful silence to the forest. There were no songs by the birds. No chittering of critters. Even the wind had halted at his presence, it seemed. There was only the sound of his lumbering footfalls and the growl of pain passing through his lips.
As he rushed onward, his foot caught an exposed root, launching him forward in a stumble. Fangdarr slid along the dirt, scraping the skin on his face, arms, and torso. Blinded from the impact, the orc opened his eyes and quickly realized his mistake. Desperately, he tried to scramble back to his feet but his legs refused to function. He started to panic, knowing too well that he needed to run to keep his thoughts at bay. But every time he tried to stand, he crashed to the ground.
Grabbing his head with both hands, Fangdarr slammed his eyes shut and began muttering to himself in terror. Need to run. Can’t think. Run. Run. Run. His fingers dug into his skull as he tried to think of a way to escape his sorrow. He could feel it creeping up his spine once more. Thoughts of his abandonment started to sink in, no longer driven away by physical pain.
Fangdarr was desperate. His eyes were getting wider with fear as that sinking feeling grew more evident. Pulling Driktarr from his back, the orc held out the blade in front of him. I need to. It needs to stop. I need to . . .
His gaze fell upon the sharpened edge and traced its curve. He reinforced his grip on the weapon and turned the blade toward himself. The twisting and poisonous feeling in his mind was beginning to set in, reminding him that time was short before sorrow once more claimed him. He looked at the blade and knew he did not want to spiral down into agonizing depression any longer.
“I need to,” Fangdarr muttered as he drove the axe blade toward his own chest.
Weekly Progress Update
Holy dwarf ears am I exhausted. My wife and I just returned from a vacation for our anniversary, so I apologize for missing this week’s Writing Prompt.
With the trip, I didn’t get to do any editing (currently at about 10% in). I had planned on editing while on vacation – and even sat down a few times in the early morning since I still woke up between 3:00 – 4:00 a.m. out of habit – but I decided to let it sit for a week and spend some time with my wife instead. While I certainly don’t regret that decision, coming back and knowing how far behind I am sure has me stressed out, hah!
I have a day to recover and relax tomorrow before heading back to work, so I think I’ll try to get a good chunk pounded out. I may need to go to the library or something so I don’t have any distractions, but we’ll see how it goes. I’m pretty exhausted, don’t ye doubt.
I did work on some different tree alterations for a city map of Jesmera that I’m playing around with. I’m not sure if I’ll add it to Madness yet, but we’ll see how it turns out. It has less relevance to the plot than Wiston, but still has a bit of purpose (just as a slight teaser for those who were looking forward to some more elves).
That’s all for this week, folks! I’ll be back on track now for the content, thanks for your patience.
Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Aid
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Bitrayuul felt a sharp pain across his forearm. He turned back to regard his foe, silently cursing himself for being too distracted in the middle of a battle. The wound burned against the open air as he lashed out defensively against the troll that had slashed at him. Doing his best to disregard the pain, the half-orc continued to unleash a flurry of blows into his opponent to disable it once more.
The sound of strained cranking clicked slowly far behind him. After what seemed entirely too long, the mechanical weapon let off a loud screech—and with it a blazing orb of fire. The sphere of dried branches had been lit just before launch, igniting the oil that coated the wood and lighting the majority of the cavern. Again the dwarves cheered as their eyes traced that familiar orb, just before watching it crash down into the mass of trolls. Screams of pain echoed through the cavern as nearly a hundred trolls immolated in an instant. As each lit in a burst of fire, every troll spread the flames to those around them in short order.
Bitrayuul watched as the trolls fell to chaos as the inferno quickly jumped from one body to the next like a creeping plague. Another orb quickly flew through the air toward the flank to his left, followed by one to the right. Soon, the entire cavern was illuminated by the sheer number of fires that had spread through the enemy ranks. Even still, Bitrayuul and Tormag were forced to press back against their enemies on the frontline. He was astounded at their fearlessness. Even while their allies died insufferably at their backs, the trolls refused to show any sign of relent. All that mattered was killing the dwarf—or half-orc—in front of them.
“Ah, finally!” Tormag yelled, drawing Bitrayuul’s attention. They each turned their heads to regard a handful of torches being passed through the ranks and toward the frontline. This time, the half-orc did not let his gaze linger for long as he did not wish to suffer another wound for his carelessness. As his body turned frontward, he realized just how right his instincts were as the troll’s desperate swipe cut into his shoulder. Had he not turned around, the blade surely would have sliced through his neck.
Gasping in pain, Bitrayuul’s reflexes pushed his uninjured arm outward to shove away the troll’s trailing attack. As the creature fell back onto its rear, another quickly took its place and lunged forward. However, it did not reach out at the half-orc with its three-fingered hands. Instead, Bitrayuul watched as the troll wrapped its digits around Senator Theiran who was caught unaware. The half-orc tried to grab the troll to aid the old dwarf, but his previous foe was back on its feet and intercepted with another slash of its stone weapon.
Theiran howled in pain as the troll on his back bit down onto his ear, ripping it from his head. When its face came back up, the hunk of flesh sat firmly between its teeth as blood dripped down its chin. The dwarf tried to raise his maul for a swing, but the troll in his front had gripped the weapon tightly.
“Senator!” Bitrayuul called out. Though Tormag and a few other dwarves took notice to Theiran’s entanglement, their was little they could do to help in that moment. Bitrayuul kicked out one of his opponent’s knees and reached out to the troll on Theiran’s back. But he was too late. Five more trolls had already swarmed the dwarf and were pulling him back into their ranks. As if that was their purpose all along, the remainder of the trolls began retreating to the tunnels while keeping the dwarves back. Bitrayuul watched as the senator was dragged toward the tunnel, fighting depserately to stop the vile beasts from gnawing at him.
This is my fault, I have to do something! The half-orc glanced to Tormag but knew his assistance was impossible as he was tied up with a trio of trolls. It seemed no matter which way he turned, every dwarf was engrossed with a foe. Even as over a thousand trolls were made into smoldering carcasses, thrice that number still remained. The shine of steel from fallen dwarves could be seen on the ground, typically sprawled over top of a group trolls.
Gritting his teeth in frustration, Bitrayuul took the torch from the dwarf behind him without hesitation and plunged it flame-first into his opponent’s face. It wailed in agony as the oily substance from its many wounds ignited, burning it both inside and out. Not pausing to ensure the creature was truly dead, the half-orc leapt over it and barreled through another pair of trolls. Only luck and his determined charge stopped their blades from connecting against his skin.
Tormag caught a glimpse of his adoptive son as a dozen trolls took to pursuit behind the towering half-orc. “Bitrayuul, no!” His eyes went wide in fear as he realized where his son was headed—straight toward the tunnel where Theiran was taken.
Weekly Progress Update
Alright, as mentioned in a few other posts this week, Madness is now complete (first draft). That means it’s onward to editing. I’m going to be juggling a few different tasks over the next few weeks between editing Madness, re-editing Honor for an updated edition, and even working on Book Three. It’s going to be a busy time, but everything should go just fine.
Also, I’ve started creating a map of Wiston for Madness, shown below.
It’s a fun little project and I think I’m going to build a few more maps out in my spare time of some of the other cities such as Tarabar, Jesmera, and maybe even the Zharnik orc’s village for fun.
That’s all for this week’s update, lots to do! See you next week.
Madness First Draft Complete!
Whew, finally done! The First Draft was started on September 1st, 2018 and completed today, February 22nd, 2019 – technically a week early from my goal timeline.
Madness sits at 136,427 words, which is quite a bit longer than Honor.
For comparison:
Honor – First Draft: ~121,000 words
Honor – Published: ~113,000 words
Now it’s time to move to Editing. I’ve got about three rounds of Editing planned, which will take some time:
- Personal Editing – A lot of writers go back and edit as they write. They’ll write a chapter, then go back and edit it before moving to the next. That works for some, but not for me. I write the entire book without editing anything. Get it all out onto paper first. Then, I go back and start editing. This time, my wife will be offering a simultaneous read through. She’s the best. <3
- Beta Readers & Feedback – For Honor I went wish a professional editor. These can be great, but definitely skyrocket the publication costs involved. Also, as I’m re-reading through Honor, I’m catching way too many mistakes that I feel should have been caught. I don’t regret hiring the editor, as I learned a lot from the process and they still did a good job catching most of my mistakes. But, for Madness I plan on trying out Beta Readers. This means I’ll be sending a handful of people copies of Madness after my first round of Personal Editing is complete. Then, they’ll provide feedback on the story, plot, and any mistakes they find. Once I have their feedback, I go back and Edit again.
- Final Review – I’ll be honest, I skipped this step for Honor and it bit me in the ass. I was too eager to get the work that I had slaved over for years out to print and put too much faith in the edits that I didn’t read through it one last time and it hurt the final result – which I’m now going back and correcting for an updated edition to be released. This time, Madness won’t be forced to suffer for my impatience. In this Final Review, I go through with a fine-toothed comb and look for all those sneaky little bastards that slipped through the cracks.
After that, it’s onward to print! My timeline for publishing is a bit wide right now (June – September) for two reasons. First and foremost, I need to be more patient. I made mistakes in Honor‘s release that are directly related to me not taking the added time to be more thorough. I won’t be making those same mistakes this time. Also, one of the benefits to a professional editor is the time saved. Beta Readers offer some good benefits, but one of the downsides is that you’re waiting for numerous people to read your book in their spare time and get you feedback. This can take anywhere from a week to months. There needs to be a cut-off point where I eventually just disregard any feedback I haven’t gotten at that time. Most likely, that cut-off will be around July at the latest. That way I’m certain I won’t miss the September deadline, which is the latest I’d like to release Madness.
If all goes well and smoothly, June is technically possible, but I’m not looking to rush. I’m eager to get Madness out there, as I think it’ll turn out pretty good – hopefully.
Thanks for all of the patience and support, we’re in the home stretch.
Writing Prompt: MADNESS
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: We’re here! Today is the official Title announcement for Book Two of the Orcblood Legacy series. There’s no Special Rule for the prompt today, just a good old prompt based around the Title’s word: Madness!
Fangdarr clutched his head in agony as a thousand voices both whispered and screamed viciously within. ‘Kill your friends,’ they commanded incessantly. Every biting word gnawed at his will, chipping away little by little. His eyes were bloodshot from the pounding in his mind. ‘Kill your friends . . . KILL YOUR FRIENDS!’
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Top 10 in Epic Fantasy!
This week I ran a Promotion that placed Orcblood Legacy: Honor for free (e-Book only) to get the book out to a wider audience. At first, I didn’t have too many expectations for moving up in Amazon’s Best Seller Rankings and just aimed for the added exposure and to generate more readers.
After a few hours, the results started to come in and the book started to rocket through the ranks pretty rapidly due to the number of downloads over a short period of time (Amazon’s Best Seller algorithm is a bit unique). By the time Orcblood Legacy: Honor hit #100 in Epic Fantasy, I was really ecstatic, as Amazon displays the Top 100 (50 per page, so 2nd page) per Category, split between Paid vs Free. As this was a Free promotion, my book was switched to the Free section temporarily and competed against only other Free titles.
I started keeping an eye on the Rankings as it started creeping higher up the ladder and soon I was within Top 50 and on the first page – already much higher than I expected to reach.
Keeping the excitement, I watched the progress continue to go down and tagged increments on my Facebook post. Going from Top 100, to Top 50, to Top 25, and after a long, nail-biting period of time (about two days, impatience is a weakness) Orcblood Legacy: Honor finally reached TOP 10 in Epic Fantasy (and #13 in Sword & Sorcery), as well as within the Top 1000 for all Free eBooks in the Kindle Store.
I don’t think I’ll get any higher as the promotion is ending in just a few hours and I’ll be switched back to the Paid category. But I’m really happy with reaching the goal of Top 10 and managed to pick up quite a new handful of readers who will hopefully enjoy the novel and look forward to Book Two.
For anyone who picked up the book during the promotion (or before/after), I greatly appreciate your interest and support. Please leave a review on Amazon if you enjoyed the book, I’d love to hear from you and reviews help other readers make the decision to pick up the book as well. (Yuck, shameful plug – I don’t like doing that)
So, a massive thank you from me and Fangdarr, who is always glad to have more spectators as he chops his way through foes. Book Two is coming soon!
Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Wait
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Bitrayuul rushed forward with the dwarves as they cried out in unison. His heart pounded in his chest as each pace took him closer and closer to the growing army of trolls that continued to spill into the cavern. Fear begged him to halt his advance, but the army of stout defenders around him had locked him in place and forced him to keep running. There was no way out but forward—through the enemy.
Casting a sidelong glance to Tormag once more, the half-orc saw the vitality in his ancient eyes. The heat of battle was upon them and even the old dwarf was willing to sacrifice all for his homeland. Bitrayuul stared ahead and was met with the reflection of a thousand glowing eyes, narrowed in hatred. This was a rivalry forged over millennia, and it was evident on every fighter’s face from both ends.
What have I gotten myself into?
Though Tormag had trained the half-orc how to fight over the years, nothing could have prepared Bitrayuul for a battle. He watched as the first line of dwarves crashed against the trolls and his eyes went wide as the spray of blood instantly spewed into the air. The half-orc did not know that trolls possessed blue blood. It shined against the torchlight as it travelled in every direction, just as the crimson spray of dwarves’ blood did. But worst was the sounds. Bitrayuul shuddered as the agonizing squeals of wounded trolls filled the cavern, drowning out their loud snarls and hissing. The dull thud of mauls squishing flesh and the crisp slicing of blades cutting through limbs mixed with the shrieks of pain and warcries in a chaotic tempest of noise. And still he advanced.
Gods, how will I survive this?
It was time. Bitrayuul’s line was nearly upon the trolls and he flexed his hands in nervousness. He could feel the push of the dwarf behind him, nudging him forward, even as he was locked in place by the clashing dwarves in his front. The restricted movement only added to his stress. He felt trapped. Trolls rushed around the field, leaping over the pile of fighters in the center and raining down onto those behind—their sharpened stone weapons seeking any bit of exposed flesh to sink into.
There is no end to them!
Bitrayuul was caught off-guard by one of the horrendous creatures launching itself into the air directly toward him. He froze in place, not knowing what to do as the vile monster closed in on him, mouth spread wide in sinister glee. The half-orc raised his arms in front of him defensively, though it was little protection against the pair of sharp weapons in the troll’s hands.
This is it. I don’t know what to do . . .
Shutting his eyes in fear, Bitrayuul waited for his doom. Every instinct told him to flee but he could not. His mind begged him to open his eyes and defend. To remember Tormag’s training. But he could not. Paralyzed by fear, the half-orc waited the final moment, anxiously waiting for the bite of blades as they cut deep into him.
I hope it is painless . . .
He waited, refusing to open his eyes. The press of the dwarf behind him continued, letting him know he was still alive. And still he waited. After what seemed an eternity, Bitrayuul opened his eyes and nearly jumped back in shock. His vision was met with the shattered skull of the troll staring back at him. Its eyes hung limply on bloodied cords from their sockets and the exposed brain of the troll could be seen pulsing from within its broken head. He turned to Tormag, who was busy fighting another troll.
How did that happen?
Bitrayuul looked to his other side and was surprised to see Senator Theiran, gripping a large maul tightly in his hands and swinging away with abandon. Upon making eye contact, Theiran offered a nod before turning his attention back to his opponent. Realizing that he had been saved by the old dwarf, Bitrayuul silently thanked him and steeled his resolve as the troll in front of him began to mend its shattered skull. He punched out with his gauntlets into the creature’s face. Blood squished out past his hands and splattered onto his face with a putrid smell that nearly made him gag. But he kept swinging. Despite the sharpened bones on his knuckles stabbing into the troll’s face, it still quickly started to regenerate the moment his hand was pulled away. It stared back at him with a wicked smile—punctured by a dozen holes—almost laughing at the futility of his blows.
Why won’t it die?!
As he continued to stab the monstrous creature’s face with abandon, his attacks grew more frantic. He did all he could to rid the beast of that grin, but it was pointless. Bitrayuul turned his head to regard Tormag and saw his father in the same stalemate as he. “How do we kill them?!”
Tormag grimly swung a war hammer into his foe’s face for good measure. “Just hold a bit longer! We’re waitin’!”
“Waiting for what?”
The sound of a horn blew from behind them and a cheer rolled through the dwarves. Bitrayuul quickly glanced back to see a large contraption of iron and wood being rolled toward them, six dwarves pushing on each side. A cart was attached to each end, filled with large spheres of twisted wood and dripping with a glimmering black liquid.
“That!”
Weekly Progress Update
Whew, just about finished. I’m up to 133,500 words for Book Two (can’t wait until the Title is announced on Thursday so I can stop saying ‘Book Two’) with only two or three chapters left!
Part of me considered just knocking out the last of it today. A big part. But, I like to keep a steady progress and not rush in order to avoid mistakes. Next weekend, I’ll read through my last few paragraphs and finish the first draft with a refreshed perspective. A lot of times my thoughts from Sunday’s writing session will change when I next sit down on Friday to pick up where I left off – for better or worse.
Also, once the first draft is finished, I’m moving straight into Book Three (oh god, now I have to call that one ‘Book Three’ for the next 6 months). I like to maintain momentum and keep it all fresh in my mind. I’ll be working on editing over the next few months, then hope to get it published sometime between June and September. Ideally, June is what I’m striving for, but I made mistakes with Honor due to being too eager to publish. Mistakes I wish I had caught prior to publication that I’m now working to correct. So, I’ll be taking Book Two a bit more slowly in order to avoid making the same mistakes and hope the end result will be all the better because of it.
This week also marks the first Free E-book promotion for Honor, between February 15th – 19th. So far, the promotion is doing great and a lot of new readers have picked it up. It even made it all the way to #12 in Epic Fantasy on Amazon. My goal is to reach the Top 10, but we’ll see! It’s been a good learning experience and I have some future marketing plans for both Honor and M– (oops, almost gave it away) Book Two.
Keep an eye out for some future content, check out the Skirmishes if you haven’t yet, and join me in the anxiousness of getting Book Two ready for print.
See you on the battlefield.
FREE E-Book! Feb. 15th – 19th
Interested in Orcblood Legacy: Honor but haven’t wanted to break out the wallet? For the next week, you can download the E-Book free of charge!
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Writing Prompt: War
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: There is no special rule this week (or for next week). Instead, I’ll be using the words for the Top 3 Titles for Book Two. Coming in at #2 was War! Check out next week’s Prompt for the Winning Title!
Bodies littered the field as far as Bitrayuul could see. Though no novice to battle, nothing could prepare him for the massacre at his feet. Mutilated mothers clung tightly to the squealing babes at their breast, hoping to shield their precious infants—a hopeless gesture that only prolonged the inevitable.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Dereliction
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Nearly a dozen waded through the brush, their enormous forms unhindered by the screen of greenery in their path. Ogres—all nearly an extra half of Gub’s size. Fangdarr watched as a scowl formed on each of their faces as they all stared at the orc. His knuckles were white around Driktarr’s shaft in anticipation. The orc cast a sidelong glance to Gub in hopes of determining if these ogres were friend or foe, but the dumbfounded creature continued splashing in the stream in blissful ignorance.
The first of the ogres to break through eyed Fangdarr carefully, paying close attention to the axe in his hand. His eyes narrowed dangerously until he too stared upon Gub. The leader of the group stepped into the water, its engorged stomach jiggling from the motion. He watched Fangdarr take a cautionary step back in response, spurring the ogre to take another forward.
“Shoo, orcsie,” the ogre grumbled, waving Fangdarr away. The monstrous creature turned its head to the side to two of its companions. “Go git ‘im.”
For a moment, Fangdarr thought the leader meant him. He tensed his legs, ready to spring into action. There was no chance of victory to be had, he knew. Not against ten ogres that he could only assume were fully matured due to their size advantage over Gub. As soon as the pair of ogres walked past their commanding ally, the orc nearly leapt into the air. But—with all the luck in the world—he held his pose for just a moment longer, enough time to see that, in fact, the ogres were walking toward Gub.
An expression of concern appeared on Fangdarr’s face as he realized they were coming for Gub. Instincts kicked in and the orc found himself taking a step toward his ally defensively—something the ogres did not miss.
As one, every ogre in the group began laughing at Fangdarr. “Orcsie think he do sumthin’?” the ringleader asked before replacing his mirthful smile into a disapproving frown. He took another two steps closer, only a few paces from the orc. “We take him. He ours.”
By then, Gub had lost his attention on the sparkling water running over his feet and taken notice of the group of ogres. “Ogres!” he exclaimed with a smile. Jumping up and down in glee and smacking his pudgy hands together, Gub skipped merrily to Fangdarr. “Look, Faydar, ogres!” He chuckled, pointing to the band of monstrous creatures.
Fangdarr didn’t know whether the ogres could be trusted or not, or if they were Gub’s kin or just happening by, but Gub seemed to trust them. The orc also recognized that they could have ambushed and killed both of them without much effort. He nodded in acceptance to Gub and turned to the leader. “We go with you?”
Once again the band laughed at his expense, renewing the wave of humiliation Fangdarr felt. “No, orcsie. He ours. We take him.” With a motion of his fattened head, the ogre instructed his subordinates to continue their task of claiming Gub.
Gub needed no convincing, however, as he lunged forward and wrapped his arms around the nearest ogre in a great hug. The adorable and wide smile on his face was met with an intense look of disgust by his victim whom tried to push away the affectionate ogre. “Eh! Boss this one funny. Ya sure ya wants ‘im?”
Letting out a low groan, the head ogre responded with frustration. “He is ogre. Ogres stick together. We fix ‘im.”
Still caught in the breath-stealing embrace, the other ogre scoffed. Finally, he managed to push Gub away who seemed entirely unfazed and moved to hug the next ogre in line. With a deadness in his expression, that creature simply accepted his fate and waited for the overly long embrace to end. Fangdarr watched as Gub’s smile remained spread from ear to ear as the pair of ogres he hugged grabbed hold of his arms and started leading him toward the group.
“G-Gub?!” the orc called out in plea. He stepped forward, feeling the pit in his stomach expand with every step further they went. Fangdarr waited for his friend to speak on his behalf and request that the ogres take him in as well. After all, they were friends, right? But as Gub simply kept his ignorant smile on his face as the ogres escorted him away, waving back to Fangdarr as if they would see each other soon, the orc felt a profound sense of despondency. He had never felt so abandoned before. Despite their short time together, Fangdarr had thought that he and Gub were friends.
Another bout of laughter escaped from the ringleader as he watched the orc fall into sorrow alone in the stream. That demeaning chuckle pierced through Fangdarr like a spear, reminding him of just how weak and alone he truly was. He forced back his tears with a struggle, refusing to allow his tormentor to witness his vulnerability. But the condescending sneer was enough to break him.
Dejected, Fangdarr abruptly turned and stormed off in the opposite direction—haunted by the incessant laughter at his back. The wind stung his eyes and cheeks as they chilled the wetness that ran down his face. He sprinted as fast as he could deeper into the Lithe, cursing himself for trusting Gub. As hate burned in his heart like a raging inferno, Fangdarr promised himself that he would never cease his hatred for ogres.
Weekly Progress Update
Hello!
Book Two is very, very close to completion for the first draft! I put in a bit of extra time this weekend and got another chapter done (it was mainly hard to stop writing, since I’m at the final bit where the stakes are really high). I think I have between 4 – 6 chapters left before its complete.
So, that’s pretty exciting – and terrifying – but exciting.
It should only take 1 – 2 more weeks to finish the first draft, which is right on schedule. I started writing Book Two on September 1st, so it took 6 months to write, which is my goal. Normally, I would start right on Book Three right away in order to maintain momentum. But it may be delayed a month or so while I work on editing Book Two, we’ll see. If it’s only a month it shouldn’t be too bad, but I’d like to jump right in and transition immediately.
On another note, Book Two now has a Title! I’ll be revealing the title on February 19th in the week’s Fifty Word Fantasy Prompt. The third place Title option was this week’s Prompt, ‘Swarm‘. On the 12th, the runner up Title option will be in the Fifty Word Fantasy Prompt.
I’m really excited to get to reading and editing Book Two. I haven’t read any of what I’ve written (excluding the Prologue) yet. There will be hundreds of mistakes and probably a few sections in need of a rewrite, but it’s all part of the process. Hopefully readers enjoy this entry – there is certainly a lot of intense scenes with high stakes and even more action than Orcblood Legacy: Honor.
But, you’ll all have to let me know what you think!
That’s it for this week, check out the update next week to see if the first draft manages to get completed.
Writing Prompt: Swarm
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: There is no special rule this week (or for the next two weeks). Instead, I’ll be using the words for the Top 3 Titles for Book Two. Coming in at #3 was Swarm! Check out next week’s Prompt for the runner-up Title!
They were everywhere. An endless sea of black that spread as far as the eye could see. Their howls echoed through the city and battered at the men’s resolve, a plague of hopelessness threatening to shatter their spirit. There could be no victory here. No survival. There was only death.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Freedom
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Fangdarr stepped easily toward his friend, no longer bothered by the sight of the half-eaten woman in Gub’s hands—nor the gory mess the ogre was making of himself. The orc planted his bloodied greataxe into the earth next to the fire pit and took a seat. As he pulled another hunk of meat from the roasted venison, Fangdarr let out a sigh of content. The weather was pleasant, the breeze gentle, and—save for the crunching of Gub’s meal—the forest was silent.
With each passing moment, Fangdarr grew more and more accepting of his choice to leave the confines of his family’s home. He had been outside in the forest many times before, but it felt different now. Untethered and free to do as he pleased, Fangdarr enjoyed the prospect of having none to command him but himself. His eyes glanced back to Gub, whom had just finished the last of his meal and was picking shreds of cloth from his teeth. Despite the sense of liberty, the orc was glad to at least have one friend—even one so dumb as this one.
That night, they slept by the fire, taking advantage of the preparations their human victims had made for themselves. And why should it go to waste? This was Fangdarr’s life now. To salvage, to raid, to hunt. To survive. His mother had raised him to be respectful of other’s belongings. But that was not the orcish way, he knew. And his mother was gone.
For the next moon cycle, Fangdarr and Gub strolled through the surrounding wood with no destination in mind. They stayed together and became close as they hunted, joked, and continued to raid unfortunate humans in their secluded cabins. Fangdarr loved every moment of it, relishing in the freedom and the bloodshed. Not a shred of guilt was felt for those they had murdered in their exploits. Not for humans. Never for humans.
One morning, the pair were lazing around by a stream and simply enjoying the lush beauty of the forest and all it had to offer. They splashed around joyously, scaring away the nearby birds and other critters who had resided too close. “This fun, Faydar!” Gub exclaimed with his almost child-like giggle as he dipped the tips of his fingers into the water’s surface and flicked the liquid toward the orc.
Fangdarr, barely avoiding the torrent of water, kicked back his own series of splashes in response, dousing the sluggish ogre and drawing another laugh. For many moments they continued their light-hearted antics without any care. But it all stopped once Fangdarr heard the shuffling of brush not far off. He quickly shushed his friend and received a confused and blank stare in reply.
Slowly, Fangdarr patted the air and drew his weapon, waiting for their stalker. It was big. Enormous, even. Even the trees groaned in protest as the foreign creature came closer, threatening to rip their roots from the earth. Gub continued his empty expression. It was obvious the ogre could not gauge the severity of the threat that seemed to be approaching. Fangdarr, on the other hand, tensed his body in anticipation.
Finally, their intruder broke through the thick vegetation, pushing aside the dense brush. Not just one intruder, but many.
Weekly Progress Update
Hope everyone had a good weekend, it was pretty busy here (I say that as someone who likes their weekends to be entirely empty – so ‘busy’ means one thing planned basically).
I went out this weekend with my cousin who is getting interested in writing. After reading Orcblood Legacy: Honor, he’s discovered an interest in Fantasy – which is awesome! I’ve given him the first trilogy of R. A. Salvatore’s Drizzt series, which was the series that got me deeply involved in Fantasy. Hopefully it will serve as an inspiration for him as well. It’s a long series, but one I’d recommend to any Fantasy fans.
Overall, he’s got some cool ideas on a plot he’d like to work on and I’m pretty excited to see what he puts together. Writing is something I always try to find more people to talk to about, but it’s pretty difficult. Most are pretty secluded, among a few other quirks. I hope it’s something he comes to enjoy, as I have, but we’ll see how it plays out. He’s young and there’s a lot to discover – both in writing and out.
As far as writing this weekend, I was really excited to get some scenes in. In the final act, some of the major events that I’ve had planned for months are finally making their way onto the pages and it’s great to be able to get them played out. For any who read the Skirmishes, there is an Easter Egg hidden within Book Two that only those who have read them may realize. The story will make sense even without knowledge of the Skirmishes, but it’ll certainly be much more impactful if you’re aware of some of the side events I’ve written about on the site.
There is still a lot left to go! I’m currently at 116,000 words and on Chapter Sixty. I would estimate probably 10 or more chapters left, but it’s hard to say. There are still a couple of major events that need to occur. It’s some back-to-back action that I hope will leave people on the edge of their couch cushions, eager to flip the page and forcing themselves to stay awake to keep going. But I’m a bit biased. 🙂
Only time will tell, I suppose. My wife and I go on vacation at the end of the month and I’d like the first draft to be completed by then. So only 3 more weekends left until then. Pretty exciting to almost be done. I’ve already got some plans for Book Three and will probably start on that almost immediately after I’m finished with Book Two’s first draft and attempt to juggle editing and writing between Book Two and Book Three. Damn, I really need to think of a name for Book Two, we’re getting too close now and I hate identifying it as ‘Book Two’ all the time.
A battle for another day! See you all next week!
Writing Prompt: Tired
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: This week, I’m tired. So today the rule is to write about how tired I am. 🙂
Gods, I’m tired, Chakal thought, cursing himself for dozing off. He peeked around the corner once more to where the guard outside the cellar was now deep in slumber—as Chakal wished to be. With a groan of annoyance, the assassin rose to his feet and stalked toward the cellar.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Unity
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
“C’mon, lad, we gotta move!”
Bitrayuul tried to return to his father’s side, but the immediate surge of dwarves all around pushed and shoved him back. Finally, after suffering a dozen bruises as the armored warriors trampled past, the half-orc managed to catch up to Tormag.
“Ye got yer gauntlets and yer bow, right?” the dwarf asked as they were running. When he watched Bitrayuul’s head turn back to the table they had been sitting, it was obvious the half-orc’s large bow had been left behind. “Leave it, son. No time. Put yer gauntlets on as ye run—don’t stab yerself.”
Doing as instructed, Bitrayuul silently slid the leather gauntlets over his hands, careful not to pierce himself with the sharpened bones tied over his knuckles. A dozen questions ran through his mind, but he jogged on in silence behind the horde of dwarves. Many were still drunk and some even stripped of gear or clothing. And yet, they rushed onward to what Bitrayuul could only assume was danger.
They passed through the city as a steamrolling tide. The wide streets of Tarabar allowed them to pass unhindered and flow through the city to their destination. This was not how Bitrayuul had wished to see the marvels held within Tarabar. He glanced at the dozens of forges burning brightly as they blazed rampantly without the smithy to control the flames. For all had joined in defense of the city.
Bitrayuul wondered at such a practice. It seemed odd that nearly every male civilian—and a few females, from what he could tell—had immediately halted their lives to take to the fight. Perhaps they had grown accustomed to such a joined defensive measure from when Bothain had led his people to the eastern Tusks and they struggled to survive. The half-orc could not know. But the tight-knit community made him feel safe.
“We’re nearly there, lad.” Tormag said, breaking his son’s distraction. “It most likely be trolls in the mines. We’re headed t’ the southern network, which be where they break through most.”
The half-orc nodded, but in truth he had no idea what any of that meant. He had never encountered a troll before. Often Tormag had spoken of them due to their ancient rivalry over the mountains, but always with the cautious tale of their wickedness and cunning. Bitrayuul still had so many questions. Unfortunately, it seemed he would be learning by practice today.
As they pushed through a large steel gate, every dwarf waited in grim silence. Their gazes were stern and their brows furrowed. Grumbles and mutterings of trolls ruining Bothain’s day could be heard, only increasing their growing anger. They tightened the straps on their armor and gripped their weapons tightly as the door spread wide enough for the army to pass through. Even now, more and more dwarves continued to form behind them. Thousands were collected, all ready to defend their homeland and shatter some skulls. Drunk, tired, or naked, it mattered naught, for every warrior was prepared to give their life.
The procession stepped forward slowly. No longer did they rush on with abandon. Bitrayuul was amazed at the lack of commands being needed. Their tactics had changed the moment they stepped through the door. From an immediate assembly to a marching formation, they stomped forward, banging their fists or weapons against shields and armor alike. Uniform thumping filled the expansive cavern, letting their enemy know their antics would soon come to an end.
Bitrayuul took it all in. He marveled at such discipline. Such pride and bravery as they moved as one. Even Tormag had taken out his hammers and was clapping them against his shoulders to join in the simultaneous thumping. The half-orc looked down and realized that even his fist was clapping against his chest in unison. A smile unknowingly formed on his face as he felt a part of something greater than himself. None of the dwarves looked at him as if he was an outsider. All stared ahead at those who dared to intrude on their home.
Upon entering the cavern, Bitrayuul gawked at its enormity. It was obvious this was some sort of hub where all southern mines joined together. Along the wall, Bitrayuul could see nearly a hundred dwarf-sized holes—with a few larger ones on the ground level. Each had a thick rope or ladder leading to it, allowing for miners to go in and out as needed. Iron carts were filled with glittering stones and ores alike on one side of the room, waiting for extraction. He remembered that Tormag said the trolls would come through the mines. His eyes scanned each and every hole, wondering which they would come from. It seemed a pointless task to him, for the trolls could only climb through one at a time due to the small height. What was stopping the dwarves from simply plugging the tunnel?
Then, his answer became clear. His father had warned against the cunningness of trolls. Bitrayuul watched the first troll pull itself from the small tunnel, high in the air. Then another from a separate tunnel on the far end of the cavern. Then another. Within moments, nearly every tunnel was spilling a steady stream of trolls. The precession of dwarves halted their advance, but continued their uniform pounding while the rear of the army continued to fill the cavern.
Bitrayuul watched in horror as the monstrous beasts jumped from the tunnels and onto the ground, sometimes shattering bones as they landed. His eyes grew wider still as those same fractured trolls rose to their feet and regenerated their broken limbs as if it had never occurred. Nearly a thousand trolls had spilled into the cavern already with no sign of relent.
Tormag turned to Bitrayuul and offered his final piece of advice. “Whatever ye do, lad, don’t follow them t’ the tunnels.”
Before the half-orc could respond, every dwarf shouted at once and rushed forward.
Weekly Progress Update
Good morning! Sorry I’m a bit late on this, I got carried away yesterday.
We’re in the Final Act of Book Two and all of the intensity and high stakes are starting! I’m excited for next week’s writing sessions to see what happens.
Also, I made a post on Imgur that made Most Viral regarding my favorite author, R. A. Salvatore. He’s the writer for the Drizzt Do’Urden series, which is the largest inspiration for Orcblood Legacy. When I read his books in my teens, it was really the start to my love of Fantasy that sparked the interest in writing. To be honest, I can’t (or rather don’t want to) go back and re-read them, despite them being stories I love. Now that I write my own books, I see a lot of things that I don’t like in his writing – or that just differs from my preferences.
I still loved those books and fondly claim them to be my favorite series (next to Orcblood Legacy, of course!). But I don’t want to ruin the magic when I start picking them apart from a written perspective. My teenage mind didn’t care about plot repetition, immortal characters, or the lack of a structured magic system. At the time, I only cared about the story and its players. Writing is a completely different beast than reading and it changes your perspective a lot on the things you normally would just look past. Even now, I can’t watch movies without automatically pointing out the plot holes. It is frustrating, to say the least.
In any case, all writers get inspiration from somewhere. It’s important to remember the things or people that brought you where you are. While I may disagree with the way some of Salvatore’s books are written, I will never deny that they serve as the primary influence behind my own.
That’s all for this week, folks!
Writing Prompt: Microfictions
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Special Rule: For this week, we’ll be doing microfictions. Instead of one response at 50-words, do 10 responses at 5 words. This is meant to show you different ways to use abrupt sentences to increase impact.
- It is done. We lost.
- Our last hope has fallen.
- The light in her dwindled.
- Rage burned intensely within Fangdarr.
- Blood erupted all over him.
- The wound couldn’t be staunched.
- Desperation made him swing wildly.
- Her child’s eyes closed forever.
- It wailed in woeful agony.
- Broken. Weary. He had failed.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Bond
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Bitrayuul leaned back in his stool. It made him happy to hear the history of Tormag’s people, almost as if he belonged. He looked out at the thousands of dwarves who had come to celebrate that history and the dwarf who had brought them to salvation. A part of him wondered if orcs had anything similar—though he doubted it. Vrutnag had never spoken about any orc holidays. Whether that was due to their lacking or her disinterest in sharing that part of the orcish culture, Bitrayuul could not be sure.
Frowning as he realized the mug in his hand had already been drained, Tormag checked his surroundings. His eyes lit up as he saw an unconscious dwarf two tables over with a frothing mug still growing warm in his limp hand. Without a word, the commander quickly left his seat to retrieve the drink and sat down with a wide smile.
“Aren’t you already drunk, Father?” the half-orc asked with a raised eyebrow as Tormag poured the entire mug into his throat in a single swig.
Slamming the empty cup down, the dwarf let out a loud exhale of contentedness. Before he spoke, Tormag abruptly belched loud enough to wake the nearby dwarf he had stolen his drink from. Disregarding the confused searching of his neighbor, Tormag replied, “Aye, that I be. Ye orcs ain’t had no ale or nothin’ in yer cave. I got six years t’ make up, don’t ye doubt! Bahaha!”
Bitrayuul blinked at him with concern. Other than the small sip of ale he had in the bar prior—and a few stolen drinks during the celebration—he had never experienced inebriation before. In truth, he had gotten quite a buzz of dizziness through the day, but nowhere near the point of drunkenness. “Isn’t it . . . bad? To get so drunk?”
“Bahaha! Normally, probably so! Humans and elves can’t hold their drink. Not sure about orcs, t’ be honest.” Tormag seemed to ponder for a moment, then chuckled at his imagination’s illustration of a drunken orc. “But dwarves, lad, are different. We love the drink. Our bodies can stomach more without spittin’ it back out. Let’s us drink longer. They used t’ say that the water ye would find in caves weren’t safe t’ drink, so they made ale. I’m guessin’ that’s just some trick by a brewmaster t’ help sell his wares, but, by Bothain’s Hammer, it worked.”
The half-orc joined in the laughter with his adoptive father, and further still as Tormag left his seat once more to retrieve another ale. The dwarf had told him plenty of stories about the games his kin would play while drinking over the recent years. Each ended with more and more tales of fun and bonding that made Bitrayuul quite jealous. He yearned for that. Tales of his own. Tales of fun, tales of adventure, all of it. It was true that the half-orc cherished his life in the cave with his mother and brother, but always he strived for more. There had to be more.
Without hesitation—and drawing a confused stare from Tormag—Bitrayuul lifted himself from the small stool and strode to the nearest unconscious dwarf he could find with an ale in his hand. As he sat back down, Tormag’s face was spread into a smile. The dwarf raised his cup and clinked it against Bitrayuul’s in cheer. Together, they lifted the mugs to their mouth and poured the sweet yet bitter liquid down. Like his father, Bitrayuul slammed his empty cup to the hardwood table and let out a loud belch that put Tormag’s to shame. They laughed once more and let their cheeks spread to smiles. Though the drink was thick, its pleasant aid was unneeded to keep their moods light and happy.
As they each stood to start the search for a filled flagon anew, an alarm blasted through the city, startling every sleeping and unconscious dwarf around. Bitrayuul turned to Tormag, “Another celebration?” He realized the falseness of his assumption by the grim expression painted on the dwarf’s face.
“No, lad. It’s not.”
Weekly Progress Update
Hello, hello!
This week had a lot happen and has been pretty exciting. First, the cover art for Book Two was finished and looks phenomenal. I can’t wait for everyone to see it. I will probably be releasing it in a sort of promotional announcement closer to publishing, most likely in Summer (2019).
Also, a lot of new details were added to Book Two. Last week I mentioned that I made some last minute changes to some side plots. This week involved getting those stitched together and meshing well (in addition to writing them). I’m pretty happy with how it turned out, but we’ll see how it goes in the editing phase. All I can say is that for any who are keeping up on the Skirmishes, there are going to be some fun little tidbits in Book Two for you to look forward to.
Overall, this weekend was spent installing two new POVs to get a better insight into some of the characters, as well as fleshing out some of the finer details in the Final Act.
That’s pretty much where the progress stands right now. We’re just about to enter the Final Act of Book Two and there is a lot planned. The stakes are high, the fights are intense, and anything can happen.
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Writing Prompt: Betrayal
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Special Rule: Using either your own characters or ones you have discovered in stories, respond with an act of betrayal (that doesn’t already exist).
Bitrayuul crept around the corner playfully, waiting to startle Tormag. When his dwarven adoptive father stepped into the room, a maiden on his arm, he considered abandoning his task. However, his decision was made for him once he overhead Tormag drunkenly respond, “Nah, I ain’t got no children, love.”
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Meat
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Oh, that savory smell. It made Fangdarr’s mouth wet in eagerness with each step they took. His stomach groaned impatiently as if clawing relentlessly in search of sustenance. The orc cautiously picked his way through the trees while Gub trundled in a direct path onward. After a few dozen paces, the small cabin came into view.
“Gub, wait!” Fangdarr harshly whispered from behind a tree to the lumbering oaf. It was no use. Already the ogre had his hands extended forward as he leaned into his quickened pace, breaking through the last bit of brush outside of the home.
Fangdarr tensed from his hiding spot, expecting the sound of screams to soon follow. But when none came, he slowly relaxed and started padding closer—his stomach leading the way. He poked his head around the corner of the cabin window. Empty. Letting his hunger get the best of him, Fangdarr rushed over to the fire where Gub was already voraciously chomping on the leg of a stag that had been roasting over the flames.
The ogre patted the ground beside him, inviting his friend to join in on the meal. Without hesitation, Fangdarr ripped the other haunch off the cooked beast and sank his teeth in. The sweet and juicy meat pressed against his tongue with a rush of ecstasy after such a long delay since his last meal. Before the first mouthful had even slid down his throat, the orc eagerly took another bite. His eyes closed with contentedness.
By the time the orc had opened his eyes, Gub was already licking his fingers clean. To Fangdarr’s surprise, the ogre had managed to completely consume the entire leg—bone and all—in just a few bites. Gub gave a gap-toothed smile with juices dripping down his chin as he reached for the hanging meat. Before his hand connected, an arrow whistled through the air and dug itself into the ogre’s forearm.
Fangdarr rolled to the side in an instant and hid behind a tree. His instincts proved fruitful as a second arrow landed in the dirt where he had been sitting. Gub, on the other hand, was staring at his arm dumbfounded as to what had occurred. The stupid creature continued to stare at it—despite Fangdarr’s shouts urging him to take action—even as a second arrow pierced his chest.
Now, Gub was angry. It took a moment for the pain to register in his sluggish mind, but once he understood that he was being attacked, the ogre was up on his feet with a ferocious snarl. Fangdarr peeked his head around the tree he had tucked himself behind and could see two humans pointing their wooden bows at his ally. Roaring as he charged, one shifted their attention to him while the other, a woman, remained fixated on Gub’s advancing form.
The arrow whizzed toward the orc, clipping him in the left shoulder but hardly slowing him. Too great was his rage to care for such a thing. As he closed the distance, Fangdarr drew his enormous axe, growling as he raised it high.
Gripped by fear at the oncoming enraged orc, the man ahead fumbled with his bow awkwardly. With luck and quick wits, the man managed to withdraw a small knife after dropping his bow. As Driktarr came crashing down through his shoulder, the blade managed to cut through his assailant’s side and slice the orc’s kidney. The pain would have been enough to drop any to their knees, but Fangdarr felt no pain in that moment. There was only rage and the sheer intense rush of victory as he watched the splash of blood splatter against the man’s face. He could feel the axe drink the man’s vitality and stitch together the grievous wound that had been inflicted. The man looked on in horror in that final moment and watched the arrow in the orc’s shoulder crawl out and drop to the ground. What little light there had been in the victim’s eyes slowly faded as Fangdarr ripped his blade free from the man’s torso, pulling organs with it.
Though his rage was subsiding, Fangdarr turned to Gub and the remaining woman. He expected her to have been able to easily outsmart the ogre and keep out of reach while still firing off a few shots. However, his expectations of her skill were too high. As he turned his head, the orc caught the vision of horror on the woman’s face as Gub lifted her from the ground and pulled her toward his waiting maw.
Despite her incessant struggling, it was hopeless. She shrieked in terror until the moment her head disappeared within the stretched jaws of the giant creature. Fangdarr nearly shuddered at the crunch of bone as Gub crushed down on her skull. Even worse were the sounds as the ogre chewed nonchalantly on the woman’s lifeless corpse, blood dripping in streams down his exposed chest.
Torn between the triumph of victory and the thought of the innocent couple that had only sought to defend what was theirs, Fangdarr felt a wave of guilt and regret surge through him. Yet, he looked down at the newly formed scar across his side and smiled. This was it. This was what it meant to be an orc, he knew. He recalled the men that had chased down and decapitated his mother despite her innocence. These humans were no different than she and were met with the same brutality. There was no need for guilt. This was equality.
Weekly Progress Update
Hey everyone! Happy Weekend!
Had a few great writing sessions this weekend – a lot of new, unexpected changes were made to Book Two that should add a lot of drama and intrigue! It’s a risk, but overall I think it’ll make the story much better. This is one of the reasons I write in the process I do, there’s always room to adapt as the story sees fit.
Additionally, I spent some time this weekend learning more about Photoshop to put together a Promotional Ad that is out circulating Facebook right now. I’m no artist, but think it turned out well enough.
I got some progress updates on Book Two’s cover that I’m really, REALLY excited for. I love getting the covers designed. It’s one of my favorite aspects of putting the book together and so far I love how it’s turning out. Here’s a quick sneak peak that you might’ve seen already if you follow the Facebook page!
I’m hoping to get another progress update next week. I may put it up on Facebook or on the site, but I like keeping the suspense – we’ll see! If you follow the Facebook page or subscribe to the side on the sidebar, you’ll be able to see when it goes up!
That’s it for today, check in next week!
Writing Prompt: Fallible
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rule: This week’s rule is very special! If you’re a writer, you have 50-words to kill your Main Character in the current setting and environment they are in within your story. For those who are not writing their own story, kill off a character you hate from a book you’ve read!
Fangdarr approached the tower with pride swelling his chest. He had done it. The king would be forced to keep his end of the bargain and offer his aid. But as the chieftain entered the chamber, it was not the king that greeted him, rather the blades of the council.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Gub
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
The creature walked through the wood with grace. It slowly patted at the ground, exposing the more exquisite and rare plants tucked beneath the fallen leaves. As it grazed ignorantly, Fangdarr waited patiently behind a tree with his bow in hand.
Suddenly, the orc heard a twig snap at his rear, followed by the loud swishing of brush being pushed aside. Immediately he turned to see the simple and brutish ogre he had befriended the day prior.
“Gub! Shh!” Fangdarr urged, motioning desperately with his hands to the senseless beast. Before Gub even had a chance to flash his toothy smile, the orc was already staring wide-eyed at his prize as it dashed in the opposite direction.
“OH! Faydar, look! Deer!” Gub shouted at the top of his lungs in uncontainable excitement. If the creature had not already rushed off, it certainly would have by the ogre’s subsequent pounding on the forest floor with his eager hops.
All the orc could do was shake his head in frustration. How does this creature survive out here? It scares away all the food! Choosing to force himself back to tranquility, Fangdarr let his simmering rage dissipate and instead walked over to Gub—still flailing in wild joy.
“Gub, we need food,” the orc begged, bringing an end to the ogre’s smile. “Where you find food?” Already Fangdarr was starting to regret befriending the massive oaf. He watched Gub’s face turn from confusion, to glee, to perplexion, then fear, and finally denial all in a short span of time. How he wished he could hear the jumbled and slow thoughts of this creature.
Finally, Gub’s eyes lit up. “Food! I know where,” he responded in his usual slumped and sluggish tone. Without hesitation, the ogre took off running to the east. His long legs accelerated him quickly, though his awkward form and excessive gut slowed him to Fangdarr’s speed, allowing the orc to catch up quickly.
Together they ran, dashing through the woods for what seemed half the day. Finally, Gub skidded to a halt abruptly nearly causing Fangdarr to crash into him. Breathing heavily from such an extended trek, the orc scanned the area. He expected to see some sort of indicator that their meal was nearby—a trail of smoke, a fresh carcass, anything. But all Fangdarr could see was exactly what had surrounded them before they even left. There was naught but trees, stones, and brush.
“Where food, Gub?” Fangdarr asked after catching his breath. The burning in his legs was intense, though his stubbornness refused to allow him to sit.
The ogre turned to him and gave a yelp of surprise as if he had no idea who Fangdarr was or how he had appeared behind him. “Who you?!” Gub yelled, tripping over himself and crawling away desperately.
Fangdarr stood completely confounded at the ogre’s reaction. “Gub . . . It’s Fangdarr. You remember?” No matter his words, no recognition came from the poor disturbed creature. The orc could see the same fear staining the gray orbs of his newfound friend as their first encounter, renewing the pity that was felt. As Fangdarr took a step closer, Gub whimpered and continued to crawl backwards before backing into a large tree. His profound fear only grew upon the realization that he was seemingly trapped against this advancing demon.
How can he not remember me? We just spent half the day racing through the forest to find food! The orc rubbed his temple in thought, frustrated at the inconvenience of dealing with such an imbecilic creature. Quickly, Fangdarr fell on an idea. “Gub, lift your stomach.”
Afraid and confusion only continuing to grow, the ogre stared at Fangdarr with concern. Though, after the orc made a motion to lift his own stomach Gub followed suit. With his enormous gut free from its sticky seal against his waist, the round stone tucked inside fell to the ground. Gub immediately picked it up and inspected it with a smile, thinking he had just found a king’s crown in the muck.
Fangdarr waited for the realization to strike. Yet, many moments passed before the orc came to his own awareness that the ogre may never make the connection. He sighed at the hopelessness of his ploy and started to consider his options. Too tired and hungry to make the return journey back to their cave, there was little choice remaining. Fangdarr eyed his surroundings and knew he was unfamiliar with his location. Gub’s aimless path through the forest seemed to lead them to parts unknown, with no landmarks in sight.
“Faydar!” the orc heard a moment before he saw Gub scrambling to his feet and charging over.
Preparing for the inevitable assault of mass that he knew would be pressed around him, Fangdarr flexed his muscles as the ogre lifted him into the air in joy. Despite his efforts, the air in his lungs was pressed free as Gub gripped him tightly in his embrace. “G-Gub . . . down . . .” he could barely force out.
With luck, the ogre dropped him to the ground and smiled as Fangdarr crashed to the ground gasping for air. “Friend!” Gub held the small stone up for the orc to see, finally making the connection between the two, before tucking it safely beneath the fold of his stomach once more. “Friend,” he repeated and nodded to himself, that stupid smile on his face not diminishing in the slightest.
As if remembering their purpose for coming this way, Gub started walking off and leaving Fangdarr in the dirt to collect himself. The orc rose to his feet with a groan, regretting more and more his decision to befriend such a mindless brute. Nevertheless, he followed Gub through the wood—what choice did he have? After a few hundred paces, Fangdarr could see smell it. That succulent smell flooded his nostrils and replenished his hope. Meat.
Weekly Progress Update
Whew, what a weekend. I fell behind and missed Friday due to a health procedure, but was able to get a short chapter completed on Saturday and a long one in Sunday.
I’m a bit worried, as the chapter from Sunday came with a large last minute change that drastically affects the plot in the remainder of the story. So, I need to be wary of piercing through the previously-laid plot and not add new holes.
Last minute changes like this are extremely risky. I’ve done them a handful of times between both books and so far they’ve turned out alright. In this case, the original scenario I had planned was a bit bland. The new direction is much more intense and dramatic, adding a lot more interest for both me and my reader – I think. We’ll see how it goes!
Other than that, not too much to report. Sitting at about 90,000 words in Book Two. I’m expecting to need at least 125,000 – 150,000 in this one, especially with the new route I’ve decided to take. The goal is to be finished with the first draft around March 1st.
Writing Prompt: Wasteland
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Special Rule: This week’s rule requires you write sentences with alternating word counts between Even and Odd. You cannot have two Even counts or two Odd counts next to each other. (i.e. the response below has 3 words, 12 words, 21 words, and 14 words)
There was nothing. Just a vast emptiness of fragmented earth desiccated from a ceaseless sun. Even the scattered bones were brittle and shattered beneath their feet as they traversed the desolate valley, piercing the dead silence. They knew this place had been the doom of many unfit for its harshness.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Bothain
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Huffing with exhaustion, Tormag rolled to his side with a groan, disregarding the pained grunts from the dwarves beneath him. “Where ye at, Bit?” the aged commander called out to the withering crowd of drunken and bruised warriors. His eyes scanned the masses, wondering why it was so difficult to find a half-orc in a sea of dwarves, especially when Bitrayuul was twice their height.
“I’m here!” came the muffled reply from a few paces away. Surely enough, a tan-skinned arm pierced through the sheet of sprawled dwarves layered over top of the half-orc, waving frantically.
Tormag crawled over top of his kin slowly. He would have apologized, but this was the expectation of Bothain’s Day. Once Tormag had reached his adoptive son, he rolled the sleeping, fatigued, or unconscious warriors away that lay over his trapped companion. Energyless rebuttals of discontent came from most of the dwarves as the commander pushed them aside, finally clearing enough room for Bitrayuul to rise to his feet.
The pair stood amidst the thousands of resting dwarves, breathing heavily themselves. The festivities had lasted all through the night—at least, Bitrayuul assumed it was night—and left nearly the entire city battered. “Dwarves sure throw a party, don’t ye doubt,” Tormag said with a laugh.
“I guess so?” Bitrayuul responded. His eyes were fixed on the enormous steel hammer still burning in the air above. “How does it burn so long?”
Tormag didn’t need to look to know what his pupil was asking about. “Dwarves be pretty handy with tools, sure as stones. There be a line that runs through and feeds from an oil supply. Burns through nearly a hundred barrels o’ the stuff, I reckon, but Bothain’s Day only comes once a year.”
The mention of Bothain reminded the half-orc that he had questions he wished to ask regarding the subject of their devotion. “Tormag, Bothain is a god, right? I remember you telling us about him in small details back home, though not often.”
Raising a rugged hand to his bearded chin and giving a deep scratch, Tormag considered how much to divulge of his culture’s beliefs and heritage. He had never mentioned much during their time in the cave out of respect for Vrutnag. The dwarf’s last wish was to interfere with anything she might have taught them about their beliefs.
“Eh, Bothain ain’t technically a god, but he be considered one,” Tormag explained with a bit of reluctance. Bitrayuul raised an eyebrow in confusion, pressing the dwarf for further details. With a low sigh, Tormag continued. “He was just a dwarf, like the rest o’ us. Except he was the one behind all this.” His arms spread wide to take in the whole city. Thousands and thousands o’ years ago, we dwarves were livin’ in the mountain caves, no better than trolls—save fer our boundless handsomeness and a bit o’ civility, don’t ye doubt!”
Slumping down onto a stool, Tormag took a seat at a table away from spectators and eavesdroppers who may not be fond of their history being shared with one of orcish descent. Bitrayuul slowly slid onto the adjacent seat, hardly able to squeeze his tall frame beneath the boards.
“Anyways, we were at war with the trolls over claims to the mountains. The Tusks, they’re called, because of the infestation o’ trolls that reside in ’em. Dwarves have been here all along, just keep t’ ourselves. Our kind hid out in caves, fightin’ t’ survive. The troll’s numbers were limitless. They rooted out most o’ me ancestors. Bothain was the leader o’ the clan at the time. It was he who kept dwarves together, kept ‘em fightin’, and gave ‘em hope. Originally, dwarves resided in the southern wall o’ the Tusks. He convinced everyone t’ leave their homes and migrate here, t’ the eastern wall. Many disagreed, don’t ye doubt!
“But he kept nudgin’. And as more dwarves continued t’ die, he needed t’ nudge less and less. Eventually, the clan was convinced. There weren’t many left, save a thousand or two, perhaps. He led ’em quietly through the mountains. They called it the Stoneprint Path, last I remember.” Tormag’s voice turned somber as he recalled the tales of his ancestors. “It be long gone now . . . Stones change over time and the beatin’ they take from the elements tends t’ wash history away.”
Bitrayuul listened intently, taking in the story with riveted attention. “What happened next? Did they build Tarabar?” he asked with excitement.
Tormag spread a small smile across his cheeks at the half-orc’s eagerness. “Bothain first had our people carve a tiny path deep into the mountain—one that could easily be closed off should the trolls discover them. With luck, they went unnoticed for a few years—enough time t’ get the steel doors built. Once those were up, they were safe. Trolls may claim most o’ the mountains, but they’re worse diggers than gnomes, sure as stones. Sure, they can swing a pick, and eventually they managed to slowly intersect our many tunnels, but Bothain had plenty o’ time to get Tarabar up and runnin’. Forges were always aglow, hammers always pounded, and bellies were always full. He passed on from this world our king and savior, over thousands o’ years ago. On this day.”
Weekly Progress Update
Happy New Year!
I don’t have much to report this week. I made some progress on Book Two and got my date’s confirmed for an event at my local library in Spring. I hope everyone had a good holiday!
Book Two is currently at 85,000 words with probably at least 10 chapters remaining. We’re getting closer to the final act/events, so it’s getting pretty intense and thrilling.
Sorry for such a short update, see you next week!
Writing Prompt: Nihilistic
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Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, your response must give evidence toward a nihilistic personality or perspective without using the actual word or any variant.
Lucien leaned back against the slime-covered stone and sighed. “There is no hope here. We are all just waiting for our enemy to crash down upon us like a raging tempest against the cliffs. No matter how resolute the stone, it eventually falls—piece by piece. It always falls.”
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Alarm
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The innkeeper stared at Tormag with eyes wide in rage. Throwing his soiled rag to the floor, the barkeep stomped over to the unwelcome patrons in a huff, ready to eject them from his establishment. Tormag remained unmoving, even as the angered dwarf grabbed hold of his armor. Bitrayuul just watched in bewilderment at his mentor’s nonchalance for the unfortunate result of his humor.
As soon as the innkeeper had made contact, however, a deep, rumbling horn could be heard reverberating through the great stone city. Immediately, every dwarf—including Tormag and the disgruntled owner—was up on their feet. Each scrambled together their belongings and funneled out of the building. Bitrayuul was pulled by his adoptive father’s strong hand through the doorway, confusion and concern thick in his mind.
Out in the darkened street, dwarves were pouring from every building and alleyway, donning their armor and weapons before rushing off to the southern part of the city. Bitrayuul had never seen anything like it before. It was as if they were all a part of an enormous machine, each quickly falling in line to perform their role—whatever that was, he could not be sure. It seemed obvious there was some sort of threat, judging by the city-wide alarm and the hundreds of dwarves preparing for a battle.
Bitrayuul turned to Tormag, who had not yet joined his fellow dwarves in their task. “Tormag, what’s going on?” he asked, not hiding the concern in his voice.
The old dwarf just stared dead ahead, watching the flowing army of dwarves rush forward in a stream of steel. “Eh, we picked a bad day to return home, lad, don’t ye doubt.”
The foreboding nature of his tone put a chill in the half-orc’s spine and tugged at his stomach. What sort of threat could make even Tormag waver? Could it be the dragons the dwarf had told him of, or a giant? Fear and trepidation made Bitrayuul’s heart pound in his chest. This was not similar to his simple life in the cave within the forest by any means. Waves of regret at wishing to see the world and its splendors began seeping through him, poisoning his eagerness to explore. Is this the real world? he thought, Constant threat of death and the never-ending fear that each day may be your last? The life of simplicity he had lived started to seem much more favorable . . .
Finally, the rampaging torrent of dwarves had come to an end and Tormag took a few steps out into the street, watching them as they went. He breathed in a deep sigh, then started walking toward the dwarven army that had just left, his boots dragging against the stone with dread.
Even more confused, Bitrayuul jogged a few paces to catch up to his mentor, wondering why he had not simply joined his kin before. “Tormag, what’s going on?” he repeated, growing more and more worried with each step.
Far behind the quick pace of those rushing ahead, yet eyes never leaving them, the dwarf kept trudging forward. “We picked a bad day, son,” he started, interrupted by the booming sound of the city’s horn calling out in alarm once more. “It’s Bothain’s Day,” Tormag finished with a sigh as an enormous, intricate hammer could be seen being lifted into the air, far in the distance.
Bitrayuul stared at the interesting object curiously, hardly able to make out the silhouette in the darkness at such a distance. However, a single flaming arrow soared through the air, a beacon among the lightless cavern, before connecting against the shrine and igniting it. The great, flaming hammer high in the air illuminated most of the city in its flickering light, bringing the roaring cheer of thousands of dwarves.
As Bitrayuul and Tormag got closer, they could see each and every dwarf in a chaotic fist-fight around the shrine. The smell of ale was so strong it stung Bitrayuul’s nostrils even from their distance, still half a league away. Armor and fists clashed against one another, mixed with the cheers and shouts of the festive dwarves taking part in their most favored holiday—the anniversary of their deity’s death.
Tormag stopped in his tracks, still a ways off from the crowd, taking in the spectacle ahead. A tear fell down his cheek as he realized he had missed the last few years while remaining with the orcs in their cave. With an inhale that could rival a dragon before spewing fire, the commander yelled at the top of his lungs and sprinted forward to join his comrades.
Weekly Progress Update
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! (Soon)
This weekend has been busy! There were some long chapters during writing sessions – starting off the weekend with my normal writing time disrupted and postponed (successfully, for once) until the afternoon – and a Christmas get-together with the family. My brother got me a nice little showcase for my book and some prop stands for Book Signing events (image below).
It’s hard to tell how long Book Two will be. So far, I’m up to +75,000 words and still have much to add. Though, 50,000 words is still a lot of time left, so it’s hard to judge. It’s exciting to be so far in, but also a bit worrisome to have so much left to do at this point. I can’t squeeze it all in to keep it under an arbitrary word count – but neither can I make the book 500 pages.
Overall, a productive weekend – with more to come. Thanks to the holidays, I’m off from my day job on Monday and Tuesday the next two weeks. I plan on picking up a writing session on each day, which should add another four chapters, hopefully!
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Writing Prompt: Fail
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Block, duck, parry, dodge. Cormac couldn’t keep up, Chakal’s blades were too fast. His skill too great. The dwarf was losing ground, his shields moving desperately to bat away the elf’s wicked weapons at the last possible moment. As the blade sank into his heart he knew he had failed.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Trinkets
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Its breathing disrupted with the sound of loose stone cracking beneath Fangdarr’s feet. He cursed his carelessness and held impossibly still, waiting for the beast to stir. The orc’s heart pounded within his chest. Every instinct begged him to flee. To run away and find a new dwelling. But Fangdarr did not. He could not. Too stubborn was his pride. Too great his need to prove himself, though no spectators were present to witness. This was his challenge. The true test of strength that he must undergo to know he is fit for this world. At least, that’s what Fangdarr tried to convince himself.
With bravery—or blind arrogance—the orc stepped closer, raising Driktarr high in the air. He disregarded the sounds beneath his feet, thinking only to cull his opponent with surprise his advantage. The stone shards crunched loudly beneath his weight, breaking the enchantment of slumber on the enormous being. As Fangdarr’s axe came down, the monster began to uncurl its limbs.
He did not know what had possessed him in that moment, but his weapon halted a moment before crashing through his victim’s thick skull. The creature looked up at him, concern and surprise in its eyes, wondering at the random appearance of the ferocious orc that sought to bring its end. Fangdarr, despite his self-imagined test for glory and validation, could not bring himself to squelch the life from those dark, gray eyes. For though they belonged to a monstrous creature, he did not feel malice nor hatred toward it, only pity.
Fangdarr lowered Driktarr’s blade to the ground and stared at the creature, as it stared at him. The terrified expression on its face slowly dwindled, replaced by rage. It rose to its full height within the tight confines of the cave, its head nearly scraping the stone above, and eyed the intruder with a harsh scowl. Even at Fangdarr’s impressive size, especially having only seen sixteen winters, the creature dwarfed him. It stood twice his height, with arms as thick as his muscled torso, and a gut doubling his girth. By now, Fangdarr had concluded that an ogre stood before him, as its heavy foot stomped forward, pressing its rage into the rocky floor beneath to show its discontent.
Uncertainty and regret swirled Fangdarr’s mind. Should he have slain the beast as it slept, or face it head on now? The ogre continued to stare at him, as if questioning his presence, though made no move to attack. Fangdarr pondered every action he could take. It seemed unlikely he could best the creature now that it was awake—not within the cave, at the least. He made eye contact with the gray eyes of the ogre. The same eyes that had previously halted his culling strike due to the raw fear that had been present within. Those orbs bore into him with all the demand they could muster.
Fangdarr could not decide the best course of action and time was fleeting with the ogre’s patience. Finally, before his mind could finish the thought, the orc’s mouth blurted, “Hello,” awkwardly. Fangdarr nearly covered his mouth in shock as the words passed his lips. It was too late. In the face of the giant, foul-smelling beast, the only action the orc had taken—after contemplating taking its life—was to greet it.
He watched as the ogre’s eyes continued to see red for many moments. Then, they slowly turned soft and a smile spread beneath, revealing a handful of missing teeth. “Hello!” came the ecstatic reply, much to Fangdarr’s surprise. He had never heard an ogre speak before, but the word came out slowly and somewhat odd, as if the creature’s mind needed time to rummage through its memories on how to speak. The orc wondered if all ogres spoke in such a manner, or if this one was perhaps feeble-minded.
The ogre extended a large hand forward, catching Fangdarr by surprise and forcing him into a defensive position. Its hand remained extended, though its face contorted with confusion, not understanding the seemingly random movement of its guest. “I’m Gub,” it spoke, still smiling, “what’s your name?”
Fangdarr was baffled. Did the creature not realize he had nearly claimed its life? After closer inspection, he believed the answer was obvious. Taking a step forward, he slid Driktarr back into its resting place on his back. His black-skinned hand disappeared beneath the ogre’s as it wrapped entirely around his hand and forearm and shook it roughly. “Fangdarr,” he replied.
Gub clapped his meaty hands together happily and bounced up and down, hitting his head against the low ceiling. After the third impact, the ogre finally looked up, wondering what had fallen on its head and rubbing his skull tenderly. As the ludicrous beast’s gaze fell on Fangdarr once more, it seemed to have forgotten he had ever existed. Its gray eyes lit up with pure joy at the sight of a visitor. Quickly, Gub turned around and started scraping through the small pile of junk it had collected.
“Here go!” Gub exclaimed with excitement, turning back to Fangdarr with what remained of a deer’s skull, though most of the bone had been broken or fragmented.
The orc looked at the ‘trinket’ curiously, then back to Gub’s waiting face, full of childish eagerness. Slowly, he extended his hand and grabbed the mutilated skull and smiled awkwardly to the ogre. He grunted in thanks, as he could not form the words, too lost in confusion at this entire endeavor. Never did he expect to find himself in the company of an ogre—on friendly terms—trading . . . trinkets.
Gub sat and watched Fangdarr hold his new gift with delight etched into every part of his face. Now, he waited patiently, a look of expectation replacing the happiness. Fangdarr caught on eventually—though it took a few moments to discern the odd beast’s desires—and rummaged through the small pouch at his waist. From within, the orc produced a dense, round rock that he had picked up the previous day to throw at birds and knock them from branches. Fangdarr showed the ‘trinket’ to Gub and held it out for the ogre, who’s eyes had once more lit up like the happiest being in Crein.
Fangdarr watched as Gub hugged the small stone tightly against his body, cherishing it as much as a loved one, and gently tucked it beneath the fold of its stomach for safekeeping. With a yelp of surprise, Fangdarr was lifted into the air and pressed against Gub’s chest, who wished to show his newfound friend the extent of his delight. The orc struggled to breath beneath the too-tight squeeze of his ally and gasped for air after being dropped to the ground carelessly.
Breathing heavily, Fangdarr rose to his feet and stared at Gub. “Friend,” he said calmly. One final check to be sure his safety was secured.
Gub flashed his smile once more and breathed a sigh of happiness, blowing gruesome breath into Fangdarr’s face that forced a few blinks. “Friend.”
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Weekly Progress Update
Not much has happened this week outside of writing. I got some Christmas shopping done and had some doctor’s appointments, still waiting to hear back. My wife and I have already told each other what we’re getting for Christmas. I’ll be excited to post one up on here around next week’s update.
Onward to writing! I got a lot done this weekend. Three good chapters that were really exciting to write. I’ve probably mentioned this before, but having two separate storylines in two entirely different settings is really fun. Challenging, but fun. The drastic differences between the two environments can be hard to hop between mentally, but throwing on some appropriate ambiance music helps a lot.
I released the Prologue to Book Two this week as a teaser for what’s to come. It doesn’t go into detail on other events and no spoilers are given, as it actually takes place early in the past, before even Orcblood Legacy: Honor takes place. (Note: This shouldn’t be necessary to say, but it is mature content containing scenes of violence)
That’s about all for this week! I really need to start reading through Book Two’s current progress and make some edits and remind myself of some of the earlier events. This book will probably be undergoing some heavy edits, as I plan to take more time to go through it prior to publishing.
See you next Sunday!
Madness: Prologue
“Elethain, why are we hunting a dragon, exactly?” the elf asked while brushing branches aside, clearly agitated.
“Because, Rotheilan, I am going to enslave it. Our people would benefit greatly from such an asset.”
“As would you, no doubt.” Rotheilan cast a smug look to his older brother, who only smirked in reply.
Eithas, the more skeptical twin of Rotheilan, leaned closer to better hear the conversation. “How are you even going to enslave it?” He was convinced their task would fail yet refused to allow his three brothers to continue without him. Despite Eithas’ unshakable loyalty, he never failed to question their eldest sibling.
Elethain sighed as he halted his march through the thick brush. In his moment of silence, the necromancer stared out through the screen of purplish-blue leaves that restricted most of his view. He could still see the sparkling light reflecting from the surface of the water far below. Their climb up the Eye of Cerenos, the ancient tree near their homeland, Y’thirya, had been more treacherous than expected. Elethain looked to his brothers, each beginning to wither from exhaustion due to traversing the enormous magical growth. Even Idérys, their youngest kin, who was often so full of youthful energy at just a mere two-hundred years old, could be seen dripping with sweat. Elethain had requested they join him in his quest—for the future of their people, supposedly.
Elves had been living on Y’thirya for countless millennia, typically in harmony. However, the elders spoke of a foreboding future. Though they held no mystical knowledge, they believed a great war was fated in the years to come. The date and its cast were unknown, yet they were confident the act would occur. Elethain was not one to believe such prophecies but found advantage in their ramblings. He had heard a myriad of tales of a dragon who rested atop the Eye of Cerenos. As a necromancer, the elf possessed the capability to enslave beings within his domination, to be used as he commanded. In truth, a dragon could aid in their future endeavors. However, enslaving the beast was no simple task.
“Well, we have to kill it first. From there, I should possess the ability to trap it within the Undying Realm where it will answer my call,” Elethain finally responded.
“Should?!” Eithas blurted in surprise. “You mean you are not certain?!”
Elethain smiled. “Should. Once it is dead, I do not expect it to be a problem. However, I have never done so before, of course. The ritual itself is not so difficult, it seems. The struggle lies thereafter.”
“What do you mean?” Rotheilan asked as he casually cut one of the thousands of luscious apples dangling from branches twisted around them with one of his swords. His second sword chopped down another just above his twin’s head, plopping it on his noggin with a dull thud and bringing a smile to each of their faces.
“Once it is trapped within the Undying Realm, it is no longer dead. It would be reanimated and with a constant will of its own. I must maintain control by sheer domination of will. That is how the link is created, master to slave. It can take years—dozens, even hundreds—to ensure complete control. During that time, I cannot risk summoning it to the Living Realm, or it could break the link.”
Idérys pressed further in eagerness, possessing only a lust for excitement and adventure. “What happens if it breaks the link?”
Their youngest brother’s curiosity brought a smile to Elethain’s face. “If the link breaks I can either attempt to maintain a semblance of it in order to reel the slave back in under my control, or I can relinquish it, which would simply eliminate the reanimated corpse.”
Each of Elethain’s brothers had nothing left to say, being far out of the realm of their knowledge—or interest. Unlike their eldest kin, they were warriors of the blade. The twins each favored a pair of swords to strike at their foes, while Idérys preferred the shield and spear. The band rested easily against thick branches as they ate their apples, pondering their task ahead. Elethain had assured his family the task could be completed, though he remained secretly unconvinced. Very few dragons had ever been conquered in the past, let alone reanimated to be the slave of a necromancer. However, he could not deny himself the chance of such a claim. His pursuit of power pushed him to heights others, even those who greatly surpassed his thousand-years of age, dared not risk. The warlock bit into his apple, hoping he could achieve all he desired.
* * * * *
“Elethain!” Idérys called out, his eyes full of terror in the moment the golden dragon’s massive clawed talon swiped at him.
The necromancer watched in horror as his youngest brother was torn apart in a spray of purple blood by the razor-sharp claw. Elethain looked on, trembling in fear, as Idérys’ form spilled its entrails onto the floor made of purplish-blue leaves. His brother’s hollow eyes remained open but unseeing—a sight that would haunt Elethain for the rest of his long life.
Elethain broke from his distracted state as Rotheilan and Eithas bellowed in unison at the fate of their kin. They each stood atop the horns of the drake and pitifully swatted at its eyes with their negligible steel. The dragon roared in annoyance and shook its head violently, throwing them to the ground. Elethain could only watch as the godlike beast turned and retracted its tail, aiming to smash the twins against the ground of its home platform.
As the monstrous appendage came plummeting toward the pair, Elethain conjured a wall of black magic over top of his brothers. Rotheilan and Eithas stared blankly from their prone position as the massive, mace-like tail smashed into the barrier. They cheered to their eldest sibling for saving them. In their excitement, they failed to notice the giant golden tail whooshing through the air once more, slamming into the barrier above. This time they did not cheer, as large cracks appeared in the magical shield.
“Elethain!” Rotheilan called, looking toward his brother who was struggling with all his might to maintain the forcefield.
Beads of sweat poured down the necromancer’s face as he attempted to gather the strength to fortify the shield that prevented his brothers from certain death. “Get up, you fools!”
As if they had forgotten their position, the twins quickly attempted to rise. They managed to turn around and nearly escape before the beast’s tail came crashing down once more—through the barrier.
Elethain watched as the twins faded from view beneath the heavy limb. His gaze could not be averted as the appendage peeled away and revealed the crushed elven warriors cemented to the armored scales. Their once pale skin resembled a massive bruise with blood being pressed through each pore. The necromancer could see bones protruding from their bodies where they managed to pierce the skin. Elethain’s mouth wavered in a feeble attempt to form words.
While words were impossible, noise was not. The elf screamed as loud as he could, pressing all his emotion into a single outcry. Flashes of his brothers’ destroyed forms raced through his mind as he continued to scream. His eyes grew wide in his maniacal state of pain. Elethain reached out to each side with his hands and conjured a dozen large spear-like manifestations of black magic, all pointing to the monster that had eliminated his family.
With another cry of rage and sorrow, Elethain launched every magical spear toward his enemy. They crashed against the dragon’s scales, though could not pierce the hide. The monster started running toward Elethain, its mountainous form shaking the thick branches beneath its feet, determined to eliminate the last of its intruders. As it approached, the necromancer only grew more maniacal. This was it—his moment. Deep inside, he knew the fate of his kin was his own fault, though he refused to accept such knowledge. The demon charging toward him was the cause. There was no regard for Elethain demanding they wake the slumbering beast. To threaten it within its home when all it hoped for was peace and solitude. There was only the conviction that the dragon was the assassin to press the blade, not he.
Elethain roared in denial and forcefully extended his left hand high into the air. As he did so, an enormous magical hand appeared in front of the drake’s face. As the elf clasped his own hand shut, the magical formation followed suit, clamping tightly around the beast’s neck. The dragon roared in anger at being restricted. It thrashed wildly, snapping with its jaws and swinging its tail. It didn’t matter. Elethain kept his hand clenched tightly to keep his prey immobilized while the other shook harshly in the air. To the side of the monster’s exposed neck, a large spear began to form. The shape matched Idérys’ spear, driving Elethain’s pain more. But he needed it. His anguish turned to strength as he felt every emotion running deep through his veins. His body felt empty yet so full of life due to the sorrow. Such an odd feeling. As if one was a shell that contained too much, but nothing could be seen inside.
The necromancer struggled to maintain control of the dragon while also building up a tremendous amount of energy needed for his weapon. Just a bit more . . ..
Then, the dragon stopped thrashing. Elethain’s confusion nearly broke his concentration. The mythical beast stared directly into his frenzied eyes, seeing the pain behind them. The passion, the power, the lust. The golden drake simply maintained eye contact as the spear was launched toward its neck at blinding speed. It never blinked as it telepathically spoke to Elethain. I forgive you.
Elethain’s eyes widened in surprise and quickly turned to sadness as he watched the spear pierce through the dragon’s exposed neck, just behind the jaw and into the drake’s brain. Tears welled up in his eyes and he fell to his knees. The tormented elf cried out in pain as the dragon’s eyes slowly slid closed with a final low exhale. He sobbed uncontrollably as the shining, golden scales that encompassed its body turned to a dull gray, one by one. His painful throbs of woe only grew as he made eye contact with Idérys’ ripped corpse a short distance away. During his channeling, Elethain failed to notice that the dragon’s thrashing caused the twins to be thrown to the side in a shattered heap.
He continued to weep for what seemed an eternity. His brothers had fallen in his quest. His pursuit of power. For a purpose they cared naught. Their only concern had been for Elethain’s safety. His guilt was immense in that moment as the realization struck him hard. Never before had he felt such agonizing pain as his mind assaulted itself in guilt. After many grieving moments, the necromancer finally stood from his huddled-over position and walked over to the dragon.
In the presence of his target, all thoughts of his guilt faded immediately. Too drawn was he to the power at hand. His mind shut out considerations of consequence as he produced the transparent orb in his necklace. Eyes wide with lust, Elethain began channeling the magic needed to absorb the dragon’s faded corpse, trapping it in the Undying Realm and within his pendant. The ritual did not take long. The beast’s corpse turned to a trail of energy and soared toward the orb. Once gone from the Living Realm, the godlike drake could be seen peering around from inside the small globe, fully revived. The orb emitted a bright golden light that resembled its captive.
Elethain pulled the pendant to his face and stared at his slave with a grin. “Hello, Aurum.” The dragon gave no response other than a deep sigh of hopelessness. Not at its own fate, but its captor. The irritated necromancer tucked the necklace away and stared straight ahead to where its corpse had been. All that remained were the trample marks of its previous existence atop the Eye of Cerenos and the mutilated husks of his brothers. He walked to the center of the platform between each of his sibling’s corpses. With little effort, Elethain called upon each of them to heed his call.
The elven warriors began to rise.
Writing Prompt: Captive
Follow along each week for a 50-word Fantasy writing prompt and comment your own responses!
Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, you must write TWO entries (each 50-words), but using the Topic in two separate meanings/themes.
Entry A: Locked tightly within her lover’s embrace, Aesthéa could feel the continual depreciation of her heart’s barriers. She had never felt so exposed and vulnerable. So valued and cherished. Her unlikely companion had captivated her completely, despite the festering knowledge of her kind’s impending disapproval in the back of her mind.
Entry B: She was broken—mentally and physically. Alice could not remember how many moons had passed since she was taken. She only knew pain and the heart-stopping horror knowing there would be more to come. Her terrified gasp and subsequent whimpers only stretched Brutigarr’s smile wider as he entered the tent.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Intruder
Follow along each week for Skirmishes of characters of the Orcblood Legacy Series. These are real events that take place during the story’s timeline but are not detailed in the book.
Poking his head over the last bit of rock in his ascent, Fangdarr peered into the darkened mouth of the cave. It appeared almost villainous. Teeth of stone had been carved over much of the entrance, though seemingly long ago by the wither of the cave’s face. He pulled himself up onto the shallow cliff and looked down to where he had started his climb. It was over twice his height to the hardened dirt. With luck, most trespassers should be repelled by the difficult climb alone—should they notice it at all. It was by sheer chance Fangdarr had glanced upwards, catching glimpse of the shadowed entrance beyond.
As he stood at the brink of darkness, his skin became tighter from the chillness that emanated from within. Fangdarr took a step forward, then another. With each pace the cool air only grew worse, safe from the annihilating warmth of the sun’s light. Not perfect, he thought to himself, but safe. As he took continued deeper into the abyss of the pitch black cave, his fingers sliding along the stone wall and ceiling to guide him, he cursed himself for making such a claim too soon.
Despite the icy cave’s unwelcoming embrace, the orc could hear the rhythmic breathing of a slumbering being further in. He could feel the air around him growing warmer in slight. It was impossible to see the form on the other side of the stone wall, though it had to be large by the amount of heat that could be felt flooding the area.
Fangdarr gripped his axe tightly before taking care to step lightly. Even his heavily calloused bare feet could feel the sting of cold weaken as they made contact with new ground. The orc cautiously peeked around the corner, careful not to scrape against the wall. He nearly gasped aloud in surprise when his eyes could finally pick out the creature ahead, sleeping peacefully.
Based on the form his eyes could see from the emanating heat, he could only assume the monstrosity was some sort of ogre or giant. Never had he encountered either, only the stories of his mentor could help put a name to the hulking mass a spear’s-length away. His mind raced over the few odd tales Tormag had shared. What was the difference between the two? Fangdarr questioned, racking his brain. Finally, he recalled a single discussion:
‘Lad, the thing ye need t’ know about ogres is they be dumber than a stack o’ gnomes. They may be big and can squeeze the life out o’ an orc or dwarf, don’t ye doubt, but they can be bested by playin’ smart. Now, giants, on the other hand, are the worse o’ the bunch from what I’m told. Never seen one meself. From what I hear, ye’ll know one when ye see it. And if ye see it. Run.’
Fangdarr eyed the cave’s large inhabitant with curiosity and concern. It had taken him another two days just to find this place—a delay he did not wish to repeat. His hands clutched the shaft of his marvelous weapon more tightly. He needed this cave.
Weekly Progress Update
Happy weekend! There is a lot to bring up for this week’s update.
Thursday, I met with my local library and discussed hosting a Writing Discussion, which will be taking place on Thursday, May 23rd, 2019. It is quite a ways away, but I’m looking forward to it. They also were gracious enough to accept four donated copies of Orcblood Legacy: Honor, which will be available for patrons to check out within their New Release and Local Author sections.
Later that same night, I went to my grandfather’s wake as he passed away earlier in the week. It was good to see some family that I hadn’t connected with in a while. Also, the word about my book had spread and – to my surprise – many were asking questions about it. A cousin of mine even mentioned his shared interest in writing, and he and I met today to discuss writing. I think it’s something he’ll come to enjoy, as I have.
We had some great discussions about writing and things to consider that don’t often stand out at first glance. Logic, reader perspective, and realism to name a few. Hopefully he doesn’t find it too overwhelming, as many do, and continues with his interest. If not, we’ve all been there, even myself.
Now, onward to Book Two. My health took a hit this weekend, but I managed to get a short chapter in on Friday, and a long one in today on Sunday. Saturday was a bit of a loss, unfortunately. A combination of a decline in my health and my daughter deciding to take her feral spirit to heart. Also, I shot myself in the foot a bit, and didn’t do some research in advance and made a last-minute change in an important part of a new race’s introduction on Saturday. That really hurt the word count, but now all of the details are fleshed out and I shouldn’t run into any more trouble with that particular issue.
As always, I won’t give away too much detail, but Fangdarr is feeling much more at home in the new area he just walked into. That is, until some harsh demands are made and his rage begins to build. Next week’s writing sessions will be pretty eventful and I’m looking forward to them. It’ll really be one character’s time to shine, to say the least. (Disclaimer: Actually, as I just finished writing that last sentence, I decided to make a change in the flow of the story. Woe to the whims of writing.)
Tune in next week!
Writing Prompt: Rot
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Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, you must write about the Topic using the actual word twice. You can alter the word as needed (such as ‘rotting’, ‘rotten’, ‘rotted’, etc.) but must incorporate it two times within the 50-word response.
Prompt: Rot
The stench was repugnant. Pus seeped steadily from the rotten and diseased flesh, bringing the taste of bile to their throats. The bunovir’s progenies feasted endlessly on what remained of their abandoned friend. Even now, the carnivorous harvesters carved their way through the decrepit heap, their stomachs bulging with rot.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Sleep
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He was exhausted. It had been days since the night the trolls had attacked him in his camp. Sleep had not come easy since, with his sense always keen on edge, even while drifting to the brink of slumber. Fangdarr’s body was weary and slow. He walked through the forest, aimlessly, as if his feet were thick in muck. The orc had no direction in mind. No end mark of destination.
The lack of sleep weakened his resolve. It was becoming harder and harder to stifle his trapped emotions regarding Vrutnag’s passing. But still he forced them deeper, hidden beneath the growing frustration of his journey alone. He missed his brother and the old dwarf who had become his mentor. He missed the things he had taken for granted. Sleep. Shelter. Warmth. Yet, his stubborn pride demanded he press on and never look back.
Fangdarr walked through the Lithe in a daze as his body begged for sleep, but his mind spewed rejection at every turn. Finally, on the fifth day since the attack, the orc collapsed onto the rough ground.
Waking abruptly, he scanned his eyes groggily around his surroundings. Immediately he was in a defensive stance, expecting some enemy to be on his peripheral. But after many moments, none came. Fangdarr slowly began to collect his thoughts. Last he remembered, he was lumbering through the woods in the early afternoon, just after mid-day sun’s peak. Now, the sun had just started its ascent for the following day, peeking barely above what little of the horizon he could see through the lattice of trees. He cursed himself as he realized sleep had taken him nearly a full day. Never before had he slept so long.
With luck, he had not been harmed during his unconsciousness and Driktarr remained in place across his back. The orc held no faith in the gods but wondered if he had been watched over or simply spared misfortune by luck. In either case, Fangdarr breathed a sigh of total relief as his arms stretched high in the air, no longer encumbered by fatigue.
His renewed vigor had been more than one of body. Now, his mind was set to task. He would not be ambushed nor caught without shelter and sleep until the weight of exhaustion crushed him into the dirt again. Fangdarr needed to find a suitable home.
Traveling farther south toward the mountains, Fangdarr had settled on the decision to find a cave. If he could manage to find one well-hidden, or at least defensible enough to allow him to repel intruders, he would be safe enough. After all, the cave his family lived in for his entire life had never once been discovered. Though, perhaps being between the Zharnik clan and nearby human villages to the north had dissuaded any of either race from trespassing. Part of him urged to consider returning home where he knew it was safe, but he cast the thought aside. It was time for Fangdarr to forge his own path.
Weekly Progress Update
First, I’ll start by saying that Orcblood Legacy: Honor is officially in its first bookstore! I met with a local shop and they’ve agreed to put the book on their shelves, as well as do a book signing event in early 2019.
My next goal is to try to get onto the shelf of more stores, including the name-brand chains such as Barnes and Noble, Books-a-Million, etc. It’ll be a difficult process that may not prove successful, but I’ll try my best to get Fangdarr out into the world.
If you’d like assist, Orcblood Legacy: Honor is already available on their websites. The more orders they sell on their website, the less risk they consider the investment and the easier it will be for me to convince them that Fangdarr is a ma— err . . . an ORC of the public!
Barnes and Noble
Books-a-Million
As usual, I wrote some more on Book Two this weekend. I won’t give away spoilers, but it’s been a really fun set of scenes to write, with more planned. Let’s just say Fangdarr is far from his homeland and in a world vastly different than his own.
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Writing Prompt: Ethereal
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Special Rules: For this week’s Prompt, you must write about the Topic without using the actual word. Give the impression of ‘Ethereal’ by using synonyms and exposition to paint the picture of something ethereal.
Prompt: Ethereal
The eilfeyn eyed him carefully. Its antlered head raised high with regal splendor, pride emanating from the beast. Its white skin shined vibrantly in the darkness of the wood, appearing heavenly amidst the shadows. Fangdarr waited as the marvelously refined creature stepped toward him, undaunted, its luminous form glowing bright.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Defiance
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The large half-orc towered above the dwarves that had collected to witness the unusual guest. Stares of fear and distrust could be seen on every face, giving evidence to the dwarven stubbornness and fear of the unknown. Bitrayuul did not miss their gazes, but paid them no mind—too enthralled by the dazzling city before him.
As they continued their walk forward—with more than a few curious dwarves trailing—an old dwarf approached. His beard nearly withered all to gray, yet his head still held life, sprouting brown in contrast as it braided into the dullness of his beard.
“Commander Tormag, ye return!” the elderly dwarf spoke in harsh voice, proving his age. Despite the youth gone from his body, the dwarf carried himself with the composure of a seasoned veteran filled to the brim with experience that commanded respect.
“Senator Theiran, a welcome sight! Glad t’ see yer stones yet t’ break,” Tormag replied with a genuine smile. The pair clasped arms in greeting and butt their heads together in respect, drawing a confused look from Bitrayuul. The half-orc could only assume such was customary, though this was the first encounter he had seen of his mentor and another dwarf of standing.
Theiran returned the commander’s smile in kind, truly relieved to see his old friend well. Once his eyes had shifted to the half-orc, the senator raised an eyebrow. “Friend o’ yers?”
“Aye, he’s mine. Taken as me own, sure as stones. I be seekin’ the council’s blessin’ in keepin’ ‘im by me side.”
Bitrayuul watched intently for a sign of disapproval on Theiran’s face. He knew his presence in the city, amongst the many dwarves who were not fond of sharing their culture, would not be a welcome one. Yet, no evidence against Tormag’s request came. Instead, the senator simply stared in silence for many moments at his old friend—gauging his own curiosities. “Ye certain?” Theiran asked.
Tormag did not hesitate in his reply, nodding with confirmation. “By Bothain’s Hammer.”
“I shall speak t’ the council of such request, else ye be met with quick rejection, don’t ye doubt.” With that, Theiran bowed low and clasped his friend’s arm once more before turning to take his leave. After taking a few steps, the old councilman turned his head back to the pair. “What’s the lad’s name, eh?”
Bitrayuul cut off his adoptive father’s words before they could form, replacing them with his own. “Bitrayuul. I am Bitrayuul.”
Theiran nodded, hiding any thought of discontent at the orcish name that certainly would stir distaste within the Council. As he faded from view, Tormag broke the tension rising in the air. “C’mon, Bit, let’s get somethin’ t’ eat. Me belly be screamin’.”
The dwarf behind the counter—and the other dozen patrons within—all rose as Bitrayuul followed behind Tormag into The Emberforge. Their eyes drilled deep into the half-orc, hands clutching the mining picks and hammers at their belts. This was the first time many a dwarf had seen a half-orc at all, and the first one had ever graced their homeland lacking shackles and wounds.
“Hal thild vant gar’thurim,” Tormag stated to the beady-eyed onlookers. Slowly, the furrowed brows of the dwarven patrons began to wane before each turned back to their mugs. Satisfied, Tormag approached the bar, though the innkeeper still employed his scowl as the half-orc struggled to wedge his large frame between the table and stool beneath.
“What be yer drink,” the disgruntled owner stated more than asked, never removing eyes from the young orc-blooded specimen. His gaze never faltered, even as Tormag offered his request for drink. With a grumble, the barkeep grunted and turned toward the store room to retrieve the commander’s brew.
Bitrayuul watched the dwarf stomp away, his stubby legs thundering against the stone floor with heavy boots. Facing his mentor, he whispered, “Will it always be like this? And what did you say to get the others to back down? Why did it not have the same effect on our host?”
Tormag waved the notions away, in no mood to answer such questions in the midst of those who would catch wind of unfavorable answers. Bitrayuul held back his disappointed frown as the innkeeper reappeared, a single mug in hand.
The mug was slid down the slick bar toward Tormag, stopping perfectly in front of the commander. Tormag peered down at the tankard, then back to the owner. With a smile on his face, he slid the brew slowly in front of Bitrayuul, never breaking eye contact with their host.
The dwarf behind the counter—and a few patrons who were paying attention—quickly turned to anger at the commander’s heinous act. Before they could act, Tormag waved his hand in the air nonchalantly and said, “Eh, ‘scuse me, barkeep? Seems I’ve misplaced mine, could ye fetch another? Many thanks, friend.”
Even as he finished the words, Bitrayuul nearly coughed from gasping so harshly. He could see the owner of the inn go red with anger, nearly fuming from his ears. Despite the fire burning in his stomach, the dwarf kicked open the store room door and stormed in before returning with a half-full small iron cup of water. Nearly all of the contents were ejected from the container as it slid viciously down the bar into Tormag’s waiting hand.
The innkeeper held a wide smirk on his face, proud of his petty act of defiance against the dwarf who had disrespected him. Though, the expression washed away as Tormag lifted the cup to his mouth and drank it all in a single, exaggerated gulp before slamming it to the counter in a flourish.
“Ahh, now that’s good! Barkeep, another!”
Weekly Progress Update
Back on track! This weekend’s progress was back to normal, completing a chapter in Book Two each day, for a total of 7,500 words. I’m at the estimated half-way point of the word count I’m expecting for the completion of the story, so we’re trucking along smoothly.
With this week being Thanksgiving, I was worried I would not be able to manage to get my normal output back on track (after the previous two weekends suffering about 50%). However, I was able to buckle down each morning and knock out the chapters.
I was surprised to learn that a few of my extended family members had picked up the book last week. It has some pretty explicit and mature content that they had not reached within the story yet, so we’ll see what their opinion is like once they hit that mark (and the end)!
Also, I’ve got some plans to work on some neat little bookmarks to put around town at local libraries and bookstores as a means of gathering interest. The weekend’s plans have gotten them a bit delayed, but hopefully I’ll have something to show in the next week or two.
That’s all for this week’s update, it’s been a long weekend full of family socialization and early morning intense writing sessions to get back on track. See you next week!
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Writing Prompt: Greed
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Prompt: Greed
Raz’ja cut the ear from the last dwarf he had slain, breathing heavily with exhaustion, before adding it to the rest in the overfilled sack. As the weary troll was about to take leave with his prize, another three dwarves stepped into view, weapons ready. Raz’ja grinned, turning toward them.
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Skirmish (Bitrayuul): Tarabar
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Bitrayuul’s mouth was agape as the marvelous gates came into view, so vast they could be seen even while still at the edge of the Lithe. His march slowed, taking in the grand spectacle, as Tormag continued without notice.
The doors stood the height of twenty dwarves, lined with sharpened spikes and intricate carvings alike. Tormag had often spoken of the artisanal craftsmanship of his kind, though the gates of Tarabar gave evidence to such claims. The enormous steel barrier protruded only just from the base of the mountain, with much more hidden from view.
Tormag finally caught on to his halted son. The dwarf couldn’t help but smile as he recognized the wondrous stare painted on the half-orc’s face as he admired the beauty of ancient dwarven ancestor’s efforts. The dwarf beckoned Bitrayuul forth, breaking the half-orc’s trance. In short time, they stood outside the gate.
“What be yer purp—” the guard started from his station along the top of the structure, a bucket of oil and torch at the ready. “Bothain’s beard . . . Commander Tormag?” he asked incredulously after recognizing the emblems on Tormag’s worn armor.
“Aye, lad. It’s been a bit, don’t ye doubt,” the absent commander replied. “I’ve been busy these past six years, bahaha!”
More dwarves poked their heads over the short wall lining the path atop the gate and shared their comrade’s excitement at the return of their commander. That is, until they noticed the half-orc adjacent their long-lost ally that had somehow escaped their view.
“Have ye been captured?” the first guard asked hesitantly while staring at Bitrayuul. Each of the guards held their vats of pitch more closely.
Tormag looked around curiously, as if some sort of orc or troll army lay in wait along the forest to prompt such a question. Finally, the dwarf caught on to their meaning and he let out a boisterous laugh. “Bahaha! No, lads. He’s with me.” His hand fell to Bitrayuul’s bicep in reassurance—both for the half-orc and the suspicious guards.
The dwarves manning the enormous gate spoke amongst themselves for a moment before two pairs each retreated within the small holes in the mountain on each side to operate the hidden mechanisms and open the large steel doors. Tormag and Bitrayuul both breathed a sigh of relief as the barrier was pulled apart, allowing them entry.
Bitrayuul was met with nervous stares and thick-fingered hands resting upon weapon hilts as he followed his mentor into the city. The spectacle caught him by surprise, for once the light piercing the opening at their backs closed behind them, the city returned to blackness, save for the lining of hundreds of illuminating torches and lanterns. Grateful for the orcish blood running through his veins, Bitrayuul’s eyes shifted, allowing his view to see much better in the dark. What he had assumed was a city in the abyss, lit by only the sparkle of a few embers lining its streets, had turned to a community of grand proportions.
Now that his eyes could better view the city ahead, the half-orc could only look on in wonder. What vastness hid beneath the strength of the mountain stone! The city stretched as far as his eyes could see—and beyond. Each building was carved from the stone, as if they had been built into the mountain all along, waiting for a sculptor to bring them to life. Small abodes, large edifices, and even great structures sporting crafted statues of dwarves of the past could be seen, only adding to Bitrayuul’s awe.
Tormag clasped a hand against his son’s arm once more. “Welcome to me home, Bit,” he said with a smile as wide as ever.
Weekly Progress Update
Grr, another slow week. I’ve been busy with the launch of Orcblood Legacy: Honor and have not put out my usual progress of three chapters per week. However, I was able to accomplish a lot and hope to be back on track at my usual output next week.
This week started the introduction of the new Skirmishes, which I’m really excited for. These are Blog posts that I plan to release weekly and follow the events of a few of the main characters in the Orcblood Legacy series. The events are going to be short-stories that would have been added to the book, and are the real events taking place within the timeline, save for not wanting the book to be 700 pages.
Their purpose is meant to provide detailed experiences and encounters of events that took place during time skips that were not relevant to the story, but still provide a much deeper level of detail into the characters and the events that led them to where they are now.
Long term, I am considering releasing a collection of these Skirmishes as an additional item, most likely in eBook. Otherwise, I may consider releasing an Extended Version with them all worked in to the story. But first, let’s see how they fare and how many I produce to feel satisfied.
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Skirmish (Fangdarr): Trolls
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Fangdarr rolled to his side, unable to get comfortable at his makeshift encampment. Sleep had not come easy since his departure from the only kin he had a few nights prior. The young orc had nearly returned to their home countless times, save for his stubborn pride rooting him in place. Instead, Fangdarr swallowed his tormenting emotions, tossing restlessly each night under the thick canopy of Lithe Forest.
A heavy sigh escaped him, staring at the small specs of whiteness poking through the screen of darkened leaves above. Fangdarr closed his eyes, denying the night their golden glow. As he rest, only the sound of breaths with the rise and fall of his chest and the slow sway of a breeze to be heard, the orc replayed the haunting visions of his mother’s headless corpse falling to the ground at the hand of her human tormentors. Even alone in the wood, the proud young warrior refused to express his true feelings.
His memories were interrupted at the sound of rustling bushes nearby. Fangdarr lifted his head curiously. Most likely an animal, he thought. Soon, the steady sounds of footsteps could be heard, though they were light against the soft ground. Were it not for the occasional twig and crunch of leaves, the orc would never have noticed. Fangdarr was already to his feet, Driktarr in hand and eyes scanning the darkness.
Breaking through the dense foliage came a pair of figures Fangdarr did not recognize. Their smiles widened beneath the long tusks protruding from their upper jaw, spread in wicked eagerness. Despite their sinister expressions, their body language showed no threat. Still, Fangdarr remained on the defensive.
“Eh, look what we got here, Gam’ja. It but a wee orc,” spoke the first in an unusual tone. Fangdarr had heard tell of their kind from Tormag, though had never experienced them himself. Now, he was finally able to confirm his adoptive father’s mimicked accent when speaking of them. Trolls.
“Haha, so it is, Bon’zo. He look a bit lost, ya tink?”
Fangdarr tightened his grip. Their vocal flair seemed contradictory to their intent. It was hard for the orc to understand due to the thickness of the troll’s accents. Nevertheless, he asked, “What you want?”
The intruders looked to one another, then laughed in a shrieking cackle that pierced through the quiet forest. Once their humor had ended, Fangdarr could see the pair of crude, sharpened-stone knives in each of their three-fingered hands. Their expressions only looked more severe as the encampment’s small fire cast flickering shadows over the contours of their stretched skin.
Fangdarr did not wait for his assailants to strike first. He raised his axe and howled with vigorous ferocity, charging for the pair. Gam’ja and Bon’zo returned his roar in kind and took to defensive stances. The orc closed the distance quickly, his powerful legs carrying him with long strides. As he approached, the trolls realized his abnormally large stature but gave no pause. They remained fixed on their opponent, daggers held in reverse grips in wait for their prey.
Just as he had done against the men that had slain his poor mother, Fangdarr planted his foot in the last moment and spun his greataxe in a wide horizontal sweep. Bon’zo managed to put up a dagger to block, but the weight of the orc’s weapon was too great when paired with Fangdarr’s impressive strength. Bon’zo’s eyes went wide in immense pain as Driktarr passed through his ineffective parry and continued to cut a deep gash into his dark-skinned torso. Blue blood sprayed from the wound, painting specks against the orc’s own blackened skin, before the troll fell to the ground.
With the momentum of his strike drained, Fangdarr could not hope to cleave through Gam’ja as well. Instead, the troll’s raised weapons intersected the axe as the creature’s head rushed forward quickly behind. Fangdarr stood a head taller, keeping his neck out of range, but Gam’ja’s tusks rent against the orc’s exposed arm and ripped through his skin. The orc growled at the pain, bearing his fangs. With the daggers still entrapping Driktarr, the troll continued to thrash his head, scraping and tearing more flesh on Fangdarr’s arm.
Fangdarr steeled his resolve and kicked Gam’ja’s knee, dropping him and his blades low. With his weapon free, the orc slammed it down on the troll’s skull just as Gam’ja’s wicked expression had looked up to him. Driktarr embedded straight into the forehead of its victim and deep into the troll’s brain. Fangdarr pushed the axe—and the corpse attached to it—to the ground. He planted a foot against the troll’s shoulder as he ripped his entrapped weapon free, spraying blood and flinging brain matter and bone fragments onto the grass below.
Before the orc could even breathe a sigh of relief, he felt a sharp pain in the side of his thigh. Upon looking down to inspect the source, he witnessed Bon’zo’s wide grin paired with another dagger whistling through the air toward his ribcage. Caught by surprise, Fangdarr couldn’t hope to parry the blow. Instead, he twisted his waist as quick as possible in an attempt to prevent the dagger from hitting its mark. The orc’s brow furrowed in pain as he was only partially successful, feeling the sharpened edge of Bon’zo’s dagger slicing across his skin.
Fangdarr threw a desperate but heavy punch into the troll’s face as he leapt back. Bon’zo stood a short distance away, one dagger still in hand. Fangdarr looked at his thigh and pulled the knife free before tossing it behind him. Now, he stood breathing heavily and bleeding from multiple wounds. His black blood glistened in the light of the fire as it slid down his muscled body. The orc looked to Bon’zo and his eyes grew large in shock.
He had not noticed it before, but the wound that he had landed on Bon’zo’s chest had completely healed. Are their weapons like mine? He could not know for sure. In any manner, his own wounds were starting to take their toll. As Fangdarr was about to charge forward in rage once more, he watched in horror as Gam’ja too started to rise. The creature’s shattered skull began mending itself of its own accord, answering the orc’s previous question. It seemed they needed no weapons to heal them, rather they regenerate on their own—even mortal wounds.
How am I to defeat such opponents? Fangdarr did not have time to ponder as Gam’ja instantly dashed forward—even before his wound had fully mended—followed closely by Bon’zo. The orc waited for his attackers this time, remembering the tactics his dwarven mentor had taught him. His rage was insanely difficult to suppress, but Fangdarr trusted in Tormag’s instruction. Driktarr cocked back behind his shoulder, lying in wait.
Gam’ja closed first, both daggers leading the way in hopes to impale his large adversary. Fangdarr held his stance, his plan in mind. The troll exclaimed in victory as he felt both daggers pierce through the orc’s abdomen all the way to the hilt. But such was Fangdarr’s intention. The orc had chosen to disregard the short-sighted leading troll, expecting the all-or-nothing blow. Fangdarr’s target was not Gam’ja, however, but the trailing Bon’zo.
Bon’zo couldn’t hide his own glee upon seeing his ally’s weapons sink into the orc’s body. In his distraction, the troll failed to notice Driktarr sailing downward into his shoulder, cleaving him deeply and launching him back. The troll’s body fell into the small fire of Fangdarr’s camp and instantly immolated in a raging inferno. Bon’zo’s screams of agony pierced the forest as he rolled on the ground in an attempt to extinguish himself. But it was no use. Within a few short moments, the troll’s corpse halted its thrashing yet continued to burn.
Fangdarr was caught by surprise at seeing the troll conflagrate so intensely. As his wound’s began to heal from Driktarr’s enchantment, the orc realized his opponent’s weakness. Gam’ja’s attention had turned to his friend upon hearing the shrieks of pain. As his gaze returned to Fangdarr, whose wounds were now stitching themselves closed—even pushing the stone daggers out from the orc’s abdomen from the magical restoration—Gam’ja went wide-eyed in terror. This time, it was Fangdarr whose face was etched with the sinister grin.
“Aw no, mon. Please, we was just playin’,” Gam’ja begged, dropping his weapons. As the troll backpedaled away from Fangdarr, he tripped over the burning corpse of his friend. Luckily, the flammable oil that had seeped from Gam’ja’s wounds was only on his head, else he would have suffered the same fate of Bon’zo. He continued his begging and pleading as he crawled away backwards.
Fangdarr stomped forward, a ceaseless harbinger of death in pursuit of its final victim. His wounds were now freshly healed, leaving white scars to contrast brightly against his blackened skin. As he approached the helpless troll, Fangdarr realized just how formidable he was, especially at such a young age. He reached the troll, who had backed into the base of a tree and was now whimpering.
Staring at the pitiful creature in disgust, the orc’s hand clasped tightly around the troll’s throat, stifling Gam’ja’s whines as his airway was pressed shut. Fangdarr carried the troll back toward the fire with ease, despite his captive’s desperate wriggling. Holding the troll in front of his face, Fangdarr whispered to Gam’ja, barely audible over the roaring flames that still licked away at Bon’zo’s charred carcass. “Play time.”
Gam’ja’s eyes went impossibly wide in terror and the bulging pressure building in his skull as Fangdarr slammed his face into the fire pit. The orc held the troll down in the insatiable blaze that had come to life, though eased his grip in order to hear the agonizing screams as Gam’ja was forced to endure his flesh searing from bone.
Orcblood Legacy: Honor has officially LAUNCHED!
Thank you for all of the support and interest, it has been a fun (and brutal, to be honest) ride to reaching the end of Book One in the series.
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See you all on the battlefield!
Writing Prompt: Blood
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Prompt: Blood
Fangdarr shook away the fog shrouding his mind, finally regaining his senses. He looked to his hands, Driktarr tightly gripped—a familiar stench in the air. His vision shifted to what lay below, his elven friend gasping for breath, choking on the thick, purple liquid pouring into his lungs.
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Weekly Progress Update
Whew, this weekend’s progress was slow. I got about half my normal output out due to being sick for most of the weekend, though still made sure to write each day at my normal times.
Despite the slow progress, the content I got done (about 1.5 chapters) was enjoyable. There was a small side plot that was mainly used to solidify a certain aspect of the story (vague, I know) and a fair amount of relationship building between two characters.
Anytime I write about two specific characters and their relationship, my wife goes crazy, begging to see what’s going on. It makes it all a bit more amusing, as it helps when writing the scene(s), knowing she’s going to ‘squeeee’ over the actions that are taking place (vague, I KNOW). In any case, it was a good chance to add more meat to an already budding companionship, as well as add a good amount of background to a character that previously had little.
As I was writing today, I was partway through a chapter and a very important scene that I’ve been looking forward to. My daughter woke up a bit early today, so I had to consider cutting my writing time short. That brings me to a new point that I know a lot of writers aren’t fond of.
When to STOP writing for the day/session?
This is a tough one. I say that because I tend to be at an equal standpoint on two sides, recognizing the benefits of each.
First, in my opinion, it is best to stop writing at a part you’re interested in! You read that correctly. Right when it’s getting good, and you’re itching to add that next paragraph that will make the scene really come together – STOP!
‘Bernard, why in Bothain’s forge fires would I want to do that?’
Because, it will drastically increase your interest on your next writing session, trust me. Many people, myself included, tend to stop at a threshold such as a chapter, a change of setting, or the ending of a scene. I understand that completely, and my organizational compulsions often force me to do just that. However, sometimes, when you end your writing session on a clean stopping point, it can be insanely difficult to motivate yourself to start the next scene.
The last session had a sense of finality to it and now you’re stuck feeling like you’re starting from scratch. What’s the law? Objects in motion tend to stay in motion. Don’t stop the train at the station, stop it at the top of the hill, so the only way to go is forward. Ride that slope all the way down and you’ll find you’re at the station without ever having to start the engines. (Crappy metaphor, we can’t all be writers)
Anyway, I will be the first to tell you that my compulsiveness often gets the best of me and I write until the threshold. Frankly, my standard goal is to write one chapter each day (Friday through Sunday). I’ve started trying to disregard that clean cut and pull myself away at the height of the scene sometimes, as it’ll help me the next day. But, there’s a risk.
Normally, I stop at the end of the chapter. With me trying not to do so, it actually cuts my progress shorter, where I might end it a few paragraphs prior to the end of the chapter, costing me precious progress. Of course, it certainly helps me get started the next day, but then I cut my progress again to do the same. Overall, I lose about 25% progress, or less, for the week. It’s not too bad. Really, this is more for those who are having trouble staying motivated.
Right now, I’m pretty set in my ritual and don’t have motivation issues anymore, so it isn’t too often I do this. But it can make all the difference if you find that you sit down to write and you just can’t get going. Once you get your ritual (that thing I keep bringing up that will help you succeed), you can end your progress wherever you like.
Overall, there are many different ways to get you going and make sure you work at the time you’ve allotted to yourself. There’s nothing more demoralizing than sitting down, knowing you WANT to work and not finding the words.
I’ll bring up a few more tips on staying motivated and making sure when you sit down to work, you actually work, so keep an eye out for future blogs (you can subscribe on the sidebar if you want to be e-mailed any time new content is published).
Writing Prompt: Song
Each week, there is a 50-word Writing Prompt for a Fantasy concept on a forum that is based on a single provided word. I try to do them within the world of Orcblood Legacy, so that I can explore different ways to consider parts of the series.
Prompt: Song
The sepulchral tone emanated deep within his mind, echoing in tantalizing embrace. Fangdarr drifted closer and closer toward the gaping maw, unable to resist its call.
As its prey approached, the phantasmal fiend sank sharpened ivory into the orc’s flesh, feasting with ravenous vigor. And still the sweet sound played.
Want to take part? Leave a Comment with your own response to the Writing Prompt below! Remember: Keep it under 50 words!
Writing Prompt: Dwarven
Each week, there is a 50-word Writing Prompt for a Fantasy concept on a forum that is based on a single provided word. I try to do them within the world of Orcblood Legacy, so that I can explore different ways to consider parts of the series.
I’ve decided to post these in a Blog, and enable Comments, in case anyone else wishes to partake. This was last week’s, so I’ll post this week’s directly after as well.
Prompt: Dwarven
With a hiss of oil as he quenched the blade that had been pounded a thousand times over, Bothain inspected the bright, blue runes that shined from below the blackened surface.
He extracted the masterful creation and leveled it before his eyes—before sliding it beneath the coals once more.
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eBook available for Pre-Order!
Greetings, Fantasy lovers!
Today marks the day that the eBook version is available for pre-order.
After an exciting and challenging road, Orcblood Legacy: Honor is finally up on the virtual shelf.
We are one week away from the book’s official launch November 15th, 2018!
Keep an eye out for a special Giveaway on Imgur this weekend!
Weekly Progress Update
Currently, I am already deep into Book Two of the Orcblood Legacy series (Title pending) – probably around 40%. I started the moment I completed Honor in order to maintain momentum and not disrupt my writing schedule. So far, this has worked very well, as I’m making good progress on the second title before the first is even available.
That’s just the starting point. I plan to hold myself accountable with a Weekly Progress Update, as well as give some tips, details, or any challenges I encountered each week. This is the first!
As mentioned in a previous Blog about staying motivated, I only write on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday mornings between 4:00 a.m. and 6:00 a.m. And that’s it. I have time to write more, but I write for a specific slot of time on specific days in order to keep a ritual. Once I start disturbing my ritual, my writing will suffer.
This week, I added another two Chapters to Book Two that have been really interesting. I won’t spoil any details, but there is one key thing I want to bring up regarding writing that I encountered in this week’s progress.
Introducing New Characters:
Many writers plan on introducing new characters – ALL of them – ahead of time. This is a good thing. It truly is. However, it can also be limiting. I plan events loosely in the beginning, but let the story go where it needs to as I write. Other than a loose outline, it’s all written on the spot. This is especially true for certain characters getting added.
In this week’s writing, I actually introduced two characters that were never planned. There was no thought that went into them ahead of time and the original storyline had no intention of them, or their events, being implemented at all. This is a risk.
Needless to say, there is a reason why writers flesh out characters prior to adding them to a story. I do the same, sometimes. However, despite the risk, I truly enjoy the implementation of characters that were not planned. I’ll explain why.
One of the things I have noticed, is that some writers will flesh out their characters first, then build the events around the characters. This can work, but it feels clunky to me. The world was not created with humans being the reason it is shaped in its way, rather the opposite. Humans evolved due to the way the world works. Writing should be the same.
When you design a character prior to implementation, you inevitably will force that character to be introduced – often in a setting that either may not make sense or in a way that did not fit into the original plan of the story. For example, let’s say your novel is about delivering a magic ring to a volcano (I think this may have been done before . . . but bear with me!). You’ve got the idea in mind for a character that you designed weeks ago sitting on the sidelines screaming, “Put me in, Coach!”
Now, this character may be the coolest, most lethal assassin that can shapeshift into a wolf on a whim and wields a whip with a pistol attached. You’ve taken this character into your Dungeons & Dragons campaign and had a blast. He NEEDS to make a debut in your story, because you are so attached to that character. But how? Well, don’t worry! Despite the fact your party is already at the edge of the volcano, about to complete their quest, we have found a way!
Your characters were at the final threshold, just about to complete their quest with everything going smoothly. But, we NEED to implement Wolf-Whip-Pistol-Man, so instead, the party stops because the slightly pudgy one needs to snack on some bread. This gives the enemy time catch up and attack. But wait! We are saved, because one of the enemies happens to be a secret Wolf-Whip-Pistol-Man in disguise, who traveled far and wide just to aid in our quest! We are saved!
Now, obviously the above is such an outrageous implementation, correct? I agree, 100%. The problem? I actually see writers do this! This is the byproduct of developing a character prior to the world (annnnnnnd a bit of the writer not understanding that you can’t just throw in what you think is cool without careful planning in advance). Instead, if your world is built, the decision to add a character in that exact same outlandish scenario above actually can occur. However, instead of your pre-made character, it can be an orc, or a goblin, or whatever your enemy is. Now, it seems more likely. Give him a backstory and a reason for his treason and you’ve got an interesting character.
This all goes to say that the above is obviously quite an extreme situation, but tries to show the importance of understanding the limitations of building a character beforehand and feeling like you must implement them, even at the detriment of the story.
So, that was quite a long way to say that implementing a character on the spot can have its own advantages, while fleshing out your entire cast before their time can actually damage your story. It’s important to make sure the flow is not disrupted and that everything makes sense. Your characters, their implementation, and the setting in which they are introduced.
Keep an eye out for next week’s Weekly Progress Update!
Writing Tips: Consistency
One of the most challenging – yet most fun – factors of writing Fantasy is Worldbuilding and Character building. Both of these require you to create entirely new, fictional entities from scratch. While this can be both challenging and fun, it comes with its own risks.
First, it’s important to take notes. Always, always, always. When I was writing Orcblood Legacy: Honor, I lost my notes along the way as I kept putting the book aside over the years. When I came back to it, I would try to recall what I wrote, or skim through the reading to get the necessary details. I’ll explain how well that worked below:
Crepusculus’ Lair Placement:
2012 (Start of Book): Eastern corner of the map
2013 (After dropping the book for a year): Western corner of the map
2014: Eastern corner of the map
2015: Eastern corner of the map (yay! still in the same spot)
2016: Center of map (What? Why?)
2017: Eastern corner of the map (This is getting a little old)
2018: Western corner of the map
After doing the diligent review, I realized that the Lair needed to be in the Western corner of the map. I had no idea how I managed to get it in the Center, let alone constantly returning it to the East (it made no logical sense to be East).
This is where consistency comes into play. If I had not went through my review and followed the logic of where the Lair should be, it would have completely destroyed the whole story. I won’t go into details, but perhaps if you read the book you’ll understand what I mean. But, trust me, this book would have failed entirely if I had left the Lair in the East. You know how people constantly bring up plot holes on even famous works, such as Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter? Where they’ll let the extent of the internet and all its inhabitants know that the single fact they mentioned uproots the entire story? Yeah, this would have been that.
Needless to say, sticking to your facts and keeping them straight are important. This goes past Worldbuilding and is really prominent in characters as well. Often a character that has a certain trait or appearance will change in your mind, or as you write them. I’ll give a few examples of things I struggled with throughout writing the story:
Inconsistencies of Characters:
1. Cormac originally had hair, but a clean-shaven face. Now, he’s bald with a beard (which I prefer). Additionally, his eye-patch had shifted eyes a few times (maybe that eye was just a little tired and wanted some shut-eye, pun intended).
2. Elethain had black hair, but it was changed to be a golden white.
3. Blood Color. This was a big one. I actually had to make a list (after completing the book and while writing a portion of Book Two, then going back and making sure Orcblood Legacy: Honor was consistent – it was not) of all the different blood colors of the races and creatures in Orcblood Legacy. Black, blue, purple, red, blackened-red, etc. Sometimes I would wound an enemy that had black blood and say the crimson painted the grass – which would not be true.
Consistency is key. Obviously, that’s the point of this post. However, my goal is to show just how easy it is to overlook some of the minor details. I certainly made many mistakes that were found later (which is why it is important to review your work). One thing to keep in mind, is that while they are easy to miss while you’re writing, your readers will not. You are writing over a long period of time, mostly. It is a long road to complete a book – one that will be done piece by piece. Details will be forgotten as you wait until your next writing time, or even six months later when your character(s) finally encounter the same minute detail, such as the color of an ogre’s blood. However, your readers are going through the book much more quickly, so the details are fresh in their mind.
All in all, as a writer, you WILL make mistakes. You will. And that is okay. It’s better to catch them before print, of course, and that’s where review comes into play. But any details you can keep consistent as your writing just decreases the risk of letting out that one minor detail that can send your book from a fantastic story to a logically-flawed catastrophe.
Get yourself a notebook, a whiteboard, or even open up Notepad on your computer and start documenting (I do all of the above and still will miss minor details if I’m not paying attention or reviewing my notes constantly). Don’t let your months (or years) of effort bringing your vision to life be cast aside by a single line of text that readers will use to haunt you forever.
Writing Tips: Staying Motivated
Any aspiring author knows there are times where continuing with your story gets difficult. You make excuses. You lose interest. These are facts of the trade (and really any hobby/interest) that threaten accomplishing your goal.
I will be the first to admit that Orcblood Legacy: Honor did not come without its struggles. I started writing it in the summer of 2012. The first 30,000 words were written in two weeks. My interest was insanely high, and there was no stopping me. Or so I thought.
After that intense, highly productive introductory period, everything died off from there. I made excuses. I lost interest. Though, I always hated not being able to push through. Always.
Each subsequent year, I would randomly get the interest renewed to wish to finish the story. It was a lifelong dream to write a novel, and Fangdarr’s story was the one I knew I wanted to tell. Each year, when I picked up the abandoned husk that I had left, I reviewed all the previous work to get reacquainted. Unfortunately, by that point, I had managed to lose interest by the time I read through and lightly edited my progress–typically only adding another few pages once I had caught up.
Finally, in December of 2017, it was enough. You reach a point that you realize your mistakes and you buckle down. This time, I picked up the story again and told myself to continue.
This time, I did. I pushed through. So, what changed? To be honest, nothing. And everything. I started the exact same way as I did before–reading through all of my previous work. This time, rather than a light edit, I went deep. Every line went through intense scrutiny that was not done in the previous six ‘edits’ that were performed over the years my story lay dormant. It was dreadful and tedious, I can’t lie. There’s a reason (many, rather) that I am an author and not an editor. Nevertheless, I found a vast amount of errors from picking apart my writing at a nearly molecular level.
Inconsistencies, plot holes, everything. Littered everywhere. I fixed dozens and dozens of issues and re-wrote any plot holes I found. If you are stuck on your In Progress novel and are having trouble staying motivated – start here. Go through the grueling task of rigorous self-editing. It sucks. It really, really does. But if you can trudge through the muck, I promise you’ll be better for it. Both your story and yourself.
So, where is my Writing Tip, Bernard? I know, I know, get to the point! All of this background is important to show that I know first-hand that motivation is a killer of novels. It doesn’t matter how beautiful your story may be if it never makes it onto the page. Ideas are endless, execution is where you make your name.
In addition to doing a self-edit that made me realize my story wasn’t the shining pinnacle of beauty that I thought, I set myself on the path of success. Here’s the tip, the key to success. Habits.
Writing is no different than practicing an instrument, working out, or even learning to draw. It takes practice. Ritualized, chore-like practice. Practice needs to be habitual. Build the habit and stick to it. Set a time that you can write, undisturbed, and stick to it. I write between 4:00 a.m. – 6:00 a.m. three days a week, and that’s it. This is the only time I get while the family is still asleep. My shining window of opportunity.
Let me tell you, the decision to get out of bed at 4:00 a.m. on my only days off of my day job can be difficult. Even this morning that I’m writing this post, my daughter woke my wife and I up twice with blood-curdling screams. Last night was just miserable. Yet, I woke up at 3:45 (15 minutes before my 4:00 a.m. alarm) and rolled out of bed. I started the coffee, gave the cats their weekly treats, checked my e-mails, then got to writing. I will do the same tomorrow on Saturday. I will do the same the next day. And then I will do it all over again starting the following Friday. Because this is my ritual. The habit I’ve formed that allows me to progress through the Orcblood Legacy series. I make good, steady progress every week that I look forward to throughout the week (even though I know it means waking up in the cold mornings and sitting alone in my kitchen to write).
So, there it is. Build your habit and stick to it. Like anything else, you will see results as long as you continue. Set your schedule and designate a slot of time that suits you (I only slot six hours per week, where I actually end up writing about four). Stay on that schedule. It doesn’t matter when it is, as long as you can continue on the same time every day you schedule to write and you can do so without distractions.
Paperback Proof Copies!
Today is the day!
My Paperback proof copies just arrived and they’re awesome. I’m really impressed with the Print-on-Demand service. The cover has a leather-like feel that adds a lot of stability and grip that I love. The bindings turned out okay, with only a little bit of variance in the print cuts.
It’s pretty awesome to feel the book in your hand for the first time (even if it’s stamped with an annoying ‘NOT FOR RESALE’ across the cover). All the effort put into the novel is finally tangible in my hand and there’s nothing but pride and eagerness.
Welcome!
Thank you for your interest in the Orcblood Legacy series! Publication is scheduled to be mid-November 2018 for Orcblood Legacy: Honor, and mid-2019 for the second installment in the series.
This Blog will provide updates, pieces of information, and other details that may not be in the books.
Please feel free to contact me with any questions or feedback, I am glad to hear from anyone!
Don your armor and tighten your grip, I’ll see you on the battlefield.